Murdz vs the metaphor
 

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Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 07:10 AM.

the metaphor has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 09:34 AM.

your shits prewritten and your structure more fucked, than pornstars/
you beating me in battle kid ha you pullin my string like,broke guatairs/

ya flows whack and your punches are worn out like,hand me downs/
take the rz out your name and you MUD like,wet pitchers mounds/

you was never LYRICAL so how the fuck you calling yourself the PRODIGY/
and you can get MURDerd collector style,that means Ima do it hobboly/

you failed to realize you was one step from being beat,like eggs/
I'm know for bringing tradgedy to the audeince like,shakespear plays/

i'll add a minus to record book,like working wit intergers in class/
and i'll leave this L runnig through your mind so much,it'll give you whiplash/

uppppin thisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

qoute(You say im a respectable vet)
I never said that false personal's are very gay
And what dick ryders do I have damn dude whats with the false statements

oh and when do I just free post

lol im allowed to use fake personals... they add to my verse.. so stop cryin bitch

and yeah i seen u freepost before.. so dont worry bout that.....

I cant belive you just said that I'm sure everyone would agree that false statements are gay yout flows weak
99% of its fake what a bitch

Voted For: Murdz

your shits prewritten and your structure more fucked, than pornstars/
you beating me in battle kid ha you pullin my string like,broke guatairs/
^no.....bad opener..
ya flows whack and your punches are worn out like,hand me downs/
take the rz out your name and you MUD like,wet pitchers mounds/
^????
you was never LYRICAL so how the fuck you calling yourself the PRODIGY/
and you can get MURDerd collector style,that means Ima do it hobboly/
^it was going good untill the end...
you failed to realize you was one step from being beat,like eggs/
I'm know for bringing tradgedy to the audeince like,shakespear plays/
^bad closer...it was forced..

^elevate..

overall:6.3/10
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Metaphor ain't gonna Be Shit after I slice-him-into-sections
bitch i got twice as many posts and I got twice-as-much-respect-son
^ummm no....bad opener..
you says "I'ma respectable vet" - shiiiiit, I'll be burnin'-this-liar
your wordplay's so "played out" I think your "verses-are-tired"
^ok.....
all the "dickrydaz" you got, I'd swear you were gettin "votes~from~faggots"
you post shit for no reason just to boast~your~status
^decent...
I'll smack-this-wanna be "vet" who demands-respect
your punches are like your Internet service - "Sorry, can't-connect"
^umm no...
I think your "spits are cheap" cuz they're "spoken~poorly"
I got this bitch to the point that he'll be votin'-for-me!!!
^so-so closer

^elevate.

overall:7.5/10

battle was overall basic..nothing speical..~1~

that wasnt my closer you left a line out

comeone upppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upppin dissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

uppppin disssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: Murdz

The metaphor- hmm a few played concepts in there but not to bad eggs and plays doesn't rhyme. Structures fine. It's not necassary to put "/" at the end of a line and separate your bars. Nothing really hard hitting in your verse

Murdz- Nice flow here. Your punches were more hard hitting than Meta's. You had a few filler lines though. I liked this line best.
"your punches are like your Internet service - "Sorry, can't-connect"

My vote goes to murdz due to the fact that his punches and his flow was better.

Return the favour plz

thanks yo................. upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Murdz

Murdz- Flowed good, a little bit more creative, good structure, decent punches...

The metaphor- Ok metas, though some played concepts, punches were more direct, and flow was decent...

Punches::: The metaphor
Flow::: Murdz
Wordplay::: Murdz
Metaphors::: The metaphor
Wordplay::: Murdz
Creativity::: Murdz
Structure::: Murdz

Final Vote::::: Murdz :::::

tahnks aurora and chief.... upppin dissssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: Murdz

He killed this nigga. no need 2 explain. but the best line 2 me were

you says "I'ma respectable vet" - shiiiiit, I'll be burnin'-this-liar
your wordplay's so "played out" I think your "verses-are-tired"
all the "dickrydaz" you got, I'd swear you were gettin "votes~from~faggots"
you post shit for no reason just to boast~your~status
Niggas do do that tho. Thas my vote. EZ