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Restricted 05-12-05 03:31 PM

Solo vs Lay-Text
 


Text Battle

8 Lines Max
5 Votes Wins
No Hate
No Crew
No D/R
No Recycling

~R~

Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 05-13-05 at 03:31 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 05-12-05 03:34 PM

Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 03:34 PM.

System 05-12-05 03:48 PM

Lay-Text has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 03:48 PM.

King Solo 05-12-05 09:42 PM


*CREW VOTES ALLOWED CUZ WE IN THE SAME CREW*


King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…

if ya don't get shit, don't vote ya heard!!! :thumbup:

Restricted 05-14-05 02:55 PM



Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..

~R~

King Solo 05-14-05 11:05 PM

.................uppin this shit for votes!!!!!!!!

Restricted 05-15-05 09:59 AM



Uppin..

~R~

King Solo 05-15-05 03:31 PM

..............................*bump*.............. .................

Sik Wit It 05-15-05 05:33 PM

Voted For: Solo

King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
—5…decent not hard hittin
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
—4…not really feelin this one
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
—6…this punch was aight
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
—7…good persona punch



Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
—4…wack, could’ve made it harder
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
—0…man wtf? No son
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
—6…ur best punch here
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
—5…this one was okay

overall both drops, were weak but to overcome in this.. Solo
took this one, didn’t have any wack punches like Lay’s is.. &
both had okay personas, but overall like I said.. Solo took this
1.. no hate.. just reading which drop was the better one

Solo = 22
Lay-Text = 15

Rtf Solo.. or this vote will get removed


Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

MaRVJay 05-15-05 09:27 PM

Voted For: Solo

solo:
King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
^^^^GOOD NAME PLAY & PUNCH....I WAS FEELIN YA RYHME SCHEME 2
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
^^^ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL...USIN HIS USER TITLE
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
^^^^ANOTHER PERSONAL...I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE DIS U SHOULD OF ADDED SOMTHIN 2 DIS
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
^^^^LOL ANOTHER GOOD NAME PLAY...COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA BUT U HAD A SOLID VERSE...FULL OF PERSONALS


lay-text:
Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
^^^^UHH SECOND LINE WAS OKAY EVEN THO IT WAS A PERSONAL IT SEEM 2 BASIC U SHOULD OF GOTA LIL CREATIVE WITH DIS
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN DIS FAM
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
^^LMAOO GOOD PERSONAL FAM
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
^^^^UUH DIS WAS DECENT NOT 2 HARD HITTIN

V/SOLO....HIS VERSE WAS MORE CONSISTANT HE CAME WITH NOTHIN BUT PERSONALS AN ADDED A LIL CREATIVITY 2 EM...LAY AT 1ST I THOUGHT U HAD DIS BUT THEN I STARTED READIN SOLO'S VERSE U CAME WITH SOME AIGHT SHIT BUT U DIDN'T COME HARD ENUFF..PAUSE!

Wet Willy 05-15-05 10:19 PM

Voted For: Lay-Text

damn this was hella close to call... and really i dont wanna explain to much.. so dont DQ' cause this is honest.. i think Lay's punches were pretty witty the mrs. you line.. was really nice.. but the wussy line was definitely one of the worst lines i've ever read from lay.. his flow was on point the whole way.. also structure was good from both... R's closer was kinda weak too.. Solo u had hard hitting punches the whole way thru.. and u didnt come very bad at all.. i just feel that some of lay's better punches just came harder enough to give him the win.. no hate .. pz

King Solo 05-15-05 10:29 PM

its all cool up here in this bitch!!!!

uppin for some more votes!!!!!

Triple_N 05-16-05 03:03 PM

Voted For: Solo



King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…

Setup is blah, punch is blah...I see what u was trying to do but it was too basic..if u thru some word play in there instead of jus a baisc simile this would be ill.

Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…

Setup is blah seems like only word u could think of rhyme wit ocean is promotion so u jus thru up some shit dat how to do wit that word...punch was nonexistant..I know u trying to play off his avy but u failed horribly

Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…

Setup blah again....punch was jus ass not explanation

It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
setup & punch = garbage...wtf was u thinking man?


Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..

OK this is just a statement...I know u are trying to open with a personal but u didn't do anything other than mention that he lost in second round...wtf?

I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..

U used a pussy/tampon meta<--are u serious?..dats played as hell an u worded it wack, the punch itself is nonexistent...again its jus a statement...ok u think he is a weak wussy<--where is the punch?...an u rhymed pussy wit wussy...u can't be serious

You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..

Setup was blah & it had nothing to do with punch...the punch itself was jus a statement again....u attempted to make a personal but u didn't do anything but state something that happen u didn't flip it into a insult...we know the leader dissed him but how is u mentionign it again blanly a ill diss?

Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..

setup is complete blah...the punch is complete blah...u used a old elementary school joke as a closer?....dawg u can't be serious

Overall: I figured rated would son dis cat easy..I was shocked by how wack u came rated...ya shit was garbage....an solo's was too but solo had a barely decent opener...other than that both of yalls drops was complete shit...no hate jus realness I ain't into patting kids on the back when they dropped wack..maybe y'all rushed this I ono but this was a big waste of reading time for me....1

Vote: solo

Restricted 05-16-05 04:00 PM

Yea..I Typed My Verse In 7 Minutes Before The Battle LoL....

~R~

GKillaz05 05-17-05 09:19 AM

Voted For: Solo

Solo - Good spit man, your flow was good and you had some good punches.

