The Sorrow vs AckRite
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No Hate

Crew Battle: Illunatikz vs OG

gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you no-show, you will be labeled gay)

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-17-05 at 03:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Yay my first win................................:)

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 04:30 PM.

The Sorrow has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 07:40 AM.

AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing

Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?


Explanations
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189718
^ His Mugshot, applies to the first bar...He has a pic of himself in his sig, so obviously thats why we can't see an emcee...;)...

He's not upping a battle he's losing vs Big City..

If you don't get anything else, you deserve to die..

Word...

Nice drop man, best of luck...:thumbup:

Voted For: AckRite

aight yo akkrite to dis

akkrite-ya verse was pretty good u had sum aight punches dat hit hard.... u had sum good vocab i thaught u was wakk on da real but u impressed me u had sum good personals and multies n maybe 1 or 2 lines good drop it was easy 2 read n it wasnt stretched each line followed da next line good openor u had threw da whole battle it was kool good closer 2

the sorrow-i thaught u was gon win dis easy but u didnt u did have a couple good punches but dey wasnt as hot as akkrites sum of dem didnt hit hard and sum of dem was jus plain wakk but u did have sum personals ya verse was eazy 2 read also each line follow each otha dont do dat quote shit unless its wit a hot as personal ya verse started off ok and it ended kind of dull keep it hot da whole way n ull win everi battle

akkrite took dis tho

vote-akkrite

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

polls beaches.......................................

new kid thought ackrite was straigth whack, but that impressed him?

well you can tell that vote wasn't though out very well

^ Me and NewKid have beef since I voted him out of KORV, then made a thread for him to stop bitching about it...forgot to blacklist him...:(

Jeah Nice Lines Nigga.............UPPIN.............Lol @ NewKid...........Fucked Up

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

worrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrd!!! holla at the realness!1 ackrite doin his thing!....propps y'all, nice battle...uppin this for fam.

Voted For: The Sorrow

AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
—5…pretty decent punch
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
—6…good punch here
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
—8…nice persona punch
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
—5…decent shit here
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing
Quote:
Originally Posted by Drakel
gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you no-show, you will be labeled gay)

Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
—7…lol nice shit
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?
—7…good use on his name, punch was good

overall u had a good drop here though… 38/50

Categoric Assessin, U Presently Suck....The Facts Are Displayed
And When Anyone Talks Of Ur Skill, Its Always..'Back In The Day'
—5…nah played punch here
Your A Lousy Faggot............Never Were A Metaphorical Blessing
What Do U Mean To Da Site? (Wait!..Thats A Rhetorical Question)
—5…uh, decent
Ain No Stoppin Me, Ya Wack..& Frankly..I Juss Laugh At U Dawg
Cuz Kid..U'll Neva Be On 'Top'..Ya Can't Even Climb Vaginal Walls!
—0…nope
I'm Morbid & Violent.....'Rainin On Ya Sorrow' Like Stormin Tyrants
& If U Think U Can ‘Stomach This’ Im 'PERFORMIN DA HEIMLICH'!
--4…okay, this 1 was pretty wack
Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!
—6…good
Sorrow Cant Beat Me, My Words'll Wipe Away & Knock This Herb
Kid..If Money Could Talk.......Then You'd Be At A Loss For Words!
—4…nah not feelin this one

overall u had an aight drop, could’ve came harder… 24/50

this battle was one-sided right here, The Sorrow just came
harder with the punches & they connected, both structures were
okay & the flow was decent, but overall The Sorrow took this one

no hate…

1

Dick rider ^^^^^^^

sorry sorrow, no hate against you, but after all...it is skriptz, an you are Redbull....so one can only imagine he ridin you......i know what skriptz is like, but its straight.

^ I feel what you're saying Buck...but honestly Skriptz didn't know it was me till you just said, and that's if he looks back..

We haven't talked since he left The Establishment for BluePrint and I guess GW now...

But if that vote gets removed, I think it's only fair to remove NewKids since I made a thread about how much of a bitch he is, so it's probably a hate vote.. Who cares...just leave it 1-1, or 0-0, it's not going to make a difference...1-1 will get it closed quicker..

- Red Bull

Damn @ Scriptz..........Basically You Aint Like Shit Son Lol You Shoulda Just Been Honest My Feelings Aint Hurt

1-1 UPPIN

word ^^^
keep the votes if u want? aint for me too say, i was just pointin out what skriptz is like, aint trynna imply nothin else, man.....

