Adrenaline vs CA$per
 

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10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-16-05 at 03:50 PM

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CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 03:22 PM.

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 03:28 PM.

How r u gonna battle me,with that verse bein so obserd……
Cause hows he gonna punch me, when,hesa star warz nerd…..
Dogg u make or break no one-unlike your user title claimz……
Dogg if your rapz were hair,u couldn’t be saved by rogain……
Your shits so plain I mean,look at your battle with ax youll see……
Tha only way u could even get one vote,is by mentionin me…….
talk about sumone get burned like matches,well than u flared……
its cause adrenilen STINKZ like sulfur,hes highly compared……
u even rymed dogg with dawg,sorry that’s not really a ryme….
but that would explain thou,why your record is six and nine…..
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather…..
if your so pumped with adrenilin,im like ritalin makin u mellow…
u couldn’t be KODAC matrial,if ya had tha spokesman for jello.

ayo...here I go like dis...

Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business
"somebody stop me" cuz im leave dis kid's whole face "masked"
ya im "glowin in the dark" n' my lightsaber will have u harrased
leave you "clowned" so bow down b4 u get ya head "circused"
sever ya lungs n' ya "click" so even ya "phonelines" get nervous
ya im coppin da "sickest" flow that's why im "rushin" the system
I "make u or brake you" so stop "fallin off" b4 u lose ya "rhythm"
tried to battle me on "da 13th" so u can clear ur "suspicions"
but ur a "ghost" u fear me cuz my shots to emcees they rid em
...

just a quickey...dont know how much time left so whatever...

judge...

ok...I think u won dis...but whatever...text is herbish...im tryin to get a mic man...


uppin...

uppin this for votes yall.........................................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Easy.....................checking Polls.............lol

Voted For: CA$per

Adrenaline:

Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business
^^^^bad openin, good line
"somebody stop me" cuz im leave dis kid's whole face "masked"
ya im "glowin in the dark" n' my lightsaber will have u harrased
^^^^nah
leave you "clowned" so bow down b4 u get ya head "circused"
sever ya lungs n' ya "click" so even ya "phonelines" get nervous
^^^lol, good line
ya im coppin da "sickest" flow that's why im "rushin" the system
I "make u or brake you" so stop "fallin off" b4 u lose ya "rhythm"
^^^wack
tried to battle me on "da 13th" so u can clear ur "suspicions"
but ur a "ghost" u fear me cuz my shots to emcees they rid em
^^^^wack

ur problem was tryin too much to have a wordplay that you didn't had and again u talkin to much of a ghost that's old....

Ca$per:

How r u gonna battle me,with that verse bein so obserd……
Cause hows he gonna punch me, when,hesa star warz nerd…..
^^^^good personal
Dogg u make or break no one-unlike your user title claimz……
Dogg if your rapz were hair,u couldn’t be saved by rogain……
^^^^good
Your shits so plain I mean,look at your battle with ax youll see……
Tha only way u could even get one vote,is by mentionin me…….
^^^^Good punchline
talk about sumone get burned like matches,well than u flared……
its cause adrenilen STINKZ like sulfur,hes highly compared……
^^^^mmmmm....
u even rymed dogg with dawg,sorry that’s not really a ryme….
but that would explain thou,why your record is six and nine…..
^^^^great punchline
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather…..
^^^^good line
if your so pumped with adrenilin,im like ritalin makin u mellow…
u couldn’t be KODAC matrial,if ya had tha spokesman for jello.
^^^^oooohhhhh..... good closing

U got the punchlines.... a good battle

V/ Ca$per

uppin this .................................................. ..........to tha top....

bump to tha mah fukkin top ................................................

im no longer uppin this due to knowing I lost... .

Voted For: CA$per

Punches-Ca$...wasnt really hard hitten,but its the effort that counts...elevate cuz u have potensial

Vocab-Ca$...nice use of words,mainly basic

Multis-None...Really didnt pinpoint any multi usage in etha emcees verse...so nobody gets this category

Personals-Both...i liked how u both were comin directly at each utha...thats how a battle should be..

