MuRcInAl vs Evo
 

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MuRcInAl has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:53 PM.

waitin for evo to accept this battle then drop..........

i swear this man is so scared.................................

Evo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 05:12 PM.

Voted For: Evo


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I'm Sorry About This Guys..

Murcinal I'll Have Strobe Fix The Poll..

~R~

Voted For: MuRcInAl

Evo's a shame, i "pissed on/piston" many emcees,so ur the next lame..
Because Murcinal is knows to create chaos like "rioted nba games"..
6...decent bar, gud wordplay as always!!
I'll throw your weak bars "coast to coast" like international exchange..
Yea Evo used to have a "W"....But the he recieved a name change..
5...nah!! "W" lines are played like fuck!!
Fags is Boastin, Your secrets open, oversized egos are for gays..
Cuz he brags about an award that he hasnt won...in da past 221 days..
4...weak, not feelin the gay shit or awards lines - played!!
The words that you disperse are at our worst, so wit yo lines, stop reproducin..
cuz i aint talkin bout "purchasin cd's" when i say i got the best of "evolution"..
7...LoL!!! decent punch here!!
My flows instill, Evo drops rhymes.......but then NOBODY feels..
cuz the last time Evo "kicked a hot track" he almsot broke his hotweels..
9...LMFAO!!! this bar was fuckin dope as hell!!!

OVERALL: 31/50


ur just wack kid.. face it.. my punches will scrap ur skin
& I know that this hoe.. has hot flashes that are cooler than him
4...not feelin this opener!!! seems like forced filler!!
leave ur faced bruised up.. & I’ll slam ur rhymes against the wall
practically knock the skills out of u.. but they never existed @ all
6...aight punch here, 2nd line was gud!!
we all know that ur not good Oz.. well I know that.. & that shits true
cuz.. RV knows the fact that if I fell.. I will only land on u
6...another decent punch!!!
u claim we on the same ship.. but I’ll just throw ur ass in the brig
but tell me this.. why are u the only RV member..
.............................with a cartoon network show.. in ur fuckin sig?
4...not really a punch!!! and gundam wing kicks ass!!
Oz is on my dick.. like me & the homo just fuckin met
& if I pretended to jump off a cliff.. this fag’ll just follow my footsteps
4...gay lines are played son!!!!

OVERALL: 24/50

aight, i gotta go with Oz on this one, had some played lines but the last two bars were dope, especially that one about the hot wheels shit!!!! Evo, had some played concepts and some filler, had a couple of decent bars but wasn't anything HOT!!! so Oz takes this battle!!!

V/ - Oz (aka Murcinal)

RTF!!! check battle stats for links, sorry i am lazy!!! :thumbup:

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how did that lay-text voice get deleted???.................

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upps like my vertical leap.................................

uupin this folks....................................

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This was feedback posted for Evo
 

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

oz:
Evo's a shame, i "pissed on/piston" many emcees,so ur the next lame..
Because Murcinal is knows to create chaos like "rioted nba games"..
^^^I DONT KNOW WHUT U WERE TRYIN DA SAY BUT I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE DIS
I'll throw your weak bars "coast to coast" like international exchange..
Yea Evo used to have a "W"....But the he recieved a name change..
^^^^DECENT
Fags is Boastin, Your secrets open, oversized egos are for gays..
Cuz he brags about an award that he hasnt won...in da past 221 days..
^^^I DONT KNOW IF DIS IS A PERSONAL..IT WAS KIND OF WEAK THO
The words that you disperse are at our worst, so wit yo lines, stop reproducin..
cuz i aint talkin bout "purchasin cd's" when i say i got the best of "evolution"..
^^^LOL I GOT IT...GOOD PUNCH
My flows instill, Evo drops rhymes.......but then NOBODY feels..
cuz the last time Evo "kicked a hot track" he almsot broke his hotweels..
^^LMAOOO...DAT WAS A HARD CLOSER FAM..VERY ORIGINAL

evo:
ur just wack kid.. face it.. my punches will scrap ur skin
& I know that this hoe.. has hot flashes that are cooler than him
^^^UHHH DECENT
leave ur faced bruised up.. & I’ll slam ur rhymes against the wall
practically knock the skills out of u.. but they never existed @ all
^^^^NO
we all know that ur not good Oz.. well I know that.. & that shits true
cuz.. RV knows the fact that if I fell.. I will only land on u
^^^LOL...WHUT???? U SHOULD GET BANNED 4 A WEEK 4 SAYIN DIS
u claim we on the same ship.. but I’ll just throw ur ass in the brig
but tell me this.. why are u the only RV member..
.............................with a cartoon network show.. in ur fuckin sig?
^^^I DONT KNOW HOW U FLOWED DA SECOND LINE IT WAS 2 LONG AND DA PERSONAL WAS WEAK
Oz is on my dick.. like me & the homo just fuckin met
& if I pretended to jump off a cliff.. this fag’ll just follow my footsteps
^^^OKAY..LOL...

