Babble.On vs Ax Dogg
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-15-05 at 09:47 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Ax Dogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 09:17 PM.

Babble.On has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 09:18 PM.

didn't understood why u posted back for me to murk you
baby don't cry, even if it was my intention to hurt you
new to RV, this nigga challengin me, ur post counts is 3
u be readin my battles to try to kill me by postin like me
whats Babble.On?, a wack nigga thinkin wack niggaz just can post around
and didin't made dat alone, was made by sum other wack nigga u found
this is just to much for u, u won't be controlin ur stability
ur impatient waitin for the due, cuz you think you got the ability
if you ain't really jokin and want to stay in the game
Lemme tell u, I ain't fuckin.... nigga change ur name

easydropin

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I’m really disturbed, Like blind people reading braile you’ll be feeling my verbs.
He’s the weedman? Okay, now I know in this battle I’m just “dealing with herbs”
No one peeps your tracks without me, this kid must study being whack devoutly.
I ditch losers like you, peeps know I’m a hustler, so I don’t need an “Ax about me”
Puts folks to sleep wit his raps, like I’m hungry for weapons, I’m eatin this ax.
Looks like all your lyrics are worse than shit, you already got beaten by A$(s)
I’m rough with more tools, like puncturing virgins I’ll bust this whore through.
You still a nobody homie, even this sites living legends tend to just ignore you!
I win my fights with superior vocab, fuck your punches I’m chucking mandibles.
What kind of homo would start a club for people who get off on fucking animals?
I’m a lyrical genius, I teach MC’s and get payed to tutor. Babble slays computers.
You in a bad place dogg. I’m RV’s Bob Barker reminding vets to spay and neuter.

Explanations:

Bar 1: Blind people read braile with their fingers. His sig says “the weedman”
Bar 2: I’m a hustla homie, Nigga ax about me! About me as in, around me.
Bar 3: Axes are weapons. He lost to Ca$per (A$)
Bar 4: He tried out for Living Legents and got ignored

Bar 5: Mandibles are knuckles. His sig says “Sheep Club” He fucks sheep?
Bar 6: Bob Barker told Price is Right audiences to spay and neuter. That’s cutting off a dogs testicles.

Voted For: Babble.On

meh, babble gets this easy....

he had harder, more direct punches, and all-round better flow...which was nice to read.....ax, your stuff wasn't that great, too basic, need to elevate, but you're coming along....just up the creativity of your verse and add a little complexity
babble, cool verse, like how it flowed and use of multies was efffective......you had more witty lines but most of them were kinda self-glorifying....actually your whole closer was.....but you had personals, and harder punches,.....and thats what wins

v/babble

Uppin for more votes on this shit

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nuthin to say..... mine was easydropin urse was harddropin.... my bad..... u went hard...

but if anyone can vote for an easydropin verse, cuz he was new n there was no much to drop a personal or more punchlines....... my flow was better if u read n his verse was only:
I'm good and ur bad:



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Voted For: Ax Dogg

I’m really disturbed, Like blind people reading braile you’ll be feeling my verbs.
He’s the weedman? Okay, now I know in this battle I’m just “dealing with herbs”
booooo.....sooooo last week..lol...PLAYED!
No one peeps your tracks without me, this kid must study being whack devoutly.
I ditch losers like you, peeps know I’m a hustler, so I don’t need an “Ax about me”
wack played....wordplay from a rapper
Puts folks to sleep wit his raps, like I’m hungry for weapons, I’m eatin this ax.
Looks like all your lyrics are worse than shit, you already got beaten by A$(s)
ummmm.....no
I’m rough with more tools, like puncturing virgins I’ll bust this whore through.
You still a nobody homie, even this sites living legends tend to just ignore you!
ummmm...ok
I win my fights with superior vocab, fuck your punches I’m chucking mandibles.
What kind of homo would start a club for people who get off on fucking animals?
no!
I’m a lyrical genius, I teach MC’s and get payed to tutor. Babble slays computers.
You in a bad place dogg. I’m RV’s Bob Barker reminding vets to spay and neuter.
that huer u more than him...lmao


this was average....another newb that was probably dope on a wack site....and thinks hes the best here



didn't understood why u posted back for me to murk you
baby don't cry, even if it was my intention to hurt you
ok.....
new to RV, this nigga challengin me, ur post counts is 3
u be readin my battles to try to kill me by postin like me
ummmm..no
whats Babble.On?, a wack nigga thinkin wack niggaz just can post around
and didin't made dat alone, was made by sum other wack nigga u found
ummmm no....
this is just to much for u, u won't be controlin ur stability
ur impatient waitin for the due, cuz you think you got the ability
ummm.....no
if you ain't really jokin and want to stay in the game
Lemme tell u, I ain't fuckin.... nigga change ur name
ok.......

not any better than the other guy......


so i looked at.....both battles....and they both suck....so i had to see if there was anything i didnt like....and the thing i didnt like was babble explaining his punches...which is herbish.....


