Adrenaline vs Ax Dogg
 

Battle Rules:

6 to 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-16-05 at 03:08 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

Ax Dogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:11 PM.

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:16 PM.

I'm full of Adrenaline, ready to murk you, hurt you, and lough out loud when I see your verse
In the moment you decided to battle Ax Dogg, your adrenaline went down like a deadly curse
that's what I notice when weak niggaz choose to battle against this boy, I'm ready to destroy
I like playin with you, watch you grow full of joy, you so weak u like my dissin toy
I'm Still waitin for you to answer my punchline, I really murked you with a simple line
But that fagness makes me shine, at the same time I will shine when I finish this line
U can't win against me with rap that's why u need that lightsaber on your signature
And if you gon change, dont change to Vader or to your Gay picnic picture
you don't know how to play this game, don't state my name again, you all diss the same
and tell me to get creative, Adrenaline is a shame, I will personally ask management to clear your name

my spits is razor leavin u like shriveled paper,u aint a hustla so I wont even ax dogg
leave u cold feet like u stepped in my frosty spit,my flow is ludacris so get back dawg
it's funny how this dude thought he could clown me but he got owned by a ghost (casper)
it shows he's a more on,cuz he's high on makin stretched lines like smokin long and chokes
look ur punches is more wack than batman hits,I'll leave this kid lighted up like matches
fact is,u couldn't get one good feed on your rhymes if u was a bird when da egg hatches
my punches is killin dis kid like cashus clay,yo he just had to make his raps delayed
that's why dis herb gave 4 days to spit, and he said

only chance of you winnin is u were playin monopoly,stop talkin trash and speak properly
like his mom did,im just trainin dis kid to spit cuz he just a fuckin dog..........NOW SIT!!

uppin....I expected worse from you...but uppin good job fam...

This was feedback posted for Adrenaline
 

checkin thas polls............................................. ................

ok.... is there anyone goin to vote???????????????

Voted For: Ax Dogg

votin for ax

ax got this due to harder punches and a more serious verse

Ax
ight this battle you came alot harder thern i have eve seen u do
ya punches were hard hittin, didnt see many personals, mulkties was off the chain, ya strucutreas was nice and u had a nice flow ya verse was very creative, and ya wordplay was alot better

good verse

Adrenaline
ight ya punches didnt really seem to hit hard like they should have
ya had somne nice personals but they didnt make up for the absence of ya punches
ya flow was good as well as you strucutre but ya just didnt come hard enough, nice wordplay n descent vocab skills

so ax gets this due to harder punches

BE SURE TO RETURN THE FAVOR
link below my sig

Make em explained

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^^what the hell you talkin bout armada...this guy had no punches...it was all self glorification...it was wack...pure wack...no punches...do u know what punches are?

can I get someone to vote who knows what their talkin about please?

smh

This was feedback posted for Ax Dogg
 

I can't vote on this battl cuz i would vote against Ax-Dogg just for having a weak verse. It would be counted as a hate verse, but my vote would of went 2 adrenaline

hahaha... u know it was better nigga, but ya'll niggaz is jus takin this too serious.... damn haha

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Voted For: Adrenaline


ax dogg: terrible fukkin structure i could barley read dat shit...ur lines were so stretched dat u need liek 2 pages da post dat shit...didn't really see no creativity or punchlines...


adrenaline:ur structure was fukked up 2 and u stretched madd lines..but at it looked like u tried u had a funny ass personal with da quote and shit...but u need da step ya shit up u been on rv 4 a while now..

v/adren

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whatever........... haters is juz haters (if i would vote against Lexikon you will be kissin my ass here.... but like i said....... haters is jus haters)
youu didn't even read my post... or you don't know what a punchline is

AX Dogg stop runnin from me nigga, i said come holla @ me already.

yo ax dogg stop talkin trash...u had no punchlines man...

