Wickedclown vs L.I.
 

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Check in by: 05-19-05 at 06:57 PM

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L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 07:13 PM.

Wickedclown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 05:17 PM.

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D

Voted For: L.I.

L.I.
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
ok, not hard, but ok 5/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
haha, nice 7/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
NO! played 0/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
good, kinda played though, 6/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
ok lol, nice, 8/10
overall = 28/50
Nice lines, but some were played, closer was nice, bitch slap line was good, I know you didn't try against this guy your hardest though, but overall it was good, and stayed solid

Wicked Clown:
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
your just saying "I wanna drown you" 2/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
you suprised me, this was ok, but not good, 5/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
not good man, 2/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
um, no! 1/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
blah, 2/10
overall = 12/50
meh, you had one ok line, weren't consistent, your personals were all in your set-ups, shoulda made punches out of them, that's what made you lose in my eyes

v/ L.I.

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lmao jack the ripper who has beef with me... hmmmmm wow... ok hate vote to be deleted

Voted For: Wickedclown

L.I.
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
you should know this is played boooooo!
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
meh...ok
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
PLLLLAAAAAAYYYYYED like a PS2
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
ight
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
ha ha ha ha ah ha aha NO......

you came wack from what i've seen this was one of your gay verse gayer than guys gettin ass raped

6.0/10

WC
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
personal.......ok ok
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
nice meta, punch
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
again nice wordplay.....hmmmmm
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
this was meh..not feelin it like i was numb
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
was ight

you had a better overall verse with some nice wordpay


7.0/10

V/Wickedclown

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which 1 of you's have me blacklisted..?
honestly?...bigpapa76..? or li..? cuz thats some weak ass shit
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daz wouldve posted this
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I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^^SIMPLE, SHORT BUT OK OPENER
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^^EH, WEAK SHIT L.I
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^^FILLER N REALLY WASNT FEELIN IT
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^^NICE SHIT, BEST BAR N PUNCH SO FAR
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^^NICE CLOSER
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WEAK AT FIRST BUT YA VERSE PICKED UP AFTERWARDS
SOME LINES HAD NO REAL PERSONAL N WERE MORE LESS
REALLY WEAK IN A SENSE, BUT OVERALL, WELL WORDED..
METAS WERE OK,..........DECENT DROP..
BUT HMM, WHERES THE PERSONALS..?
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everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^^NAH, SHIT WAS WORDED AWFULLY WRONG
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^^NICE BAR, IT ACUALLY HAS SUBSTANTIAL MEANING TOO
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^%^PUNCH WAS WEAK.....NOT A GOOD BAR
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^^BLAH, HELL NO,
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^^WAS OK, BUT REAL WEAK FOR A CLOSER
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OVERALL I GOTTA GO WITH L.I, EVEN THOUGH I HATE VOTIN
FOR A AT THAT NEVER HAS PERSONALS..............
PZ^^ST8 UP HONEST VOTE.......

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This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

ummm......sounded like you won but dont fell like posting real feedback......but checking polls

This was feedback posted for Wickedclown
 

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uppin for the fam, ayo how did jtr's vote get dq'd when its the same exact type as voke's vote? that's bullshit.

This was feedback posted for Wickedclown
 

Nice drops both of you............................and good luck in the crew battle.................

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this battle is fucking bullshit.. UPPING............

This was feedback posted for Wickedclown
 

Just checking for the record of this battle, no vote.

yo...EFL SUCKS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PEOPLE NEED TO VOTE!

uppin for votes on crew battle..............................

wow this is RETARDED.. .fuckin uppin it AGAIN...........

Voted For: Wickedclown

L.I. Verse

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^ nice opener i good flow punch good too

Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^ punch ok...fake personal though so...

