Armada Da 187 vs Ackrite
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-11-05 at 07:00 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 06:31 PM.

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 06:41 PM.

After I completely destroy you, you'll accuse me of theft
u used all the info in my profile already, you got nuttin left
You suckin cock 24/7 guess thas why you so damn cocky
You ljotfranticly, written on ya pad,thinkin of punches quickly
Ack thinks he's pimp, But im on ya game, I know all boutchu
You run round wit 10 year old girls, they dont even want you
pfft aint shit boy, when it comes to rappin, talent passes ya ya rhymes are old and wasteful, like ya moms when i fuck her
Prewritten ya lyrcis n a hurry, cuz u cant drop on a dime
Since you think u better then me, ill crush u, n waiste my time
My Lyrics give ya headaches, put u n depressionm ya dooch
I bes take it easy on you, or ill get charged wit child abuse
You strait crazy, a test tube baby, got no game, illeterate
Ill drag you down and snuff u out, like a marlboro cigarette
My lyrics will convert you, yano from from a liar to sincere
ya got only one earing.. on the right, so that makes u queer
Ya Lyrics are like prostitutes, cheap, shitty, n neva clean
jus another Virgin Pussy in Rv, So Ill fuck u up, n make u bleed

Aeyo Uppin Dis Shit..................Lets Get Some Votes..................To Shut Dis Kid Up

& Afta Dis I'm Not Battlin You Ne More...Fuckin Waste Of Time

Same Shit^^^........Vote Up I Know Yall See This........Lol

Voted For: Armada Da 187

votin for Armada

ight Armada gets this due to harder punches r more personals

ight las timei seen u 2 battle armada didnt come this hard but this time he came alot harder then ackrite

armada
way harder punches and way harder personals out of you this time, also had some creative multies and good wordplay 2 fam. I liked how u went personal in this battle

hard punch:
You suckin cock 24/7 guess thas why you so damn cocky
You ljotfranticly, written on ya pad,thinkin of punches quickly
(creative I like that)

hard personal
My lyrics will convert you, yano from from a liar to sincere
ya got only one earing.. on the right, so that makes u queer
(lol ohh hella personal)

ya flow was right on but ya strucutre had a skiddish line but the res was nice

Ack- ya didnt come as hard as u did las time. onlyhard line i seen was this

hard line-
Test Me Here?............I Dont Have To Prove To A Clown That He Lost
You Could Perform In Front of A Mute Crowd....And Still get Boo'd Off!
(lil plaid but thehardest u threw man)

ya flow was good but ya strucutre was filled wit alot of dots seems like u rushed this verse in use dots to fill ya strucutre n i wasnt feelin that

ya didnt have any hard personals and didnt see any multies

elevate on personals and multies


punches-armada
personals-armada
multies-armada
flow-tie
structure- ackrite
wordplay- armada

ARE U FUCKIN SERIOUS???.......................WOW.............. .......I HAVE NO WORDS 4 YOU

Wtf Was Dis Nigga Readin

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

chekin polls,very nice AckRite ,,u won def........

hey AckRite im ready to bet that its an alias from armada,its too obvious

I'm Ready 2 Bet Dat.......................................Dis Nigga Should Have No Votes


N......I Agree Wit You *SMH IF HE IS*

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

Iight...rite Got Dis But I Cant Vote Cuz We In Da Same Crew...all I Can Say Is...rite Betta Fuckin Win...now U May Continue Votin!!!

