Young Blaze vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No Hate

Crew Battle: Illunatikz vs OG

gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you know show you will be labeled gay)

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-17-05 at 03:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 04:26 PM.

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...

*His sig. says "blazin mcs"
**His bio says Jerzy's Finest and everyone makes fun of Jersey about being the worst place in America

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 01:02 PM.

IGHT check the Punchs......TIKZ Bitch

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

lets go OSB.....checkin polls.....OG running shit like escapin terds

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB VERSE:

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Nice opener. I was feeling tha punch, and I liked the wordplay

Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
Nice mini multi here. Not too much of a diss, but I was feeling this

This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
hahaha. I see some consistency in yo verse. Nice shit

I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
Flawless punch. Nice wordplay also.

B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Not that hard right here. Just ight to me/[b]

Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...
[B]Dopeness. Nice punch. Nice wordplay. Creative

This was a real creative verse. I liked the punches, and I liked the consistency in your verse. I think yo structure was on point, and yo verse flowed well. I was really into this verse. Dopeness






Young Blaze verse

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Nice 2nd line, but I don’t know about the first one. A half descent opener

Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Dope. I liked the multies here also.

Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
Descent. Not that hard hitting to me, just nice

In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Nice. Kinda worded off because it didn’t flow too well, but nice

Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
Dope ass bar, but I don’t see too much consistency

U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)
Dope ender.

This was a pretty good verse in my opinion. A lot of soft punches in here though. You didn’t have too much consistency. For the most part, yo structure was on point, and yo verse flowed, and it made sense, but I didn’t really see too many dope punches that made me want to give you the win.

overall, I liked this battle. Pretty descent, but I felt OSB came off a lil harder with punches and shit. He also came with a lil more consistency in this one, and I was feelin his verse more. My verse goes to OSB because overall, I felt he came a lil harder in this one. No hate to either one of you. Good battle. Keep elevating.


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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

hmmm...........OSB, nice verse, word

young blaze, self glored waaaaaaaay too much....shaq freethrow lines have quickly become played......had one decent line though.......that homeless one, haha,


word.......OSB.......you almost the man....right now.....you're probly just an, or ma.....or even mn


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^ sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeet

i'll get that removed, dont worry

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin polls..........good drop both..but i feel OSB's better

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Hot ass battle...Probably gonna be close...Checkin dem polllssss

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

CHECKIN POLLS for my boy OSB, nah mean

uppin for OSB...btw i had something funny to say but...i forgot lol...so fuck it...lol

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

both verses i would say arent bad...itd be close to call...some good punches..

Voted For: Young Blaze

aight young blaze take dis cuz i neva herd of jersey b n da worste place eva

young blaze- aight u had sum good punches good punches u started ya verse off like me u had sum good multies n ya verse da verse wasnt stretched everi line followed da next u had sum aight personals it was kool dont stretch ya line like dat 1 u did keep dem all da same u had a good openor it was a lil dull n between but u had a good closer 2 match it

o.s.b-yo man ya shit was good n da begginin dat was a nice personal/punch it was sum good punches n ya verse and sum personal but dat jersey personal was fake neva herd of sumbodi say dat ya verse was balanced jus like young blaze but he came harder den u n dis battle u had a good openor sum of da middle was kinda trash but da closer was aight

vote- young blaze

hmm....seems like a hate vote.....cuz he said somethin bad about NJ.......thats stupid to vote for another person because they made a punchline degrading NJ.......

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uppin for my wigga OSB...whitey can rap for real..damn the racism is rhick lol...he knows i'm messin wit him...i hope

uppin for shits sake..... being slept on like crazy... Good battle too

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

this was a pretty okay battle but ima have to give this one to One Step Beyond, to me he came harder

Younge
Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Nice decent opener
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Ha nice punchline
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
Dope
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Nope
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
Ah.. filler
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)
Shaq shoots like 40 % at freethrows..So no

OneStep Beyond
Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Nice decent opener
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
Decent.. sorta filler
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
Nice punchline , good mutlies
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
Eh...Decent
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Nice punchline
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...
LOL, nice closer

Pretty close battle but ima have to give this one to One Step Beyond... young came good but i just feel that One step came alittle harder... Keep it up both

vote- One Step Beyond

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage….

Yo Da Punchez Wuz ILL, Dat Closer ''Da Free Throw Percentage'' Wuz Sum Sick Azz Wordplay,. But U Lacked ALOT Ov Personalz, U Tried 2 Play Da Battle Out Wit Consistantly Dropping Punches Wit No Personalz, Maybe If U Had Mixed n Switched Yo Style Up Thru Out Da Verse, U Wuld Ov Got Mah Vote

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...

Yo Dat Verse Wuz Tite, U Used Personalz An Da Metahpours Wuz Flawless Dawg, U Hit Him Hard, ''U Better Check Yo Head Man, Like Wearin A Nike Hat'' Dat Iz Fiyah Man, OnStepBeyond Came Real Hard An Hiz Verse Had Everythin Frum Humour, 2 Wit Rite Down 2 Da Personalz, Flow Wuz Rite On Point

Vote/OnrStepBeyond

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature

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^ may wanna get that fixed....ts 3-1 OSB now....uppin fo mo

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Nice battle, both came hard as fuck as usual young blazes punches and wordplay was fiyah...

looked like he was gettin it til i saw OSB's verse.

OneStep gets it due to harder hitting personal punches and a better flow throughout. Structures were both reasonable and vocab was pretty nice from both.

OSB you came dope, just keep doing ya thing....Young to elevate even more and be near enough unstoppable, you just gotta add in personals to make ya punches hit harder.

No HATE

OSB, RTF so i dont have to DQ this vote!!, you have 3 days!

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

checking the polls... im new.. this was at the top of frontlines... so i thought' i'd check it out..

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

young blaze:
Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
^^^GOOS OPENER
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
^^I GET WHUT U TRYIN DA SAY U JUST WORDED IT REALLY BADD...
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
^^^OKAY NOW UR FORCIN MULTIS FAM....DAT SHIT SOUND DUMB
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
^^^DECENT
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
^^GOOD SHIT
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)
^^^AGAIN U FORCED A MULTI..WHICH MESSED UP YA WHOLE BAR...HEAT DUG YA TRENCHES???? LOL


OSB:
Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
^^^LOL...NICE BAR
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
^^UHHHH DECENT PUNCH
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
^^^LOL....DAT WAS DOPE...I AINT GON FRONT
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
^^^PLAYED SAID DIS IN LIKE 2001
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
^^^^WHOEVA SAID JERSEY WAS DA WORST STATE?...U NOT EVEN FROM AMERICA LMAOOOO
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...
^^OKAY CLOSER....

V/OSB.....HE BRUNG IT DIS BATTLE....YB U FORCE MULTIS 2 MCUH U HAD SOME DECENT PUNCHLINES BUT U WERENT CONSISTANT IN DIS BATTLE


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