Cassius_Clay vs Retrospecktive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-12-05 at 07:29 AM

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Cassius_Clay has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 09:50 PM.

Retrospecktive has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 09:50 PM.

Aiight..He wanna fight... Ill knock out this kids grill!!
This kid real?
He said it himself"he aint no Big Deal!!"
He ah bit ill?.. cuz he fucks wit both sex?
Or he likes his throat wet?...iit sure aint his verse's
its like he dropped em' out of Vo-tech's(text..G.e.D!)
Kid be serious..ur ah ghost from tha past
that should be kept there
like you postin ur ass!!
This dude keep promotin tho...like he better than me
How!!
when he get emotional....like what he said on Degree!!
U ah wanna be... u should be shaking my hand
instead.....
Ur Comin up with no punches like fred fightin ness on
making the band

Quick text..real battle shit..fuck waitin!!!
holla!

Aiight..He wanna fight... Ill knock out this kids grill!!
This kid real?
He said it himself"he aint no Big Deal!!"
He ah bit ill?.. cuz he fucks wit both sex?
Or he likes his throat wet?...iit sure aint his verse's
its like he dropped em' out of Vo-tech's(text..G.e.D!)
Kid be serious..ur ah ghost from tha past
that should be kept there
like you postin ur ass!!
This dude keep promotin tho...like he better than me
How!!
when he get emotional....like what he said on Degree!!
U ah wanna be... u should be shaking my hand
instead.....
Ur Comin up with no punches like fred fightin ness on
making the band

Quick text..real battle shit..fuck waitin!!!
holla!

good drop probly won who gives ashit tho lol i aint even tryin against ya newbie self...

....................uppppin....................... ...........

......Upppin...................................... .....................

Voted For: Cassius_Clay

Retro- Flow was ok, punches were alright, good structure, certain lines were more creative than others

Cassius- Punches and personals hit harder, though i dont like your structure, flow was ok...

Punches---Cassius
Flow--- Retro
Personals--- Cassius
Metaphors--- Cassius
Wordplay--- Retro
Structure--- Retro
Creativity--- Tie

Final Vote----Cassius


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Voted For: Retrospecktive

:roll:

Aii This is what It is

Ret
Basically becuase your structure was cleaner and your verse atleast came with an attempted punch I hvae to give you my vote I dont know wtf cassius clay was talkin bout and his structure was fucked up and hi ryme sceme was Jus .......NVMD so i am jus statin that you stole this battle Man

DO Me a Favor and RTF ...In The Battles in my sig Please

CC

aii Man To Start Off why Would you have averse where your lines did this:

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^^^^ Thats very sloppy man I dont think that verse made any sense and then when you were ryming your word jus repeated therslef basically and you didnt diss your oppene you jus had some self glorification which is not the object of a battle so you need to work on that seriuosly man NO HATE

^^^thats hatin period..U dont know what Im talkin bout!!,man they need ta erase this vote 4 real,my shit had more personals an erythang an plus dude said it himself(you hatin 4 real)
you didnt breakdown anything you just came wit sum bullshit!!^^^

but hey thanx 4 ur opinion anyways....good battle dawg...still uppin!!

uppiin............................................ ............

This was feedback posted for Cassius_Clay
 

i thought both jawnts was alright...cassius gets the W though....

Voted For: Cassius_Clay

YEAH YEAH SON WHY IS U BATTLING DIS WEAK NIGGA BUT U NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE

This was feedback posted for Cassius_Clay
 

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This was feedback posted for Retrospecktive
 

checking in to see the voting so far.some funny stuff guys.

Voted For: Cassius_Clay

IP:


Aiight..He wanna fight... Ill knock out this kids grill!!
This kid real?
He said it himself"he aint no Big Deal!!"
He ah bit ill?.. cuz he fucks wit both sex?
Or he likes his throat wet?...iit sure aint his verse's
its like he dropped em' out of Vo-tech's(text..G.e.D!)
Kid be serious..ur ah ghost from tha past
that should be kept there
like you postin ur ass!!
This dude keep promotin tho...like he better than me
How!!
when he get emotional....like what he said on Degree!!
U ah wanna be... u should be shaking my hand
instead.....
Ur Comin up with no punches like fred fightin ness on
making the band
Yo Dat Verse Wuz Straight, Few Iight Punchez Here n There, Da Wordplay Wuz Tite 2 Mayn, Dat Degree Line Wuz Tite After U Click Da Link An Kno Whut It Iz About ha ha, But Yo Sum Of Yo Linez Wuz 2 Short, Fix Da Structure Of Yo Flowz U Still Get Da Win Tho Cuz Da Lyrical Content Wuz Much Mo Sicker

Pleaze Return Da Vote Or I Will Have Mah Vote Removed By Da Administrator

This was feedback posted for Retrospecktive
 

ffeedback...............yall both did good just dont feel like votin

Voted For: Cassius_Clay

yo this was an aiight battle....

cass - your verse was a good flow, need to work on structure a bit more, punches were good and i liked the personals... need to also work on ur vocab...

retro - your verse was pretty week.. ur structure was good, flow was aiight but ur punches were sorta weak, so were ur personals..

vass

Voted For: Cassius_Clay

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Voted For: Retrospecktive

you won this battle b/c you had better multies and wordplays but nothing really stood out. I'm biased cuz I find all the shit to do with violence a bit lame. The other guy sounded like Cassidy at the start...simple but nice flow then it got bad, but Retrospective is the unanimous champ cause he was more creative...ex. the situp line but the swear 2 god was weak and i think the last line was forced. if you wanna battle, email me at mikeda@appleby.on.ca peace

Voted For: Cassius_Clay


Flow-Retrospective,structure verse better,and Clay had lines that didn't rhyme.

Punches-Clay,although they were weak.Retro had too much self glorifing.

Personals-Clay,esspeccialy since retro had none.Clay had some stupuid ones line the postin ass one.That wasn't his ass.So why u say it was?

Multis-Retro....only 1st bar was one but it beats Clay havin none.

Vocab.-Both of you guys had a terrible vocabulary in ur verses,

Originality-Clay....retro had played concepts.Personals are always harder to make than self glorifing.


Retro had flow and shit......but Clay had punches.

Vote-Clay(drop a vote in link below or this vote will be removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901