....................uppin................... vote again... that nigga cheated

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This was feedback posted for Ax Dogg
 

I dont think i can vote on this battle cuz Adrenaline is a Legend in the making and I'm in that crew but if it wasn't for ax dogg woulda got this cuz his lines made sense and Adrenaline's punches were waaayyyy played

This was feedback posted for Ax Dogg
 

Juss peepin the poll. Not voting since we battlin.

why do u take this votin shit too serious??.... jus vote for the best without hate......
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why vote disqualified..... this had good feedback, don't fuck wit me.......

vote muthafuckaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

....................................uppin this sun of a beach lol

vote shiiiiiiiiit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Ax Dogg

V/Ax Dogg......this was an ight battle nothin special but ax came harder wit the punchs but ur structure is fucked work on that....Adrenaline.....those quote shit is played no no no dont do that an ur punchs were played also structure was fucked....work on those things ight....No Hate........RETURN THE FAVOR (Or u never get another honest Vote from me)
Opener=A
Closer=A
Punchs=A
Structure=Tie(both were wack)
Wordplay=A
Personals=A
Vocab=A
multi's=Tie(none Really)
Overall=AX Dogg....

Voted For: Ax Dogg

I'm full of Adrenaline, ready to murk you, hurt you, and lough out loud when I see your verse
In the moment you decided to battle Ax Dogg, your adrenaline went down like a deadly curse
that's what I notice when weak niggaz choose to battle against this boy, I'm ready to destroy
I like playin with you, watch you grow full of joy, you so weak u like my dissin toy
I'm Still waitin for you to answer my punchline, I really murked you with a simple line
But that fagness makes me shine, at the same time I will shine when I finish this line
U can't win against me with rap that's why u need that lightsaber on your signature
And if you gon change, dont change to Vader or to your Gay picnic picture
you don't know how to play this game, don't state my name again, you all diss the same
and tell me to get creative, Adrenaline is a shame, I will personally ask management to clear your name

Yo Da Structure Iz Fucked Up Dawg, But Yo Lyrikal Content Wuz Off Da LEASH!!!Sum Linez Wuz Streched Da Fuck Out Lyke Rubberbandz, But Yo Personalz And Punchlinez Saw U Thru It, Consistantly Droppin, Da Flow Wuz Hot Like Fahrenheit, Not Much I Can Fault, U Brought It Live, Son!

my spits is razor leavin u like shriveled paper,u aint a hustla so I wont even ax dogg
leave u cold feet like u stepped in my frosty spit,my flow is ludacris so get back dawg
it's funny how this dude thought he could clown me but he got owned by a ghost (casper)
it shows he's a more on,cuz he's high on makin stretched lines like smokin long and chokes
look ur punches is more wack than batman hits,I'll leave this kid lighted up like matches
fact is,u couldn't get one good feed on your rhymes if u was a bird when da egg hatches
my punches is killin dis kid like cashus clay,yo he just had to make his raps delayed
that's why dis herb gave 4 days to spit, and he said

only chance of you winnin is u were playin monopoly,stop talkin trash and speak properly
like his mom did,im just trainin dis kid to spit cuz he just a fuckin dog..........NOW SIT!!

Dat Closer Wuz Real Weak Dawg, Da Verse Jus Wuznt Creative, Seemed 2 Have A Few Fillerz An Da Vocab An Da Wording Of Yo Linez Wuz Pretty Much Effectless, No Hate Doh, I Wuz Feelin Dat Line Where U Had Da Quote Ov Hiz, But Da Rest Ov Da Verse Wuznt All Dat, Dawg! Keep Trying Doh, I'll Look Out Fo Ya Battlez In Da Future!!

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Ax:
flow - strong
structure - fucked up
punchline - strong
personals - hard hittin
multi's - well played

Adrenaline:
flow - good
structure - fucked up too
punchlines - weak
personals - mmmmmm....
multi's - I saw sum... good played

V/ Ax
RTF

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Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline gets this cuz he came harder and made it more personal.

both verses had good punches in them though.

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ax dogg u suck...lol .

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