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Bonecollector vs Aurora Sky
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 05-12-05 at 05:00 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Aurora Sky has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 04:50 PM.
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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 04:59 PM.
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Look At His Pic Before You Read My Verse
His Pic::: http://img1.imagetitan.com/img.php?d=1/1&n=me2817.jpg (he needs a display size chapstick for them fuking things) lol! Also He had the council in his sigg like 2 hours ago and now its not.. so yea.. Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/ Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/ This kid is nothing, says he nice but he simply suckin', you need to quit rap, like u need a lip reduction/ Ima vandal, watch ya flow get dismantled, why'd the council let you in?, while i was gone they must have lowered the standards/ Get it straight, im steady poppin this dude, you not hot your a fool, and ya verse is a perfect example of why you got dropped from ya crew good luck, my first battle in 2 months..' |
You taken me down , is more difficult then finding your Alias Name ...
But its a shame , i already know who you were before you hit me up on aim.. Kronuz i had to reveal you , and your new account.. Cus you can merge your two names and still not compare to my body count.. Krounz im making you look like the system with a 0-1 record.. Cus making a new name isnt gonna get you fame, your still ignored.. I Told him to set it up post ina an hour, but he makes it 15.. Are you bad at math or just a mentally challegened teen?.. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/ 4...funny but ruined by the played "sick" shit and self-glorifying!! Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/ 6...decent punch, gud use of multies!! This kid is nothing, says he nice but he simply suckin', you need to quit rap, like u need a lip reduction/ 4...filler for first line, punch not really that hard!! Ima vandal, watch ya flow get dismantled, why'd the council let you in?, while i was gone they must have lowered the standards/ 4...ok weak!!! not feelin this cuz its more filler!!!B] Get it straight, im steady poppin this dude, you not hot your a fool, and ya verse is a perfect example of why you got dropped from ya crew [B]3...played concepts!!! weak filler!!! and multies don't help ya if there ain't a real punch!! OVERALL: 21/50 You taken me down , is more difficult then finding your Alias Name ... But its a shame , i already know who you were before you hit me up on aim.. 5...weak opener, pretty much filler!! Kronuz i had to reveal you , and your new account.. Cus you can merge your two names and still not compare to my body count.. 5...pretty good, but borderline self-g!!! Krounz im making you look like the system with a 0-1 record.. Cus making a new name isnt gonna get you fame, your still ignored.. 5...aight punch, but rhyming was off!!! I Told him to set it up post ina an hour, but he makes it 15.. Are you bad at math or just a mentally challegened teen?.. 6...LoL!!! kinda funny this closer was!!! OVERALL: 21/40 ok, this was a weak battle, aurora sky had to many played concepts and a lot of filler and only one real punch!!! bone, i seen ya do far better, weak lines but the closer was aight!!! whether it was from lack of trying or not ya both came weak and need to get far more creative and throw in some real hard hitting personals and shit!!! bone gets the battle, total of points are the same but aurora's is out of 50 and bone's is out of 40!!!! V/ - Bonecollector Return the favour!!! Don't and my vote gets removed!!! |
i didnt have enough time to do anything , he gave me 7 minutes to drop :(
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u werent answerin aim at first, either way i screwed both of us over lol...any thanks for voting'
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Voted For: Bonecollector
YEAH BONE BETTER PUNCHES I LIKE THA FLOW AND VOCAB HERE NOT A VERY GOOD VERSE FROM YOU THOUGH ENOUGH TO WIN BUT IVE SEEN WAY BETTER NO GOOD PERSONALS IN THERE BUT LIKE I SAID ENOUGH TO TAKE HIS VERSE................................. AUROA..........DOGG U USED THA LIP LINES OUT IN THA FIRST BAR DONT REAPEAT WE KNOW WHAT U SAYIN NO NEED TO TELL US FOR AS WHOLE VERSE OTHER THAN THAT YOUR FLOW WAS IGHT VOCAB WAS IGHT FLOW NOT BAD BUT THA LIP LINES RUINED THIS VERSE DOGG SWITCH IT UP DONT BASE A BATTLE N ONE THING THATS NOT HOW YA GONNA WIN BATTLES NO HATE JUST AN HONEST VOTE............... RETURN THA FAVOUR.......................... |
Voted For: Bonecollector