V/AX

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Omfg, you must be kidding me. What the fuck is wrong with you people?

This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 

Checking polls....................................

Voted For: Babble.On

Flow: Blah
Punches: Babble
Personals: Babble
Wordplay: Eh Neither
Metas: Babble
Multis: Babble
Enjoyment: Babble

Vote: Babble On

Explanation: Well Ax dogg came waaaaaaaaaay to basic i mean he didnt even really throw a punch and didnt do much of anything to his opponent .. babble on mixed it up with personals and punches consistently which took this battle.

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This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 

Readin the polls............................................

This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 

fix ur structure. too much to be tryna read................

^ Lol, everyone on this site uses short ass bars, it's hard to get used to.

Voted For: Babble.On

Babble On...u have a ok verse...u lost me in ya flow sumtime but i found myself again...u had sum ok punches,nuthin to brag about....structure is horrible which prolly messed up my reading.

Ax Dog-Ur verse was pretty basic and need lots of work...creare sum punches and come wit better personals...u got the potensial it just seem like u really dont try ta make people say "Damn!"...

punches-Babble On
Structure-Ax
vocab-Babble On
Flow-Ax
Opener-Babble On
Closer-Tie

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Good Looks Folks


Uppin this for some more Votes

Wow...... none of those should have been inadequate feedback....even the vote against me lol.


Oh well, uppin.

Uppin

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This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 

Just checking...................................I'm lazy so i dont feel like voting.

wtf happened?................. why it all came back to 0, that's not fair

^ The votes were DQ'd because apparently they weren't explained.

Damnit, uppin for more votes.

lmfao@my shizzle being disqualified........lame...

Uppin this shit one more god-fucking damn time you cocksuckers

Uppin again....vote on my god damn battle morons..

Voted For: Babble.On

Babble.On - this was a close battle...but you had better punchlines and flow... your structue was good.. but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 8/10

Ax Dogg - again this WAS A CLOSE BATTLE.. but Babble.On had better punches and flow.. your flow was iight and your punches was iiight too.but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 7.5/10

V/ Babble.On

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at least an honest vote........ lol
............................uppin................. ......

Thanks for voting, uppin for some more votes......

Uppin this motherfucker for votes.................

Still uppin this for you lazy fucks that won't vote.

Bump, fuck this inactive ass non-voting site goddamnit.

Voted For: Ax Dogg

babble started off real good but the whole thing wasn't tight like ax doggs babble-7/10 Ax Dogg-9/10

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still uppin............................................. hell yeah!!!!

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Yo Ax Dogg Took Diz EZ

U Need 2 Get 2 Da Point Quicker In Yo Linez Babble.On, Da Personalz Wuz Iight, U Had Sum Ok Wordplay 2, Alot Ov Played Concepts

Wuznt Feelin Yo Closer AX Dogg, Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Tite Tho, Good Rhyme Scheme, Good Flow, Punz Were Iight, Room For Improvement In Yo Wordplay, But Overall Yo Shit Wuz Da Better Verse

Holla@Da Link Below Plz, Drop A Vote, Da Battle Iz Whack, It Wuz Mah First Battle, But All Da Mo Reazon 2 Get It Closed!
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thaz... uppin.....................................

This was feedback posted for Babble.On
 

hey bitch sheep club is a crew you stupid asshole...."he fucks sheep?" you dumb bastard at least we dont have a wack ass name as babble on ,you dumb fuck........

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Im votin for ax cuz babble on is just plain stupid......(hey dipshit!, we dont need you explaining to us what axes are...we aint stupid.
Let me see you in living legends.....numb nuts!...think before you talk.)
Ax's flow is great and clearly has more experience than whatever his name is.

Voted For: Babble.On

you would have ripped him if u had better punches because ya structure was real good but i treat a battle as a boxing match and u didnt hit hard

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