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Kawn Flixx 05-13-05 03:28 PM

The Black Plague vs Bonecollector
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-13-05 at 04:18 PM

Must drop verse in 70 minutes after check in.

System 05-13-05 03:38 PM

The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:38 PM.

The Black Plague 05-13-05 03:40 PM

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**

*Says he is puerto rican.. their olympic team is shitty

**Word-play.. he don't got good wordplay, his shit simple

System 05-13-05 03:44 PM

Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:44 PM.

Kawn Flixx 05-13-05 04:15 PM

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete

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V=Victory and two VV= W

Kawn Flixx 05-14-05 02:56 AM

^HA he changed his crew name it use to Be L.A.D
....

13th. 05-14-05 04:44 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
GOOD.............
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
OK...........
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
GOOD
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
NICE........
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
LOL......
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
LOL TITE FINSHER
=8/10 A GOOD VERSE SUMMAT DAT U ALWAYS DO............

VS

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
NAH...........
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
LOL........
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
NICE
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
SO-SO..
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
OK......
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
AIGHT
=7.8/10 ANOTHA NICE VERSE........NOT MUCH 2 COMENT ON REALI..........

V/BONECOLLECTOR BECAUSE HE HAD MORE GOOD PUNCHES.....

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The Black Plague 05-14-05 09:03 PM

^^^ Uppin this.. inadeqaute feedback on that vote tho..

AckRite 05-14-05 09:44 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
Shit Was Aight...Not Serious...5/10
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
Aha...Nice Personal...6.5/10
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Okay...Dat Was Creative...7/10
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
Not A Hard Hit But Tight Line...6/10
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
Anotha Nice Personal....7/10
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Aha!....8/10...Best Line...I Gave It 2 Bone Cuz His Shit Was Much More Creative...Creativity Is Key In Battles

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Nice 2nd Line......6/10
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Aha!........Nice........6/10
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
Nahhh I'm New So I Dont Get It...2/10
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
Not Feelin Da Set Up & Da Tip Line Is Kinda Played...4/10
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
Aha....Nice Personal....6/10
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play
Dat Was Aight....4.5/10

Overall - BoneCollector Had Harder Direct Hits...Therefore He Gets My Vote

RTF...Any 1 Of My Battle Threads

The Black Plague 05-14-05 09:49 PM

Uppin again.......

M-Eazy 05-15-05 01:33 AM

Voted For: The Black Plague

Bonecollector's verse:

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
Not the best opener, but a nice line. Nice punch also.

keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
Not that hard. Kinda lost in this one. Shouldve explained it. Because clearly its a personal, but what's his crew name really?

You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Wack. Because of the wording

Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
Nice thinking, but not all that. Just ight for me

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
I like how this rhymed....that about it.

......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Fairly, the first line is played. You should know that by now. And the other line shouldve been better

Not a hard hitting verse at all. I don't think this is winning material for this battle. Yo punches were too soft, alot of played concept, and alot of bad worded lines. I wasn't feeling this verse. No hate, just not a good verse to me.
The Black Plague's verse"

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Nice personal. Nice opener too, to top of a bad verse by your oponent

Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Clearly a dope personal. Understood. Worded well, and I knew just what you were talking about. LMAO

Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
Don't get this personal, but nice rhyming

I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
Not worded too good, but still a nice line

No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
LMAO. true too. I like this line. Mos Def my favorite so far. This was dope

Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
lol...Not that hard hitting, but funny. Nice personal.

[B]I give my vote to TBP because he came consistent with his punches, and personals. He didn't have too many played concepts in there, and his verse was rather funny to me. I liked how he didn't hafto explain all his lines, and I still understood them.(the personals). This was just some good RV diss shit right here, and you get my vote.


RTF on battle against esco plz.

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Nice battle. No hate to either of you. Continue to elevate.

~1~

ThatsWhatSheSaid 05-15-05 07:15 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Bone Collector--- Flow was ok, wordplay was decent, and punches were ok...... started out good, didnt like last 2 lines though,

The Black Plague--- Some alright personals, flow was ok, some ok wordplay'.....started out ok and ended ok...