10-4-??

man wtf!!!! some dude votes for me n now he is a alias fuck dis shyt i aint battlin no bitch ass noob cry baby


im gettin strobe to close dis shyt fuck dis battle

Why Da Fuck You Gon Close It Dickhead??? Cuz You Know Imma Win??? Ya Vote Dont Mean Shit.....You Not Closin Dis Battle

Yeah Imma NEWBIE Dumbass..Wtf Dat Gotta Do Wit Shit? Its Funni How I'm Da Newbie But You Da One Spittin LIKE A Newbie

You Disgraceful Fam...Da Otha Day You Was Suckin My Dick Lol Sayin How Nice I Spit But Now Imma 'NEWBIE'?? Fuck Outta Hea Lmao Uppin Dis

quit freepostin like u said before, let the shyt drop, cuz all u doin is runnin ya mouth, see heres the thing, dis is the net im not gonna go crazy over votes over the net lol cuz shyt like dis is neva fair. err time i get a vote u complain thas "Newbish" you lil cock suckin faggot

u jus dirt to me, u aint shyt, dis is internet battles lol u think its life, lol well maybe it is ur life but not mine

so im jus laughin at u

Voted For: Armada Da 187

Vote: Armanda Da 187

Armanda- your hits were harder, flow was good, setup was nice, your opener could of used a little work. Closer was decent...need a hard hit at beginning and ending. Need more personals.

Ack- Good opener...I wasnt feeling the closer, some of your bars sounded a little forced, hits were decent but lacked the "Ohhh" factor

Battle was close but gave it to Armada cause the hits were harder

*no hate just honest opinion*

Voted For: Armada Da 187

Armada= Armarda dis was a close battle i think. You had alotta nice punches and some really good structure. And i can just hered da flow in my head as if u was here spittin it.

Ackrite= You did good as well u had a altta punches that just fell short and i really on ly enjoyed to of them

Winner= Armada

Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS Review-

Let's begin this rematch between two of my fams...AckRite and Armada...should be good....

Armada Da 187

After I completely destroy you, you'll accuse me of theft
u used all the info in my profile already, you got nuttin left

Nice...a personal AND opener lol

You suckin cock 24/7 guess thas why you so damn cocky
You ljotfranticly, written on ya pad,thinkin of punches quickly

Typo fucked that up...

Ack thinks he's pimp, But im on ya game, I know all boutchu
You run round wit 10 year old girls, they dont even want you

Pretty Good...

pfft aint shit boy, when it comes to rappin, talent passes ya ya rhymes are old and wasteful, like ya moms when i fuck her

One long bar...noob mistake...though it was decent

Prewritten ya lyrcis n a hurry, cuz u cant drop on a dime
Since you think u better then me, ill crush u, n waiste my time

Basic....

My Lyrics give ya headaches, put u n depressionm ya dooch
I bes take it easy on you, or ill get charged wit child abuse

Nice punch...

You strait crazy, a test tube baby, got no game, illeterate
Ill drag you down and snuff u out, like a marlboro cigarette

Ok gettin serious lol

My lyrics will convert you, yano from from a liar to sincere
ya got only one earing.. on the right, so that makes u queer

Had me laughin on this one...

Ya Lyrics are like prostitutes, cheap, shitty, n neva clean
jus another Virgin Pussy in Rv, So Ill fuck u up, n make u bleed

Nice close...

Nice verse from Armada...came hard and suceeded...lets check AckRite....LET'S GO!

AckRite

Your Shit Is Forced....Fuck with Ack And Wind Up In Grave Yards
I Take Charge, Wack Aint Ya style...Its More Like Your Trade-Mark!

NICE open...

Light Up Your Verse Again..Thats Tha Gay Part...Fag, IM Righteous
You BEating Me Will Neva Happen Like Malcolm X Adoptin White Kids!

Not the best rhymer but clever...

Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

HAHA!

Your Flow Couldnt Be Any Worse....You Didnt Know I Was This Hood
Fuck Shootin Armada........I'll Hang Him By His "Neck Of tha Woods"!

Nice personal

Just Face Tha Facts...I've Beaten You Before.....Stop Testin Me Queer
Dis Kids So 'Washed Up' Bitches Could Do Laundry Wit His Net Career

STOP WITH THE GOOD META'S lol

Test Me Here?............I Dont Have To Prove To A Clown That He Lost
You Could Perform In Front of A Mute Crowd....And Still get Boo'd Off!