Best Line - Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…

and

It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…

Worst Line - NONE

Lay-Text - Good spit also, your flow was better, and you had some good punches.

Best Line - Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - Good battle, but Solo had the better punches. Both came with a good flow and hard hitten punches I just felt solo's verse more.

Vote - Solo

King Solo 05-17-05 01:59 PM

werd bitchez!!!!

i liked Triple_N's vote, shitted on both of us :laugh:
but word, i did my verse in like 10 minutes...............

but anywayz uppin this bitch!!!!!!!

King Solo 05-17-05 08:55 PM

hump hump hump hump hump hump hump hump hump hump hump

King Solo 05-18-05 12:05 PM

one more vote to close this shit..........or 4 more votes!!!!

G Deuce 05-18-05 06:24 PM

Voted For: Lay-Text

Lay-Text
Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
average personal, but good opener - 8/10
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
another personal, pretty good, but not hard hitting - 7/10
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
Really good personal, had me laughin - 9/10
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
Really good closer and punchline - 8/10

Total = 32

Ice D
King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
Really good opener and punchline - 9/10
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
Could have came better in this one - 6/10
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
good personal and wordplay - 8/10
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
not a very good closer, felt like you stretched the first line in order for it to make sense - 7/10

Total = 30

Overall, pretty good and humorous battle here.....both came pretty good, but Lay-Text got ahead by a little.....

Vote = Lay-Text

Good battle u two......

.Ike. 05-19-05 03:45 PM

Voted For: Lay-Text

Lay...................

Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
lol..nice complete bar right here...Set up line tied into punch great...7/10

I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
ehh..not too great..3/10

You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
lol good personal...5/10

Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
lol...pretty good....5/10

overall......20/40

Ice-D
King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
nice...i was feelin this...5/10

Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
pretty good....4/10

Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
ehh the horizon of thoughts shit is gettin kinda played.....but this wasnt bad...4/10

It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
umm...i get this...but why would he want to be rated?...nice try on playin off aliases though...3/10

overall................16/40

King...i think your last bar killed you man...it wasnt too good of a punch...come more consistent and you would have had this battle

Recluse 05-19-05 05:59 PM

Voted For: Lay-Text

Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
^good opener..and nice personal..
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
^kinda weak...but it passed...
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
^lol...good shit...
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
^ok closer....

Overall:9.7/10
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King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
^Good opener..and nice personal...
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
^nice....bid played but it passed..
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
^pretty basic...nothin really to speacial..
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
^nice closer..also good personal..

overall:9.5/10


nice battle i feel rated came out wit this one...you both our fam...and you know i hate doing shit like dis so...dis is my vote....
Vote:Rated
~1~

Kawn Flixx 05-20-05 01:31 AM

Voted For: Solo

this was a pretty nice battle But ima have to give this one to ice-d

Ice:
King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
Lol.. nice opener i was feeling it
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
Decent.. could have been alot better
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
lol, nice...
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
Ha, good closer, nice way to end it

Lay-text:
Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
Lol, nice opener good personal
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
Ah..decent could have been better
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
Nice...i liked it
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
Flow was off, decent closer

Explaination: If laytext came alittle harder he would have won thsi battle , that one bar that i wasnt feeling from lay-text lost the battle for him if he game with a decent bar , he would have won.. ice-d had better punchlines to me , and some decent personals , nice drop to both keep it up

Vote- Ice-D

King Solo 05-21-05 03:40 PM

uppin..............rated stop moanin at strobe getting all my votes removed

Restricted 05-22-05 03:04 AM

If You Would Quit Exchanging and Asking For Them I Would.:)

~R~

King Solo 05-22-05 09:15 AM

uppin this shit...................................

FlowIntelligent. 05-22-05 10:51 AM

Voted For: Solo

Lay-Text:

Took King Off..About Time You Realized It Sounded Too Profound..
Especially Since Yo Ass Got KO'd Outta KORV In The Second Round..
^^decent personal 6/10
I Started Beefing but You Stuck A Tampon In and Admitted You Pussy..
You Left Ya Crew Because Of That..Scared Of Me? You Weak Ass Wussy..
^^wow no 2/10
You Could Get A Sex Change and Leave and Still No One Would Mrs.You..
Joined With 6-Feet and The Crew Leader Still Continued To Diss You..
^^dope bar 7/10
Fuck You Faggot..Bitch Ass..Watch Your Dimise and Death Draw Nearer..
Sorry To Put You Out Dog...But If You Need A Laugh Look In The Mirror..
^^ehh 4/10

Overall: 19/40 (48%)


Ice-D:

King of hot air..take a pin-prick to this inflatable crowned devil…
Only reason you Lay-Text is cuz ya skillz are still at ground level…
^^decent bar 5/10
Have this low ranker 5-0’ed cuz dude you’ll never cop a promotion…
And ya genius ain’t high fool..it’s just a fuckin drop in the ocean…
^^ok 5/10
Ya can try to elevate but ya won’t get far like climbin up shorts…
Have ya face in the ground so ya can establish a horizon of thoughts…
^^ehh 4/10
It takes steps to make vets..but Lay-Text a fake reps all ya got created…
Bitch ya wack, switch it back..on ya old name’s the only time you are-rated…
^^good multies decent punch 6/10

Overall: 20/40 (50%)


Vote: Ice-D


RTF on my battle with troop


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