~Babylon~ vs marvjay1009
 

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No Recycling
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~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 02:18 AM.

u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 11:27 AM.

look.....

dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**

*babylon is a planet....u'll get it

**and governer mc grevy was new jersey's governer..but then came out da closet and told everybody he was gay

babylons not a planet........................................lol

yes it is u dick...............................n u wonder why u still in da 9th grade & u 19

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
^^ LoL good punch cuz i get it 7/10
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
^^ RoFl yo dat shit was funni 9/10
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
^^ good punch 7/10dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
^^ LoL good punch yo 7/10did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
^^ i kno bout dat homo ass nigga he was on tv b4 good punch tho 7/10

u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
^^ aight punch but i dont curr about wat u iz 7/10

u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
^^ good punch on da real 8/10

"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^ didnt rhyme not a good punch 4/10

at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
^^ aight punch culd of been worded betta 6/10

marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
^^ dont get it realli so nah 3/10

aight marv took dis he verse was betta n he came harder threw da whole thing

vote-marvjay1009

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Voted For: ~Babylon~

~Babylon~ You had a good spit, punches were landin' at it flowed well.

Best Line - at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night

Worst Line - u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy


MaRVJay1009 - iight spit, kinda whack to what you usally got. flow was iight. Punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".

Worst Line - dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*

OVERALL - Good battle, both came hard. I think bab won this, I liked his punches and flow better. Marv you should have tried harder, there wasnt many good punches.

Vote - ~Babylon~

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This was a pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to Marv..

Marv
dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
LOL!, nice opener
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
Decent
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
Ha.. nice
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
lol, the parkers..decent
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
Nice punchlines, decent closer

Bablyon
u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
Decent opener , alittle self glorious
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
Eh.. decent
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
I dont think that rhymes?
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
...you called him dope? but your tryin to diss him..guess it was decent
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
nice closer

Overall vote- Goes to marv, to me he came harder , nicer punhclines..some okay personals..babylon shyt was weak, and some of his punchlines werent hitten , ... overall keep it up and elevate both .

Voted For: ~Babylon~

babylon got this hands down, overall the more consistant verse, hard hittin personals an pounches where as marv had some useless rhymes which would of been aight for open mic, but it dont cut it in battles....vote babylon.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv gets this, he came wayyyyy harder...
his punches were a lot funnier and hit harder, nice wordplay and flowed well..

babylon, ya structure was good and shit flowed well, but your punches wernt as good. thats why marv gets my vote, no hate.

RTF in sig.

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

marv good shit off a keystyle
babylon more self glorify than punches, good battle

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

kk mary j-punches were ight nuthin great but did tha job flow was good structure was good vocab was good dope personals so overall this was a decent battle verse for this guy any way.....

babylon-way too much talk bout yo self like tha first few lines were bout you any way structure good flow ight vocab was tight famz good werk there i fekt u couldve had this one easily if ya hadnt of talked bout your self at tha first good drop both return tha favour or vote will be removed..........

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Good Battle Both

Babylon=
Nyce Verse, Opening Few Bars Didnt Really Hit Hard, But Frum Da ''Mid Summers Night'' Lyne Onwards, Ya Verse Started 2 Pick Up. Nice Wordplay Thruout, Da First 2 Bars I Didnt Really Feel Had Much Ov An Effect. Last 4 Lines Were Nyce, Good Personals & Creative Punch, If Only U Kept Dat Consistancy In Ya Whole Verse, Ya Openin 2 Bars Really Let U Down 29/50

Marvjay1009=
Real NiceWordplay Thru Ya Whole Verse, Dat ''Nicky & Kim'' Lyne Wuz Pretty Decent Dawg, Nuthin 2 pPersonal In Ya' Verse, But Da Dope Punz & Nice Wordplay In Nearly Every Line Getz U Da Vote, Wuznt Feeling Yo' Closer, But Everythin Else Wuz Consistant, Creative & Had An Effect On Da Outcome Ov Da Battle 43/50


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Voted For: ~Babylon~

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634
^^^ return the vote
marv-
dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
^^^sayin u have sex with someones mother... i would say just might be played out... not feelin
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
^^dont like
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
^^^sexual punch... not very good
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
^^^so the punch is saying he doesn't drive cars? not good
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
^^finisher was a gay punch? not good
not feelin ya verse at all, your punches weren't hard hittin at all.

marv-
u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
^^ self glorification... not feelin
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
^^momma joke played, but decen't flip
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^good punch, liked this
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
^^ don't relly like this... dont like leading into punches with the first line like that... and not a hard punch
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
^^^kinda s/g... not really likin it either,

vote- bab- cuz...
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^^ this is the only line that was an actual original and witty line and not played concept.

return with a vote on my battle PLEASE... its gettin slept on mad.

Voted For: ~Babylon~

Wow......what happened to you Marvy. I used to think you were nice back in the day, but you really seemed to have fell off. Babs took you pretty easily in this one in my opinion. Your lines were stretched as hell and a lot of the punches were just gay. The Plan-it line was weak, so was the pink slip one. I think they might have been alright if they were worded correctly, but they weren't. Babs had a decent line or two. I liked the Amerikaz Nightmare/wouldn't dream of it line. The rest were mediocre, but still seemed better than all of Marvy's....

Vote - Babylon

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
^lol...good opener
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
oh shit...nice..
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
lol..nice..
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
nice..
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
creative closer...

good shit good punches very good personals...overall killa!!..lol

overall:9.3/10











u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
^too self glore not dat much of a punche
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
^ok....
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^ummm no..
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
^basic..
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
^bad closer....

wasn't dat much personals...was kinda basic...so overall decent verse..

overall:5/10

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

I think that MaRVJay1009 got this battle because i feel that MaRVJay1009 came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt MaRVJay1009 got it was effective and was on point ~Babylon~ you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to MaRVJay1009 good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to MaRVJay1009 and flow and structure i'll give to ~Babylon~.

V/MaRVJay1009 RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed