LexiKon vs MarvJay1009
 

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Don't get it twizted i wasn't duckin you just didn't have time to battle i haven't been on my computer in a while just been usin the one at school and i only get a half hour at the library so i couldn't drop nothin but now we can do this good luck

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Check in by: 05-18-05 at 02:44 PM

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LexiKon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 02:46 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 08:19 PM.

look..

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"

*his old name is mc skitlz...& im sure ya'll know wut skittles r

Voted For: LexiKon

Marv:
good structure, good vocab, good personal, good punchline... but your multi's wasn't dope

Lex:
good structure, better vocab, good personal, better punchline, good word play & multi's

v/ Lexikon

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
6...decent line, gud personal!!!
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
7...better, gud meta in there!!
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
5...not really feelin this one, not a hard hittin punch!!
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
7...LMAO!!! nice line, hottest bar of ya verse!!

OVERALL: 25/40


Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
5...decent meta, but talkin about his record is weak!!!
He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
7...LMAO!!! the 2nd line was funny!!!
You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
5...nah!! 2nd line was aight, but the first was played!!
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
5...weak again, mime references are fuckin played!!

OVERALL: 22/40

fairly weak battle, marv i expect better......ya both had some played concepts, i feel lex had more, marv came more consistent with the punches, both had a real nice bar that made me luagh, but overall marv was hittin harder with his wordplay and shit!!!

so V/ - Marv

RTF!!!! links are in my battle stats, go look!!!! WERD!!!!

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit, it flowed well.. it had some good punches, and the wordplay was good.

Best Line - da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*

Worst Line - punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".

LexiKon - Good flow, punches are good and you had some iight wordplay.

Best Line - Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute

Worst Line - You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs

OVERALL - Marv won this battle, his wordplay was better and his punches were better. He had a good flow, Lex you had a good flow to, your punches just wernt as strong.

Vote - Marv

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Voted For: LexiKon

LexiKon

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
^lego-line might be bit played but overall coo opener

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
^ROFl at that last line, had me cracking

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
^nice wordplay formed into a hard punch

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
^nice closer

Good battle verse right here, got that wordplay on lock and you had some damn hardhitting punches, no real personals though. I laughed my ass off at that second bar with them midgets, hahaha...good one there man! Flow's good, got some multis in there, not too much basic rhyming. Found great balance in your vocabulary, not too basic but not too complex either. Structure is cool and overall I was really feeling this verse man!


MaRVJay1009

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
^dope last line, nice personal, not feeling first line

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
^good wordplay but no real punch though

lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
^hehe funny bar

only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
^nice wordplay again, good closer

Nice verse here too, had dope personal in first line and good punches for the rest. I was feeling your flow here, also had some multis in there which improved that. My favo bar is the third one or the closer, they both nice filled with wordplay but the punch doesn't always come out too good like in the second bar. The vocab was cool, same level as LexiKon, structure looks nice as well. Some nice rhyming words here too.

My vote goes to LexiKon because he got me laughing with some of his bars, bit more creativity and stayed more consistent. No hate whatsoever Marv, you got nice verse as well but I have seen way better from you. Kinda got feeling you let this one off easy ya know...

Voted For: LexiKon

Punches-Lex...i feel his was more funnier ta me,and hard hitten also...Marv u got sum nice punches also

Multis-Marv...better usage of wordplay goes to u,Lex try added sum wordplay in ya verses

Personals-Marv...Battle verses need these,and Marv's personals towards Lex were funny..LmaO@Mc Skittlez

Vocab-Lex...nothin really eye popin but i give u this do to the use of a couple words the average person would look up in the dictionary cuz they dont know what dey mean

Opener-Lex...Nice punch,and personal in opener.nicely worded also

Closer-Marv...Nice personal,and punch here.Worded Nicely and also Funny LoL

Structure-Tie..both emcee verses were easy ta read

V/Lex Gets vote Due to hard punches

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/MaRVJay1009.....this was a good battle both dropped good verse but marv had some good punchs an was consistent wit the creative an he had good personals an structure.....Lex it seems u came to lightly i seen better from you ur punchs weren't that different some played..no personals from u really..........NO hate........
RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=m
Closer=m
Structure=m
Punchs=m
Vocab=m
Multi's=Tie (not many)
Personals=m
Wordplay=Tie
Overall=MaRVJay1009

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute

Leikon Yo Verse Wuz Alot Of Uncreative Punchez In Dere, Dat Opener Dint Hit At All, Da Closer Wuz Da Best U Had 2 Offer, Dat Wuz Sum Funny Shit, U Need 2 Work On Yo Personalz An Being Mo Creative An Orifinal Wit Da Wordplay, Try Staying Off Da Fillerz 2

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"