You taken me down , is more difficult then finding your Alias Name ... But its a shame , i already know who you were before you hit me up on aim.. GOOD..... Kronuz i had to reveal you , and your new account.. Cus you can merge your two names and still not compare to my body count.. SO-SO Krounz im making you look like the system with a 0-1 record.. Cus making a new name isnt gonna get you fame, your still ignored.. NICE........... I Told him to set it up post ina an hour, but he makes it 15.. Are you bad at math or just a mentally challegened teen?.. LOL TITE............ =8/10 A GOOD VERSE BUT NOT DA BEST IVE SEEN FROM YA!!!! VS Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/ Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/ GOOD...... This kid is nothing, says he nice but he simply suckin', you need to quit rap, like u need a lip reduction/ Ima vandal, watch ya flow get dismantled, why'd the council let you in?, while i was gone they must have lowered the standards/ NAH ITS TOO LONG...... Get it straight, im steady poppin this dude, you not hot your a fool, and ya verse is a perfect example of why you got dropped from ya crew WTF WHERE DOES THIS FINSH??????? =7/10 A OK VERSE JUS IMPROVE ON YA STRUC!!!!!!!! V/Bonecollector Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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thats to bars smart one...lol |
This was feedback posted for Aurora Sky
tahaa sum funny shyt yo...im feelin ya verse B
"Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/ Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/" ^^Game ova right derr..u ended dude...props due |
Voted For: Aurora Sky
aight, simple......aurora had better punches......he incorporated personals that were effective.....i dunno bone, your verse was weak, first 4lines all you did was tell everyone he is kronus.....but didn't diss him.....aurora, your lines/structure was fucked up man, at times it was very hard to follow, just work on that and you should get back into the groove, kinda just played with two concepts the whole time, so mix it up more, word......anyways, this was one sided, aurora for having effective punhces........but he'll win this anyways, bone only wrote 8 lines v/aurora |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/ Well, it woulda been dope if that was him, weak personal, 1-10 Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/ laughing with the wind, thats not him. 1-10 This kid is nothing, says he nice but he simply suckin', you need to quit rap, like u need a lip reduction/ Whos picture is this, not his.. 1-10 Ima vandal, watch ya flow get dismantled, why'd the council let you in?, while i was gone they must have lowered the standards/ no rhyming nothing, u suck. 1-10 Get it straight, im steady poppin this dude, you not hot your a fool, and ya verse is a perfect example of why you got dropped from ya crew No your not, your poppin off at a picture u found on the net. 1-10 You taken me down , is more difficult then finding your Alias Name ... Ha okay opener makes your cerious who he really is.. 5-10 But its a shame , i already know who you were before you hit me up on aim.. lacking vocab, okay flow, slacking though.. 4-10 Kronuz i had to reveal you , and your new account.. nice but need to work on vocab but flowed ok 6-10 Cus you can merge your two names and still not compare to my body count.. Come on are you trying 5-10 Krounz im making you look like the system with a 0-1 record.. HaHa thats funny since 01´s makes computer programs, nice. 6.5-10 Cus making a new name isnt gonna get you fame, your still ignored.. or dissing the wrong man.. 5-10 I Told him to set it up post ina an hour, but he makes it 15.. acture you said 15 after check in 2-10 Are you bad at math or just a mentally challegened tee n?.. okay closer, coulda been better. 5-10 Well, its this was a easy battle. I mean Aurora Sky woulda won if that was actually BONE but nope, I hate it when people come with fake personals. So my Vote is Bonecollector. But you need to work on wordplay and vocab, or move to audio cuz even when you come simple it sounds dope as long as the story you tell is worth hearing. Look at Pac. Nice battle from the both of you! Bonecollector 33.5-80 Aurora Sky 5-50 |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
v/diagnosis he had better punches,nice wordplay,dope opener and a nioce strong ending to close it,the structure i felt was more readable and better formatted also..plus he had more sufficient personals... Aurora you had a few personals also but not damaging in my book...you could of been more creative,your srtucture was decent not bad but okay....,the flow was blah,decent personals... anyways bonecollecter came hard and strong while airora came decent.... v/diagnosis |
Voted For: Bonecollector
aiight good battle yo.. aurora u need to improve ur structure a bit.. lets get into it.... diagnosis - ok, your verse was decent... your opener was a nice personal, your closer was pretty sick... your whole verse flowed very well didnt fall off point... your punches and personals were good and structure was good a few lines were stretched but good... you need to up on ur vocabulary a bit more but overall good verse.. nice creativity.. Aurora - your verse was more simple, your lines were stretched as hell mayne, you had some good punches but not as many as diagnosis... your verse flowed well apart from near the middle where it fell off att times... your vocab was ok but like i said to diagnosis u need to up it... and ur creativty was aiight... opener - D closer - A flow - D punches - D vocab - Tie structure - D creativity - D vote - D, no hate just how i saw it |
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