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_JooKsta_ vs Bonecollector
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8 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-14-05 at 01:48 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
_JooKsta_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 12:49 AM.
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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 12:51 AM.
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i spit barz,plus murder wit da chrome-projecter...merk ya closest of kin now u can really be a BoNe-CoLLeCtor... u wanna challenge,imma give u da 5th...go head shoot yaself kuz u n0t fuckin wit this... and dont tell me u a ThuG when u SwiTch-iN-SkiRts...i'll pull dat hamma back,klap! n leave u TwiTcHin-in-DiRt... ya writens is worth-less,not even close ya per-fect...how u Ckripin but i always see u High stepin wit pur-ses?... BoNe aint a threat like da taco-bell-dog...he AiNt PuShiN CraCK,how when dis pato*-fell-off?...lol imma off em,put a stop to his winnin-spree...and since he a CkrAb* dis guys my w0rst enemy... and i got energy,ta crack ya frame-in-half...DrOwN em in LiQuiD StEeL so he kan be a StaiNLesS-cKrab... pato*=faggit in spanish,im not good wit the spelling of the word but u know what im tryna say cKrab*= the word to dis a crip..he a crip so i kall em ckrab |
Rappers name da punisher , seems we can call you mr.slave..
Givin' it to you in the butt,like White castle its wat you crave.. slob ass nucca, i'll have his color flowing down the concrete... Pull the heat.and crush ya face..see ya set and repeat.... Kill Slobs When I See Slobs, is what ima do to ya crew crips go to heaven cus the sky's blue,slobs go to hell cus red aint true.. You try'n to fuck with me? ,Ha now rv can see jooksta get sliced quick.. Call me the magican they way i make slobs dissapear like an easy magic trick.. Ill come half ass and still merk a bitch ..have you pleadin for your life... performin surgical operation and rip ya head off with my switchblade knife |
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damn quit sleepin on dis battle...upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Voted For: _JooKsta_
very hard to vote but lets see this: flow -both Structure - Bonecollector Punchlines - Both Personals - .... Word/Nameplay - Jooksta creativity - Jooksta opeinin - Jooksta Closing - Bonecollector V/Jooksta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: _JooKsta_
Wasnt really feeling the gang nature of this battle but ok... Bone Collector--- Some good concepts for metaphors, punches didnt hit hard though, flow was ok Jooksta--- I liked that last line, punches hit harder, flow was ok Punches::: Jooksta Flow::: Tie Metaphors::: Bone collector Wordplay::: Jooksta Structure::: Bone collector Multis::: Jooksta Final Vote:::: Jooksta::::: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upin this fuckin battle.....for EXPLAINED VOTES only!!! Damn do u bastards know how ta vote properly???
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Voted For: Bonecollector
uuh okay...... opener-jooksta cuzz he had a decent personal...and bone ur's was kind of weak structure-bone his shit was neat and jooksta u need da fix dat it fukks up ya flow punchlines-bone...jooksta wasn't really feelin ur's nun of em stood out creativity-bone personals-jooksta enjoyed-bone v/bone |
Voted For: _JooKsta_
This was close but i gave it to you they both were pretty good, but i think you had a better finish |
Voted For: Bonecollector
i spit barz,plus murder wit da chrome-projecter...merk ya closest of kin now u can really be a BoNe-CoLLeCtor... 4...weak attempt at a play on his name!! u wanna challenge,imma give u da 5th...go head shoot yaself kuz u n0t fuckin wit this... 3...weak, no real punch!! and dont tell me u a ThuG when u SwiTch-iN-SkiRts...i'll pull dat hamma back,klap! n leave u TwiTcHin-in-DiRt... 3...again, no punch, just a lot of shit talkin!! ya writens is worth-less,not even close ya per-fect...how u Ckripin but i always see u High stepin wit pur-ses?... 5...ok fairly decent here!! BoNe aint a threat like da taco-bell-dog...he AiNt PuShiN CraCK,how when dis pato*-fell-off?...lol 5...pretty gud, but shit talkin still!! imma off em,put a stop to his winnin-spree...and since he a CkrAb* dis guys my w0rst enemy... 