V/OZ....DIS BATTLE WAS VERY WUN SIDED...EVO TRIED 2 BE FUNNY WHICH MADE HIS VERSE REAL WACK NO PUNCHLINES,META'S PERSONALS

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

ur just wack kid.. face it.. my punches will scrap ur skin
& I know that this hoe.. has hot flashes that are cooler than him
^^decent.......setup needed work
leave ur faced bruised up.. & I’ll slam ur rhymes against the wall
practically knock the skills out of u.. but they never existed @ all
^^koo....kinda basic thou
we all know that ur not good Oz.. well I know that.. & that shits true
cuz.. RV knows the fact that if I fell.. I will only land on u
^^ok, setup was ramblin thou
u claim we on the same ship.. but I’ll just throw ur ass in the brig
but tell me this.. why are u the only RV member..
.............................with a cartoon network show.. in ur fuckin sig?
^^not feelin it
Oz is on my dick.. like me & the homo just fuckin met
& if I pretended to jump off a cliff.. this fag’ll just follow my footsteps
lol, funny shit, decent closer..
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overall you had a perdy consistent verse alot of flip wit as i call it..your setup n punches would benifit from being a little more complex but overall you had a solid drop here..
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Evo's a shame, i "pissed on/piston" many emcees,so ur the next lame..
Because Murcinal is knows to create chaos like "rioted nba games"..
^^decent opener but punch lacked
(does it connect to you)
I'll throw your weak bars "coast to coast" like international exchange..
Yea Evo used to have a "W"....But the he recieved a name change..
(Evolution...U + upside down n = w)
^^not overly feeling this bar
Fags is Boastin, Your secrets open, oversized egos are for gays..
Cuz he brags about an award that he hasnt won...in da past 221 days..
^^nice personal
The words that you disperse are at our worst, so wit yo lines, stop reproducin..
cuz i aint talkin bout "purchasin cd's" when i say i got the best of "evolution"..
^^nice....
My flows instill, Evo drops rhymes.......but then NOBODY feels..
cuz the last time Evo "kicked a hot track" he almsot broke his hotweels..
^^koo, lol...decent punch
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decent verse, there was a couple bars i wasnt feelin n i thought really werent effective but the personal n nameplays were nice n mostly original........
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i gotta go with oz here his shit just connected better
cuz it was more personal but evo had a nice verse too.
could swing either way, very close battle...props

Voted For: MuRcInAl

this was an easy battle for Oz


Oz - ur first couple of barz were really confusing..the pistons one was ok but still a little unclear..the 2nd bar wasnt very good at all..i liked how u used his award as a personal..very creative..the closer i think is what really killed him..very good.....7/10




Evo - ur verse was not very good at all..i really didnt feel any of those lines were worthy of being called punches..they were not creative..ur opener was horrible..and the sig line?..nope..not very good with punches, or personals or wordplay.....3/10




Murcinal(Oz) wins!!!!!

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upping homies......................................

Voted For: MuRcInAl

Astropse-Flowed stayed good throughout the whole thing.And have you seen the Pokemon and dragonballz herbs here.They have a cartoon network show in they sig too.Ur best lines were the last one and the one bout fallin and landing on him.

Evo-1st 2 lines were dope and yes....they connected.Dope personals too...speccially the one about braggin about award he hasn't won.This was one of em best verses I read on this site.Every line was decent.U kill Evo.

Vote-OZ(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552

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This was feedback posted for MuRcInAl
 

werd, nice battle yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Voted For: Evo

yoo vote has to go 2 ...Apostrophe ...good punches here....
IP:


ur just wack kid.. face it.. my punches will scrap ur skin
& I know that this hoe.. has hot flashes that are cooler than him
leave ur faced bruised up.. & I’ll slam ur rhymes against the wall
practically knock the skills out of u.. but they never existed @ all
we all know that ur not good Oz.. well I know that.. & that shits true
cuz.. RV knows the fact that if I fell.. I will only land on u
u claim we on the same ship.. but I’ll just throw ur ass in the brig
^^^^^^^^^^^
good stuff...... had better flow than the otah dude.. and ...structure...... punches were harder hittin...well done.. return the favour in the battle below aiight....

fuck the guy hu mocked the psitons...bitch lick ballz

Voted For: MuRcInAl

suck my dic..........................................