"Can't Touch This"
 

Left feed on Gattas joint and The Omen's joint...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...ctionzmusic.htm

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this song was okay, i liked how you tried sumthin new with the beat and shit, but i wasnt really fellin this beat...good lyrics, good flow (but i hate fucking slow spits), chorus is decent(lol)...quality is iffy or at least wuz when i listened to it, this song was decent but not your best.......werd, nice job thoguh

Damn dude, will you EVER give me any fuckin credit?? You dont like my beats but youre askin to use them?? Iight man thanx for the feed...Uppin

Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...

lol at the title, is this an mc hammer remix? jp ill peep this track n hit u with feed soon enuf

Yeah you used something new in the beat I liked that, you've got a good voice and the flow was easy to follow too. Nice punches and multies in there. Good job some parts made me laugh.

i liked the beat, you did have some majorly played lines... like the safe sex one
but its all good, I liked it overall doe fam, good flow and delevery for the beat
8/10
holla at da kid
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GOOD FLOW HERE WRAP IT UP LIKE SAFE SEX HAHAHAHAHAHA DOPE LINE FLOW IS INCREDIABLE SUN STANDING OVIATAION FROM CRISTOPHER REVEE HAHAHAHAHAHAHA LMFAO DOPE DOPE DOPE PUNCHES IS SICK FLOW IS PERFECTION BEAT IS DOPE IM REALLY FEELING THIS for real DOWNSOUTH TYPE SHIT WITH HOT LYRICS NOW I GOTTA LISTEN TO EVERYTHING ON THE PAGE LOL

LOL Thanx homie...Uppin

this shit was pretty good, quality is a little poppy, Im not a big fan of slow flow rhymes, but you did it correctly, that christopher reeves line was extremely played, the manacure bar was nice though, flow and delivery was pretty crisp, i like the beat, just watch those out-dated punches and try and improve that quality... keep droppin and peep "nah nah nah" feat fluidmoon...1

Will do...Thanx for the feed...Uppin

you already know how i feel about this track....beat is fire....you definitely have some dope lines....but u still need to send me the beat...im about done writing for the remix

uppin this shit u hoes!!!

Uppin this shit...

Feedback Bitches!!!!!!!!!

To the roof!!!!

damn Black lemme get on a remix to this lol...hot shit bruh....

Beat is nice, lyrics are cool, ya flow sounds like you forced it
Hook is catchy , nice shit BLack

aww naww

is u a chick or r u jus 12...u need a LOT more bass in ya voice..most of ya meta's n punches is weak/played ya flow is mega old school the beat was weak..


idk this was awfull IMO but keep gettin at em dog,theirs only room for improvement

LMFAO...Youre fuckin pathetic kid :laugh2:

^...yea listen to his audio...lol...i see no reason why he would say anything of that nature

LOL Weerd...Yo LFS, The remix is already done, but get at me for another song...

listenign as i type

beat on that rock vibe its defienently dope tho...its heavy n thumping hmmmmm send this beat 2 me black magic...AIM = Acuity2k5

hahah at sfae sex punchline...ur quality is nice for the mostpart but u fade in n oout in places at the end of linez....u cud turn ur vocals up a lil bit...lyrically its pretty nice some funny ass punchlines....hook is nice and it blends well with the beat...that damage kids bar is dope and then followed up wid the aethist n christ line DOPE...hahahaha u got some creativity sun....the cut out is nice idea but the beat comes in on the wrong syllable of ur vocals...this was anice drop fam :thumbup:

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191300

Thanx homie...I will RTF...Uppin!

To the roof bitches!!!!!!!

You need work on your quality, but other than that, it was pretty good man. The beat is fucking hot

Weerd...Thanx man...Uppin!