This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^ flow good, punch good

Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^ again nice punch....decent flow

He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^ Rhyme forced at the end and kinda self-g at the beginning of the 2nd line

Overall
Consistant verse no personals, punches were good i liked this verse not special from L.I. to be honest and the closer wasn't as good as previous bars to be honest

Wickedclown Verse

everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^ Opener coulda been worded better...lacked connection

faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^ lol i liked this good punch/personal

leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^ lol crazy good rhyme

gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^ 1st line good on his age that was aimed...nice bar

ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^ nice closer i liked it

Overall
Whoa WC came hard wit the punches in that one...honestly best spit from ya there...some good punches equal perhaps to L.I. stronger in 1 or 2 areas...you surprised me...this was good...some nice personals in there too closer was stronger than L.I. but Opener wasn't...but this was a good battle...

V/Wickedclown...more consistant less SG more personals, punches were also good too...L.I. came good IMO but WC got a surprise win here...RTF in my sig (vs EC) Within 3 days or vote removed

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Wickedclown

i think wickedclown took this wit a overall better verse. i was feelin his verse more. he came wayyy harder wit tha personals, and thats tha main reason he got my vote. LI came a lil hard, but i think his punches were a lil too soft. some of his shit was irrelevant, and didnt hit like they shouldve. mainly because of line wordage, but other than that, it was just ight for me. WC gets my vote. an overall better verse, wit better flow to it. and harder hittin personals.

vote....Wickedclown

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uppin this shit.... shit was an ownage battle lets get some votes

Bump this up FUckah'z.......................................... .......

Voted For: L.I.

uuuutttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrr weakness in this battle.....

He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D

^^^^^ that was the only decent line from either of u...... and it was complete ownage

that bar won the batle hands down..... both had the weakest shit...... Wicked, all u do is make statements, u dont really throw punches or anythin..... and that makes ur whole verse real weak.... u didnt have any strong metas or wordplay or anythin in there...... first bar, meh, and the rest was ugly..... and with LI, it was last line "DAMN THAT WAS DOPE AS FUCK" and the rest was playedness or easy to think up concepts..... that separated u two..... that one bar, and the fact that LI had concepts lol....

for that, LI gets my vote but this was an extremely weak battle in my eyes

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

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Uppin Damn It Fucking Vote!................................

Voted For: L.I.

L.I. is a pretty cool guy..

Mondo Thugs........

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i was feelin LIz verse more and he had better punchz
therefor he getz my vote...weak battle

Uppin for more votes..................................

Voted For: L.I.

uppin this............................................

Voted For: L.I.

this was a blowout

L.I - even though ya punches aint really hit hard u still won..ya closer was ok but it was kinda wack..2nd bar was defintely not good..after that u did pretty well..i really liked that hairline bar.....7/10




Wickedclown - wow..u suck..ya whole verse had no punches..no personals..no wordplay..no nothing..u defiitely lost this won easily.....2/10




L.I wins!!!!!

Voted For: Wickedclown

Wickedclown - Good spit, it flowed well, punches were on target and you had some good personals also.

Best Line - faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef

Worst Line - leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds

L.I. - Alright spit, had some good flow, and the punches were pretty decent.

Best Line - I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing

Worst Line - Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy

OVERALL - Wicked took this battle, he had better personals and his punches were solid. L.I. came pretty weak, his flow was on but he didnt have much wordplay, and punches wernt as hard as wickeds.

Vote - Wickedclown

haha yer still here kid? i remember u rode me way back. damn those were the days

I guess I should up this .........

Voted For: L.I.

aiight lets see:
Wicked:
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
wth? no......... 3/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
ehh......... 4/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
Not hard hittin'. no punch really 3/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
ok..... 4/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
no hard punch..... 2/10

damn, this wasn't that great. You had good flow. But try and make your punches hit harder by adding some wit and some wordplay maybe. till then keep elevating. 16/50 (32%)

L.I.:
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
haha nice, not that hard tho.... 5/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
ehh.. it's cooo.. 3/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
lmao.... nice....... 8/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
lmao.. wow.... nice 8/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
haha nice..... 6/10

Aiight you started bad, but picked it up nicely in the end. good shit. Nice punches. 30/50 (60%)


overall easy to see who won. But props to both for spittin' and yea,

v/L.I.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402