Punches: Bone Collector
Personals: The Black Plague
Flow: The Black Plague
Wordplay: Bone Collector
Structure: Bone Collector
Creativity: Tie

Final Vote------Bone Collector

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Valor 05-17-05 12:29 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

v/bonecollector

bone-had way more personals,his structure was nice and clean,he also had great wordplay and harder punches,the flow was more better also i felt,decent opener but a hard ass closer nice way to end it


TBP-your flow was okay not the best, your opener was off i didnt like it,you punches were decent but in some areas seemed forced,decent wwordplay also man.....and you did have a nice closer as well so that a plus

overall with harder hitting punches,and good personals with a nice structure all around...im giving this to bonecollecter,no hate TBP you did decent,bonecollecter just came harder

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datopprospect 05-17-05 07:21 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Well this was close. But vote goes 2 Bonecollector. He won me ova with the last verse

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Good battle for bonecollector. eazy

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Bangalore 05-18-05 09:27 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

lmao ha. ight here it is.

Bp I liked yours but it lacked in its overall vocab and creativity in punches .. still not a bad verse but it just didn't have the effect and creativity that BC had... Bc Wow i was really impressed with your verse as a whole mainly becuase it was so creative with its punches and personals you took everything he had to offer and used it against him . and i really really liked that because it was unique in that aspect . the rhyme style was a lil off in bps and with bc;s but overall i think if you said both outloud bc's just flowed better ....

so because of a better rhyme scheme and way better personals and punches i'ma go with

Vote//Bonecollector

Bangalore 05-18-05 09:28 AM

lmao @ al the votes removed haha......funny shit ha

josh654789 05-18-05 03:12 PM

Voted For: The Black Plague

couldnt ciome up with much to say about this one....but plague gets the win

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Lyriclesolja 05-19-05 11:44 PM

Voted For: The Black Plague

Damn good battle.....ok heres the break down....
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Bone---The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.-----nice punch but really didnt hit
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.----nice personal and punch here direct hit
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*----complex punch but still a good one
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...----oooo nice one this is ur best punch great set up and knock down
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..----aight multi. but weak punch overall
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete-----sweet punch here
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Black--All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women------ddaammnnn great opener straight ko with one bar
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes----another clean punch good one here
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio----damn thats dirty..lol..another great punch and good wordplay
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”----your only weak punch
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.-----great punch exellent flow also
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**---aight punch but still hit
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aight i expect this battle to get very very close but i thought that Black had better quality punches and a lil better flow...ma advice to Bone in this battle is really nothing it was a good verse that had many strong points but lacked in certan areas.....for example some of your punches seemed to be forced next time you write something sit back and relax and imagin ur a person that is reading this for the first time...it will help alot.......as for Black all around great verse powerful punches but structure was a lil off try and fix that......my advice to you is to maybe try and add some noticeable punches (links) but thats about it great verse------my advice to both Mcees is try adding some multies. in ur verses it will give you an edge on the competition!!.
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with that being said my vote is for Black his verse just had more powerful punches.......but dont get me wrong this was very close......V/ The Black Plague

Lyriclesolja 05-19-05 11:49 PM

my advice to you is to maybe try and add some noticeable punches ******i ment personalls******(links) but thats about it great verse------my advice to both Mcees is try adding some multies. in ur verses it will give you an edge on the competition!!.

The Militant 05-20-05 01:44 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

i feel bone collector took this one by far

he had better wordplay "v twin"thats hot kid nice line punchelines coulda been better but still were better then blacks rhymes were good flow was almost perfect structre a lil off at times but it still worked for this verse personals were on point and hit hard...any way....nice shit cant be mad at it

best line-"Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all..."
7.9/10

please return the favor Me vs JaEx

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The Militant 05-20-05 01:49 AM

sorry i forgot to crituqe blacks verse--------------

your verse was lackin alot rhymes were basic the punches were there hit but not hard enough to win the battle wordplay was okay nothing speacil in it structre was good though personals werent anything speacil neither the flow of your verse was very choppy.....no hate though keep doin ya thing man

Sweft 05-20-05 02:47 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector



The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
HaHa okay opener 7-10

keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
wow nice personal BLD ha ha 9-10