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

polllllllllllsssss................................ ......

^ Somebody Checking The Polls..

< Me upping this battle..

V You voting on this battle..

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

Nice lines. Weak personals but they were funny. punches were landing. I enjoyed reading your verse sorrow. ;)

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Wow...

Drop some fuckin' votes allready..

I got banned from LL for a week on this name...:(..

Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.Bump.

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

Pizzy Izzy Polls Yo...............................

SMH @ Checkin Polls......................$cream At Dis Shit Wit A "VOTE"..................Early

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

checkin polls............................................

Uppin this bitch diddly itch yo...................

^ shut up herb!

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Yeah..

I'm such a herb...:(

Fuck people vote, or I'll kill you..

Aha @ Sorrow...........You A Crazy Dude Lol............But Lets Get Some Votes Niggaz

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

lol Sorrow...that close was genious lol...and Ack...we HAVE to battle...u set it p whenever wherever...nice battle

^ Thanks for the feed yo..

Yo, AckRite fa'real though, good battle man...

Voted For: The Sorrow

ummm damn...The Sorrow killed Ack......both had good drops...but i felt sorrow came harder...he had some nice punches that just hit a lot harder....Ack you had a pretty solid verse...but nothing witty enough to take this win man...Sorrow just came with the wittyness...and he played off of so many different things...it easily got the win for him...so sorrow takes this with harder hitting punches.....and wittyness.....good verses from both

Voted For: The Sorrow

aiiight first all good battle yo, i liked both of ur verses to a certain extent... aiight lets break it down...

Sorrow - your opener was pretty good, closer was also a nice one... your whole verse flowed all the way through, i didnt fall of point anywhere... your vocabulary was very good, didnt genralise at all, your punches were hard hittin and you had me chucklin with some of em... personals were good at least u did some reaserch.... and ur structure was good and creativity was dope....
fav bar... "This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?" 8.5/10

AckRite - aiight lets go, your opener was pretty good, but ur closer was a bit of a let down, your verse flowed well but some things were a bit hard to understand the way u werded them... but overall that was aiight, your vocabulary was pretty dope, you used some realli good words... ok ur punches were aiight a few that were sorta played out, and could have been better... your structure was very good and your creativity was good...
fav bar... "Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!" overall 7.5/10

opener - Ackrite
closer - Sorrow
flow - Sorrow
punches - Sorrow
vocab - AckRite
structure - AckRite
creativity - Sorrow
personals - Sorrow
enjoyment - Sorrow
overall - Sorrow, no hate just how i saw it...

Voted For: The Sorrow

the sorrow..
AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
6/10..coulv'e worded it better.
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
5/10...weak personal.
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
7/10...lol quite good.
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
6/10...meh, alright play on his name.
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing
Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
3/10...nah, really ain't feeling this.
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?
8/10...best bar out of your verse.
overall 75%..
ackrite...
Categoric Assessin, U Presently Suck....The Facts Are Displayed
And When Anyone Talks Of Ur Skill, Its Always..'Back In The Day'
5/10...kinda weak here.
Your A Lousy Faggot............Never Were A Metaphorical Blessing
What Do U Mean To Da Site? (Wait!..Thats A Rhetorical Question)
6/10...tryed to be witty, but it didn't work.
Ain No Stoppin Me, Ya Wack..& Frankly..I Juss Laugh At U Dawg
Cuz Kid..U'll Neva Be On 'Top'..Ya Can't Even Climb Vaginal Walls!
4/10... -_- are you serious?
I'm Morbid & Violent.....'Rainin On Ya Sorrow' Like Stormin Tyrants
& If U Think U Can ‘Stomach This’ Im 'PERFORMIN DA HEIMLICH'!
7/10...quite nice feeling the second line.
Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!
3/10...nah ain't feeling this either.
Sorrow Cant Beat Me, My Words'll Wipe Away & Knock This Herb
Kid..If Money Could Talk.......Then You'd Be At A Loss For Words!
7/10...blah, decent.
overall 45%.
you could of came harder. but overall the sorrow was just a bit stronger and consistant.
no hate..

Damn, bout time this got some votes..

Upping for some more yo..

Damn Son..........O.D...............Aight Uppin For Votes Niggas

Yeup..

Upping this battle..

.I.hate.this.50.characters.bullshit.

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

jus checkin polls 4 mi homeboy....................