Newkid vs Omnivision
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines.
No Crew Votes.
No Recycling.
No Biting.
No d/r.
No hate.
3-0 K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-17-05 at 12:12 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Closed.. expired battle win

Omnivision has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 11:43 AM.

Yeah, some of my lines are stretched but w/e.

Damn, you gonna accept this or what?
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NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 12:07 PM.

yo....

fam u yok bitch 'punches wont blow up' take ya hand off dem rockets
dis bull homo........like a old pair of jeans he likes 2 'hang n da closet
u not hard......... wen i squeeze da handle watch and see b scramble
quit rappin.............onli time u spit hot wen UPN like da TV CHANNEL
on da real................i seen sum ya shit stop poetry ya shits trash kid
shuld of been named 'lady stroller' bcuz his mom wanted a miss carriage
4get rappin............. bcum a baker faggit get n da kitchen fix me a cake
dont mean give ya text a cast............wen i say give ya battles a break
da tek gon scream like a bench player its gon leave u on a second string
wat u like 19 20, tryina elivate on a rap site?thaught u stop growin at 17

This was feedback posted for Omnivision
 

this shit was hot im feelin both verses 4 real i was real interested in the battle n i think that yall was hot in here well keep it up but lookin at newkids verse n him droppin 1st but not to much ahead he did real good n im goin wit him for goin strong n original in the beggin wit some rea nice punches on just about every line. nothin but Hints of Advice no hate or ridin

thanks cus uppin for some votes appreciate da feed

I think this is in the bag, yo. Bumping this battle.

This was feedback posted for NewKid
 

onli time u spit hot wen UPN like da TV CHANNEL

^^Lmaoooo funny shit...(only a slow person wouldnt get that)

Stop fucking feeding, start voting in this battle.

This was feedback posted for Omnivision
 

checkin the polls.. good verse omni...............fuck you newkid..

I aint vote because I thought OMNI would win, but Newkid's a hoe and would take it as a hate vote.

This was feedback posted for Omnivision
 

checkin polls...

Damn, so much feedback and no voting going on. This sucks.

This was feedback posted for NewKid
 

checkinn pollssssssssssssssss

upppin 4 mah nigga newkid

uppin dis shit get da fukk out of hurr konfliktz u didnt beat me

This was feedback posted for NewKid
 

if i could vote for this battle you would get the win

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Voted For: NewKid


NK
Aiight Man Nice Verse You Had Some Decent Shit Here, Try To Work On Structure, Only Put Them Dots If There's A Pause In Your Verse, You Had Some Decent Wordplay Here Which Was Good, Punches Was Here Along With Your Vocabulary Good Verse Overall Man

Omni
First Off Man You Had Played Out Punches, Your Vocabulary Wasn't Even That Good, Your Personals Was Whack Didn't Really Hit To Hard, You Had Good Structure Though, Wordplay Hmm Meh, Iffy Shit Man But Overall Aiight Verse Man

Vote-NewKid
He Had Better Punches, Better Flow, Lacked Structure But Also Had Good Vocabulary And Personals
No Hate, Peace

Bullshit, there was no personals :bored:. This site is so wack, they don't even get wordplay.

This was feedback posted for Omnivision
 

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Voted For: NewKid

This was a pretty weak battle but im give this one to Newkid, to me he came harder

Newkid
fam u yok bitch 'punches wont blow up' take ya hand off dem rockets
dis bull homo........like a old pair of jeans he likes 2 'hang n da closet
Ehh..weak opener ..could have been better

u not hard......... wen i squeeze da handle watch and see b scramble
quit rappin.............onli time u spit hot wen UPN like da TV CHANNEL
[b]Decent..could have been better
on da real................i seen sum ya shit stop poetry ya shits trash kid
shuld of been named 'lady stroller' bcuz his mom wanted a miss carriage
Dont think thats rhymes...
4get rappin............. bcum a baker faggit get n da kitchen fix me a cake
dont mean give ya text a cast............wen i say give ya battles a break
Decent
da tek gon scream like a bench player its gon leave u on a second string
wat u like 19 20, tryina elivate on a rap site?thaught u stop growin at 17
Nice closer

Ominivision
I pressed NewKid to drop hard, i mean he acts like a thug.
But i even tryed to dare him, and he replyed "I dont do drugs".
Naw,weak...could have been beter
You can't hold your own, i know you dont possess potential.
Because, your skills aren't known of, like its confidential.
Nice
Your escapades have to stop, so your battling days have to end.
I mean Omni will send you from ashes to ashes, like this threads a crematorium.
Way stretched, could have been better
Yous gassed kid, so we'll see your jaw drop when your losing.
Since i don't even need a stencil or pads to draw ^that^ conclusion.
Worded bad , could have been alot better
Yous can't hang with superiors, you brawl like you "New" to text.
Your writtens been diminished, so i'll end ya battle cry w/ a kleenex.
Nice closer

Explaination: ima give this one to newkid , he just came alittle harder, omnivison had some wack , and played lines, same with newkis , he just came alittle harder..Keep it up both elevate

Vote - Newkid

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This was feedback posted for NewKid
 

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