You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
I like the imagery 8-10

Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
okay maltis but need to work on vocab 5-10

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
Whats up with the gay jokes? overplayed 5-10

......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Nice ending. HaHa ctrl+alt+Delete that was funny 8.1 - 10 50.1-60

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All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
HaHaHa nice opener.. 9-10

Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Wack 1-10 slippin homie

Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
terri shchavio?¿ Who is this.. weak personal 4-10

I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
Nice word play here gettin getter 6.7-10

No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
whats that have to do with him? 4-10

Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
Nice wordplay 7-10 39.8

Overall good battle well I personally Think Bonecollector won this. Sorry this is my first time for this. Ill vote more later

39.8-60 The Black Plague
50.1-60 Bonecollector

The Black Plague 05-20-05 01:11 PM

^^^ Ok.. i dont know how ya'l havn't heard of terri schaivo.. she was that lady who was ALL OVER THE DAMN NEWS like a month ago.. she was the parapalegic who couldn't talk or read or write.. and her husband took her off life support and let her die..

It was on the news like mad.. dont kno how ya'l didn't hear it

jr freeze 05-20-05 01:20 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
^^^^Ight Punch solid opener.....
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
^^^^This was a good punch mixed wit personals i liked it...
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
^^^^lol this was another solid punch....Not really played
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
^^^^Good Personal Wit a Good set up to the punch
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
^^^^Ight punch not really hard hittin one of the weaker ones.
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
^^^^This was a Solid An Good Endin Punch set up was good an deliver perfect.....u came wit good structure an personals an Punchs A good verse Dropped....7.5/10=Bonecollector

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
^^^^Hot Opener i liked it one the better punchs u had....
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
^^^^This was ight kinda played heard the same concept alot ...
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
^^^^Good punch an setup an personal.....
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip
u”
^^^^Naw weak i heard the waiter tip to much switched around real played
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
^^^^ight punch nuthin special good delivery
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play
^^^^Nice Closin Punch Was good .....
Your verse had some good lines but some played punchs an a little streched.....No Hate......7/10=The Black plague
this was a good battle....but bone came consistent an solid the whole time an he Gets my vote.....BoneColletor....RETURN THE FAVOR...

Sik Wit It 05-29-05 11:01 AM

Voted For: The Black Plague

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
—1, not really a punch
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
—2, the LAD line has been used by Compose.. so, no
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
—5, decent, not hard hitting though
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
—5, decent
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
—3, avg. been used b4 too
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
—6, ur best line

overall.. u most had played.. or either weak punches in
ur drop here, u didn’t even come as hard in this battle tho..
only had one persona in there, didn’t see any wordplay.. u
practically had simple-rhyming in here, but overall.. ur
verse was okay, 22/60



All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
—5, decent opener
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
—4, avg. punch
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
—1, not feeling this punch
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
—6, pretty decent
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
—2, meh, weak
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
—6, decent persona

overall u had an aight drop here too.. almost all of ur
punches were hard-hitting, and a couple of them weren’t
the structure needs help though.. the personas were decent,
but overall u took this battle though.. 24/60

MyNamesGrafhYall 05-30-05 06:44 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Yooooooo Diz Wuz Real Close

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete

Nice Closer! Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Good 2 Sum Real Nice Wordplay & Punz In There, Nuthin 2 Personal, But Ur Lucky He Dint Have Many Personalz Neither, It Wuz Juz Punch Vs Punch, Lyke Tyson/Holyfield Or Sum Shit, And U Previeled, Propps 2 Ya, Real Nice Verse Homeboy


All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**

Pretty Decent Verse Dawg, Sum Iight Mettas, No Personalz Really Besidez Dat Puerto Rico Thang, And I Wuznt Feelin Dat, Culd Ov Worded A Few Linez Better, But U Still Bought It Live, Juz Dint Have Da Creativity In Ya Disses Lyke Bonecollector Did, Good Job Both Yall


Holla@Da Link Below Plz, Drop A Vote, Da Battle Iz Whack, It Wuz Mah First Battle, But All Da Mo Reazon 2 Get It Closed!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943


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