Da UFC vs smokey817
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 05-13-05 at 02:47 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

shit it whatever
 

but i new and what the fuck does No Recycling,No Biting mean

smokey817 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 02:36 AM.

nigga I come threw like Da UFC i'm the ultimate champ i'm da heavyweight u da lightweight i hit u with my flows it will be like a low blow I'm so remarkable upper cut,jab,din a hook now ya ass is shook one more hit ya ass is out down for tha count 1 2 3 fuck da rest 10 u lost ur belt to me I'm tha undisputed champ i hold that spot like a clamp it didn't even take 1 round and ur ass is already down for dat knockout i'm out holla back

sup
 

when u spittin nigga and what is no biting and is there any or crazy shit on this shit this fucking site is confusing

shit i won't be on for a few days

Da UFC has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 08:08 PM.

You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit

yo homie, you aint got shit dawg fo real

That Was Tight Homie And Iain't Got Shit On U Nigga It Is Easier To Spit 2nd And I'm Ranked 817

This was feedback posted for smokey817
 

shit bother of u where alright but i like i hit u with my flows it will be like a low blow

^ id merk you dawg fo real :shoot:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin dis fo some mo votez fa real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Da UFC
 

checkin polls bitches...

Voted For: Da UFC

Pretty weak battle but Da UFC gets this cause he had a few weak punches. Smokey you need to read a few battles and learn to structure your verse.

thanx fo da the votez dawg.

holla at me homie!!

Voted For: Da UFC

LoL Nice
vote>>UFC
wordplay>5.5/10
scheme>6/10
punches>7/10
Mr.Smoky
wordplay>3/10
scheme>??/10
punches>0.10

This was feedback posted for smokey817
 

weak battle...Checking polls..........

Voted For: Da UFC

Aii This Battle wasnt All dat lemme show you

You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
1st Line ..>Sucked ...second line made me laugh
Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
1st Line....>sucked Second line was Aii
Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
Ok Verse in Total Your first lines werent all dat good you need to work on having your 1st line lead into your second line which is your pucn which will make You pucnh much stronger

Smokey817
..................> Wack <......................

And DonT take it to offense when I say

Give up Your Rap Life

Voted For: Da UFC

-Da UFC-
You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good opener, 1st line was a little weak

Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good wordplay, just not hard enough

Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
^^^^ 6/10 1st line is a self glory setup, wasnt feeling the hit, not a good closer

22/30 = %73


-smokey817-

smokey i can't vote using a percentage cause i cant find ya bars or lines...what i can say
nothing rhymes, a lot of self glory, hits weren't hard, structure was bad...sorry

no hate, just honest opinion



Vote: Da UFC

thankz fo da votez homiez!

i appreciate dat shit fo real!!!!!!!!

Voted For: smokey817

didnt really like either of these verses. but, this one seemed better to me.

roflz, dis dude aint know what hes talkin about fo real