young dollar vs josh654789
Battle Rules:
6 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-20-05 at 12:09 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
josh654789 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 12:13 PM.
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alright man, so im ready now, lets do this real quick..
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Just PM me when u tell me u dropped ya lines cuz i aint waist raps if u dont drop
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yo if your young dollar than i must be a 5
after this battle youll need a couple franklins to stay alive just cuz im new to the site you think i aint gonna put up a fight thats like askin me if i got a light i always do, and i'll grab this gun and start lightin up you this is somethin that was written real quick for fun but its enough to turn your record into a 1 an 1 |
Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 08:48 PM.
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Let me get at dis nigga ri quick
Slite opener Allow me to put some "respect" on dudes "neck" Look kitty its gon take mo than rappN about ya "tech"/ ............. Dis nigga "joke for fun",while im ready to "poke a nun" u hyped up wit knives, but still aint pokin none/ dude n class playn w/ "pokemon",while im"pokin a mom" Nigga talkin shit like bush but not droppin a "bomb"/ Battelin me is like lining up to be loosing, Beatin a pussy nigga, catchn a case of vaginal "brusing/ Quit playin cuz u'll catch heat in ya "Elmo suit," LeavN da block hot, havN to walk in a "thermosuit"/ Dollar done with infra-red cuz now its "infra-green", Dont get ya block mopped as if ya name was "Mr.Clean"/ RV Hold auditions cuz boy is jus "lyrical Crap" aint Done shit on RV so I cant make "personal fact"// Dont come at me w/ weak shit,Gaurentee to "Merk Dis" Da way i clown dis nigga,u'd think RV runnin a "Circus" Aint nuffin much tryna go easy on da rook |
This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
If I don't give feedback my vote doesn'¡t counts... but my vote would be for u, no hate but it was better in everything and I'm too tired to vote....
......................................check da polls |
Come on and vote for the battle and give a nigga da win cuz its not contest who won........Homie verse wasnt consider decent.....uppin
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uppin.................................vote on dis battle so i can cop my win and move on wit thangs
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Vote on dis battle plz its a shame that i've waisted taltent on fool in da firstplace
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Omg Yo Somebody Vote..........dis Is How Bush Became President Niggas Didnt Vote>..........uppin!!!!!!!!!!
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Atleast somebody vote one time so a nigga can cop a vote
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Man im still uppin for more votes
bitchin for more vote tippin for votes shit i made a rap for more votes |
Voted For: Young Dollar
EZ Win 4 Young Dollar...................... Much More Complex Verse Wid Da Punches & Wordplay, Few Lines Were Needless, & Sorta Came Across Az Fillers, An U Culd Use Sum Personal [cuz u lacked personals in our battle 2 dolla] But Styll U Certainly Did Enough 2 Get Da Win Josh= Not A Good Verse Hommie, Way 2 Basic, Nuthin Original & Yo Wordplay Juz Didnt Have And Effect On Da Battle, Up Yo Game [no hate] ==Read Da Verses & Da Outcome Explains Its self== Return Da Favor In Mah Sig [but if u voted already then hit up one ov my other battles, they everywhere on frontlines] Or I'll Have 2 Remove Mah Vote Pz Out, Good Job All, Stay Up & Keep Da Rhymes Comin' |
Voted For: Young Dollar
One sided battle... Dolla gets it for actually throwing punches. Also had some decent wordplay, but nothing really to special. |
By the way, Return the favor and hit up my battle with Marv
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=192822 Thanx |
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