Opener-Ca$...Lol what got u the win in this category was that Star Wars Line...Lmaoo dude got a Light Saber in his sig ROTFLMAO..

Closer-Both...nothin really hard hitten,so u tie in this category..

Ca$= 6/10
Adrenaline=5/10

Voted For: CA$per

WHOAH nice Battle!Adrenaline Likes Ya Linez Man Like Da Wordplay N Punches!Scheme Was Good!But I have To Give It To Casper! Reasons
1)Just Came Sik Wid It
2)Punches Came Harder
3)Word Scheme Was alot better
(But its A honest Vote)
VOTE>>Casper

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline: You had a good verse, witty punches that connected. Consistant punches all the way through ya verse. Nice metaphors and good personal dissing Ca$per directly.
Fav bar.
Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business

Overall, 55%.

Ca$per: You had a decent verse, but alot of your bars were basic. Some of your punches weren't that great. Not enough personals in my opinion.
Fav bar.
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather

Overall, 35%.
v/Adrenaline, just dropped harder. No hate, Adrenaline please rtf in my sig. Much appreciated.

hey omni vision lick my nuts u fag ill tear u apart boi u dont want none of this bitch with yer fake ass votes stay tha fukk up out my battle hoe,.........
uppin

bump.............................................. .................................

Voted For: CA$per


CA$per

How r u gonna battle me,with that verse bein so obserd……
Cause hows he gonna punch me, when,hesa star warz nerd…..
^coo punch as opener

Dogg u make or break no one-unlike your user title claimz……
Dogg if your rapz were hair,u couldn’t be saved by rogain……
^good bar

Your shits so plain I mean,look at your battle with ax youll see……
Tha only way u could even get one vote,is by mentionin me…….
^bit self-glorification tho, no real punch

talk about sumone get burned like matches,well than u flared……
its cause adrenilen STINKZ like sulfur,hes highly compared……
^coo playing off his name

u even rymed dogg with dawg,sorry that’s not really a ryme….
but that would explain thou,why your record is six and nine…..
^whooooo, getting personal right here hehe

how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather…..
^elevating lines are bit played but it's still hard punch though

if your so pumped with adrenilin,im like ritalin makin u mellow…
u couldn’t be KODAC matrial,if ya had tha spokesman for jello.
^tight wordplay in first line ended off with punch in second one

Nice verse here, was quite consistent with hard punches and got some personal stuff going on in there. Found nice balance in your vocab, had flow on lock, structure was cool. Only think to work on is keeping up the pace, like hitting hard in every bar, trying to avoid fillers but you're getting better every time i read battle of you! Keep it up!


Adrenaline

Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business
^coo opener, could've been worded differently to hit harder though

"somebody stop me" cuz im leave dis kid's whole face "masked"
ya im "glowin in the dark" n' my lightsaber will have u harrased
^self-glorification and no punch

leave you "clowned" so bow down b4 u get ya head "circused"
sever ya lungs n' ya "click" so even ya "phonelines" get nervous
^hehe, nice bar

ya im coppin da "sickest" flow that's why im "rushin" the system
I "make u or brake you" so stop "fallin off" b4 u lose ya "rhythm"
^only second half of second line is about your opponent, rest is about you

tried to battle me on "da 13th" so u can clear ur "suspicions"
but ur a "ghost" u fear me cuz my shots to emcees they rid em
^first line seemed like good set-up but you failed to finish it in second line

Coo verse you wrote here, had some nice creative punches, attempts to get personal but it didn't always work out that good in fact. What I noticed about your verse is that you use self-glorification a lot which can be good as one filler but not if you use it several times in a short verse, that's something you should try to avoid. Vocab is cool, was feeling ya flow and structure was cool.

Vote goes to CA$per because I feel he had harder punches and personals than Adrenaline, no hate though...y'all got potential for sure!

Voted For: CA$per

I dun like dis nigga but he gets the vote for destroying this guy. Good Punches, and hella personals on the star wars. The best verse i seen HIM spit. Still ain't messin wit me. thread closed. Casper. EZ