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Zechariah vs Ca$per
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 05-10-05 at 10:35 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Zechariah has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 10:11 PM.
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He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist
I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper* *Casper As In I'm Gone Like Niggas Say Ghost Meaning There Leaving Yee |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 10:13 PM.
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imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book.....
new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook...... u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan..... quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan.... kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin..... and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin.... |
Voted For: Zechariah
cas haha man ya shit never made since bruh, try get yo shit up man you need to get better vocabulary with them wack ass rhymes yo, you also need rhyme scheme like other nigg, man try and get better shit your structure was terrible, over all you need to elevate Zech ha ha nice verse man you had some hott lines here it made since unlike the other dudes verse you had some nice use in multi's which was an upper hand in this battle plus your structure was neat and clean, you had some okay vocabulary pretty good for a new guy, try to elevate on punches though good verse man |
This was feedback posted for CA$per
lol ... check'n pollz.. ............,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,
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shut tha up fukk i didnt try at all in this shit newkid battle me then well see
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Lol If You Knew Who I Was And I Was To Spit Punches You Would Of Bin Melted Cuzz
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like i said alias...............fuckin pussies people that i would say no to normally cause its an easy win for them your fuckin pathetic
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Lmao I Gave You Chance Prick I Spit Newb Style So Go Jerk Yourself Of, Aha Ha Ha
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
casper youd get my vote if was voting....
the structure of your rap was good... Z....nice finisher though |
Voted For: CA$per
imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book.....
new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook...... —decent u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan..... quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan.... —weak here tho kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin..... and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin.... —pretty decent here He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid —weak punch I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid —decent Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper —nope, 2nd line lost it overall – CA$per I know this isn’t ur best here, cuz both verses were pretty wack tho, but I think CA$ took this one though, just had a little edge of it in here, and Zech, ur last bar was the one that lost it though, but really elevate, seriously though RTF CA$... or this vote gets removed!! Removed by poster's request |
Voted For: CA$per
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Ehh.. this was a decent drop..it could have been alot better if you used some more consitant punchlines..maybe a couple personals... it was overall good , but it could have been alot better.. learn to use more harder punchlines... your flow was okay ...structure was decent ... Overall pretty average verse.. keep it up Quote:
This was a pretty weak drop ya first line in ya opener was good then it died... if you kept it consitant you would have won... next time yuse btter punchlines.. a couple of personals... overall elevate ..seen you do better... but to me i think cas took this one to me he just came alittle harder Vote- Cas |
Voted For: CA$per
Zechariah He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid Wack...3/10 I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid Forced as hell...3/10 Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper* Self Glory...4/10 Overal: 10/30 kid~ca$ imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book..... new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook...... Meh...4/10 u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan..... quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan.... Nah....4/10 kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin..... and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin.... Kinda Played...6/10 Overall: 14/30 Vote: kid~ca$ |
Voted For: CA$per
kid~ca$: imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book..... new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook...... ^coo opener, personal one u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan..... quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan.... ^nice wordplay right here kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin..... and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin.... ^coo closer Solid drop right here, stayed nice consistent with wordplay turning it into punches, got few personal touches in there and ya flow be very good. Structure's coo as well as ya vocab. Zechariah: He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid ^first line dope personal, second self-glorification I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid ^wordplay's nice Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper* ^coo closer In every bar you had a different strong aspect, first en last nameplay but self-glorification too, second bar focussed on wordplay. Good punches, not always too creative but aight. Flow was so-so, vocab was better and structure was coo...rhyme words were more complex than usual battles on here... |
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Voted For: CA$per
Casper= Pretty Good Verse, Much More Consistant Wit'da Disses & Punches, More Creative Wordplay In Ya Verse 2, Pretty Decent Verse, Nuthin Dat Really Caught My Eye, Ur Ideas Wuz There, Juz Da Wordplay In Which U Use Ur Ideas Need 2 Be More Creative, Styll It Wuz An Iight Verse U Got Da Win Fa Sho Daaawg! 22/50. Good Job! Zacheriah= Poor Verse Dawg, Where Da Personals? & Da Punz? U Got Sum Iight Mettas, But Da Wordplay Iz Non Existant, U Used Da Word ''Kid'' Lyke 7 Tymes In Yo Verse Dawg, Twice In 1 Line! Try Not 2 Say It Az Much, Takes Da Sting Out Ya Flow, & U Played Off Hiz Name Twice, Wuznt Feelin Dat & It Seemed A Lil Uncreative, Not Da Best Verse In Da World Dawg 11/50 Return Da Vote In Da Link Below Or Vote Will Be Removed, Good Job Kid-Cas, U Got Da Win Fa Shooo http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=193452 |
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Voted For: CA$per
He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid 4...weak, that shit with the pope was weak and the whole ghost's dont exist is false, cuz that is down to personal opinions so shudn't be used as a punch. I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid 5...better, but still not good, the first line was nice, but the 2nd was not a real hard punch. Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper* 5...an ok bar, not worded that good, cud be better, but ok and the setup was weak. OVERALL: 14/30 imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book..... new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook...... 4...weak man, the first line was setup nice but then you switched concepts in the 2nd and made a weak punch. u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan..... quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan.... 5...ok, this wasn't all that good, but i give you props cuz of the klan line, i find them funny. kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin..... and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin.... 6...LoL!!! john cena is pretty wack, nice little concept used and the punch was pretty cool cuz it went with the shit he said in his verse about guns. OVERALL: 15/30 werd.... pretty weak battle... zechariah came with weak punches, some played shit to cas wasn't all that hot either but was more consistent with harder hitting punches. V/ - kid~ca$ RTF!!!! any battle in my sig that is against a non-crew member......:thumbup: |
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