Damn you are almost good as me lol

Fact Is Established....Need 20 Lines To Get Ya Point Across Faggot?
Wit 14, I'll Swiftly Give You A 'L In Da Bag' Like TRAVELIN ADDICTS!

nice...

I Mean Fa'Real...Who's Ever Seen A Faggot Spit Wit A Straight Face?
Wack Is An Under Statement....Your 'More Than Weak'...Like 8 Days!

Clever close

Overall: STOP BATTLING YOU TWO! I hate votin between yall...we all need to collab lol...anyway I give the vote to Ack...his met'as are banas...Armada had harder punches but Ack had me laughin to whiole time...which is why I battle and a preference of mine...this was an INSANE battle and you two need to get together on an OM wit me lol....no need to rtf cuz u probably already did but check anyway lol

Voted For: AckRite

Checkin The pollss/..

Nice drop Ackrite .......

Removed

Oh Damn My fault That Is Spose to be feedback Ill get it changed

its dat why ur voting for yourself?
you see,IM just laughting at you now armada,now i know why i lost against you

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

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not even close...

no hate and it ain't swaying cuz kats can't see this til after they vote...but dude had shyt that didn't even rhyme... you's a bullshyt voter and you suckin armada real hard...let's be real about the shyt...you's a fraud and armada's verse was garbage

This was feedback posted for Armada Da 187
 

viewin poll i heard u was a cheater armada i hope that aint true cause u gone if it is................

Voted For: AckRite

Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

vs

NOTHING

AckRite took this one...practically 1-sided but Ack had
harder punches...a decent structure & decent vocab

Arm..work on ur punches, & fix ur structure too...

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

Polls.............................................

Voted For: AckRite

nice verse homie,wordplay nice punches very creative! vocab nice, structure readable...ya opener was comedy son,u came off wild, i like dat.and ya closer was slick,couldve been better.

Armada ya rhyme scheme was lightweight off at times and it lost me.U were strechin ya bars alot. Lil bit of elevvation wouldnt hurt it,and bring out them punches.nice job tho.

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

checkin polls.....................................

This was feedback posted for Armada Da 187
 

both verses were very good, it was imposible for me to vote but i can say:

ackrite:
Good structure
lost a lil flow
good punchlines
one personal
good vocab

Armada:
good structure
good flow
good punchlines
good on that personal
good vocab

It was hard for me to vote so this is feedback for both

Voted For: Armada Da 187

ight here is sum quick feed

armanda- came good with punches good flow and structure....i think you came harder at ack then ack did to you

ack- ight not bad it was a ok verse....but you have to come harder on punches...i think thats what made aramda win...but it was ok keep elevating


v/ armada

FUCK DAT.............This Battle Is Gettin Closed..............& I Think Your Armada Also^

ARMADA STOP FUCKIN VOTIN 4 YASELF BITCH!...You Have No Life Or Confidence In Yaself If You Gotta Make Alias's & Vote For Yaself....Get Real....Dis Is Gettin Closed & I Hope They Fuckin BAN You

Prickz These Days..SMH

Voted For: AckRite

ack-aiight you got my vote cuz your had harder hitting punches........your structure was a lil messed up only cuz your font size tho.....so next time dont make it soo big........your vocab was basic......try adding more complex words.......little to no multis, work on puttin some in to help flow.......your flow was decent even tho u had no multis......not and personals......try incorperating some into your verse.....but overall good solid drop
7-10

arm-aiight your verse was a lil weak......some of your punches needd to be worded better for them to hit harder.......but some were good and a lil humerous....its nice to see a lil humor........you had one really stretched line........so it kinda hurt the good structure you had going.....not good vocab...work on uppin that....not really any personals.....so yeh work on puttin some of them in......flow was aiight a lil choppy tho....work on multis to help that out........but decent drop..you've done better tho
5-10