4...worst enemy, who cares, this aint a real punch!! and i got energy,ta crack ya frame-in-half...DrOwN em in LiQuiD StEeL so he kan be a StaiNLesS-cKrab... [0...WTF!!! no punch, no rhyme!! OVERALL: 24/70 (34%)[/B] Rappers name da punisher , seems we can call you mr.slave.. Givin' it to you in the butt,like White castle its wat you crave.. 5...weak shit, and some homo shit!! slob ass nucca, i'll have his color flowing down the concrete... Pull the heat.and crush ya face..see ya set and repeat.... 5...talkin at the blood, but not good with the wordplay!! Kill Slobs When I See Slobs, is what ima do to ya crew crips go to heaven cus the sky's blue,slobs go to hell cus red aint true.. 4...huh?? this was way weak!! You try'n to fuck with me? ,Ha now rv can see jooksta get sliced quick.. Call me the magican they way i make slobs dissapear like an easy magic trick.. 3...bleh!!! one of the biggest played concepts of all!! Ill come half ass and still merk a bitch ..have you pleadin for your life... performin surgical operation and rip ya head off with my switchblade knife 4...weak again, damn all weak!!! OVERALL: 21/50 (42%%) what the hell, this battle was retarded!!! Jooksta came with no punches really, a lot of shit talkin that wasn't even that good either, bonez, its like ya didnt try, ya had half ass rhymes with played concepts....lucky for you they were actual punches, played ones but still punches!!! V/ - Bonez RTF!!! links in the battle stats!!! WERD!!! |
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This is a good way ta vote....explained....wdf is u utha mutha fuckaz doin in here? Marv u complain how ni99az dont vote right....look at u son. and dat utha dude jimmy or wdf his name is....Just end ya regestration to dis site. Ice D i got u homie wit wun da links in ya sig. |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
BC: Verse was hot...Feeling the personals, and the punches struck hard...You were very consistent in this verse, which is what I love to see...Had some funny shit in there as well...Good verse _JooKsta_ : Verse was ok...didnt really have any hard punches, just alot of multies...Dont get me wrong, I am a huge fan of multies, but in order for them to work correctly in a battle, you must incorporate punches with them, which I felt you did not do as well as you couldve done with your verse... Close battle, but BC got it V/ BC |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Rappers name da punisher , seems we can call you mr.slave.. Givin' it to you in the butt,like White castle its wat you crave.. GOOD slob ass nucca, i'll have his color flowing down the concrete... Pull the heat.and crush ya face..see ya set and repeat.... NAH Kill Slobs When I See Slobs, is what ima do to ya crew crips go to heaven cus the sky's blue,slobs go to hell cus red aint true.. NICE You try'n to fuck with me? ,Ha now rv can see jooksta get sliced quick.. Call me the magican they way i make slobs dissapear like an easy magic trick.. LOL Ill come half ass and still merk a bitch ..have you pleadin for your life... performin surgical operation and rip ya head off with my switchblade knife OK =8/10 AN OK VERSE BUT IVE SEEN BETTER FROM YA........ VS i spit barz,plus murder wit da chrome-projecter...merk ya closest of kin now u can really be a BoNe-CoLLeCtor... GOOD u wanna challenge,imma give u da 5th...go head shoot yaself kuz u n0t fuckin wit this... NAH and dont tell me u a ThuG when u SwiTch-iN-SkiRts...i'll pull dat hamma back,klap! n leave u TwiTcHin-in-DiRt... OK a writens is worth-less,not even close ya per-fect...how u Ckripin but i always see u High stepin wit pur-ses?... OK BoNe aint a threat like da taco-bell-dog...he AiNt PuShiN CraCK,how when dis pato*-fell-off?...lol SO-SO imma off em,put a stop to his winnin-spree...and since he a CkrAb* dis guys my w0rst enemy... CRAP and i got energy,ta crack ya frame-in-half...DrOwN em in LiQuiD StEeL so he kan be a StaiNLesS-cKrab... SHIT =JUST AN OK VERSE BUT U DIDNT COME REALLY HARD ENOUGH V/BONECOLLECTOR |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Wow... This was a wack battle... Whats with all this gangsta talk and shit? Its the internet... Anyway, BC took this in my opinion... Basically Jooksta was ALL gangsta talk... BC wasn't all that good either, I've seen alot better from him... Basically what won it for BC was thay like about blue like the sky or whatever... jooksta had the multis but not the punches to back it up... And punches win over multis... Peace |
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