Good Verse MaRVJay1009, Da Punchez Wuz On Fiyah, Dey Wuz Consistantly Dropping, Da Wordplay An Da Choice Ov Da Wrding Fo Da Punchez Wuz Mo Creative An Harder Hitting Den Lexikon, An Everythan Wuz Original, Only Thang I Wuz Feeling Wuz Dat Diddy Line, Dat Iz Played, But Da Rest Of Yo Verse Wuz Fiyah

Vote/ MaRVJay1009

Plz Return Da Vote In Da Battlez In Mah Signature

Voted For: LexiKon


Wow This Was a Really Dope Battle No Lie
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Very Hard decision but Heres my Breakdown

Lexikon
Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
first of all Thats really Original never seen the technique used any where else and your wording was on target anhd the punch was good

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
:roll: OMFG That was Hot mayne Nice one there

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
Nice...Didnt Get it at first LOL But Nice
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
Nice little use of multi's and a def good Punch So Your whole verse basically was Very good :thumbup: nice Job

aii

Marv

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
Aii The 1st line wasnt worded all dat good it seemed kinda forced But the second line :thumbup: nice personal

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
That was Good Not the best but Good
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
:nono: Both Lines were sort of off but the punch ddnt connect how it shouldve in the second line bcuz your worded it wrong so that bar wasnt all dat
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
That was aii Man But Yet Your overall verse couldnt take my vote compared to Lex's verse ...sorry

Sorry To say this but lex gets my vote bcuz he came and hit harder with those punchez as you can see I explained my reasons already above so have a nice day

ps

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
—4, played punch, been used b4
He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
—6, decent punch
You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
—4, didn’t like this line
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
—7, pretty decent bar


Lex – 21/40, overall here u had an aight drop
only 2 bars were wack, cuz one of them was played
and the other was just weak.. could’ve added more
personas in there, & don’t center ur verse, just makes
it wack on that’s not how ur structure looks like, but
ur other 2 bars were good, though, & u had an aight
drop


da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
—7, pretty nice persona
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
—4, lunch-box lines = played
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
—6, decent persona
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a “roll of quarter's”
—5, average punch

Marv – 22/40, overall u had a good drop also,
Couple of punches need help on those but
Personally u had some decent personas, but
Also u had a good use of them in this advantage
In this battle, that lunch-box line was played
Cuz other members of RV & myself have alrdy
Used that shit, but that’s makes ur shit played too
Ur structure was okay, & the punches were decent
But overall u took this one by a little bit though..

..no hate

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Voted For: LexiKon

I'ma give this one to Lex. I think he was more consistent wit tha punches and he started off hot from tha first line to tha last. Marv had to catch it and shit. Because tha first couple of lines werent that hard hitting. Marv, yo verse was ight. I wasnt feelin alot of tha punches. I just feel they didnt connect like they shouldve. I didnt see too much wordplay in yo verse, but I seen alot of mettas. Which was coo. But overall, yo flow started lackin near tha end, and I dont feel yo verse was strong at all. Lex- I think yo verse was strong, and you came wit alot of consistency. I think yo punches were alot more hard hitting in this one. I felt you came out strong and stayed that way tha whole entire verse. You flow was on point, mainly because yo structure was flawless. Not a word that was in tha wrong place. Overall- I felt this was a good battle. Close, and I could see both guys are truly talented, but I think I'ma give this one up to Lex because his punches were stronger and they were more consistent.


Please RTF...link in sig. You have 1 day. If you don't, I'ma request that they remove my vote.

Lex....homie. I can't remember if you RTF'd. Since I can't remember, I'ma leave this one on, you lucky, but just make sure you always RTF. uppin this battle.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*

Ok name play

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".

Dope

lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..

Lol ok

only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"

Nice

VS

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"

Ok

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"

No played+wack+immature

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs

Ok

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute

Ha nice

Please return unbiased on the battle in my sig

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fam it aint dat serious...u got like 10 of my votes taken away already damm...let da shit go

dont exagerate its only 3 and 1 of mine got removed to if i wanted to be a punk i would get king solos and skriptz took of cuz those are hate votes those two punks dont like me so dont get alll butt hurt

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Voted For: LexiKon

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
^^nice concept/setup was ass thou
He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
^^played punch n concept
You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
^^ok, wasnt great thou
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
^^nice closer/personal
overall had 2 good concepts but ya closer was the best in ya verse, 2nd bar was ass, opener was nice, closer was solid
decent verse, try not to use played concepts man.pz
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da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
^^eh, setup ruined the punch...couldve been better marv
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
^^eh, kinda boarderline wack
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
^^ok,....nothin to hard hitting(was going on marv???)
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
^^nope, thats the weakest shit in this battle
didnt mind the meta but its not dissin your opponent at all
plus moma jokes n gay jokes are played beyong belief..
overall marv this was a weak battle on your side/personal was lame....no good punches buddy........
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rtf.......no hate