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Murdz vs Eyetalik
Battle Rules:
10 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Tikz Vs LL Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 05-21-05 at 05:53 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Eyetalik has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 05:57 PM.
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Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living... Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz* Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack' He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'* His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One *Murdz Was Used By And Old School Vet *It's Wordplay Nigga, Lol Get It?? |
Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 04:17 AM.
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You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak° Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°° Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°° Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°° u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°° I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°° Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin' FUCK YALL ILLUNATIKZ NIGGAZ.... ° When Lakers lost 7 straight °° gettin head and gettin brain mean same thing °°° bane - something causing death and misery °°°° that American Idol kid said he fucked Paula Abdul (but he still lost) °°°°° Communist berlin wall of 80's torn down, no longer exist °°°°°° thin/skinny people get drunk faster/head spinnin |
aiight good luck, lets get some votes..............
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who the fuck did i fuckin recycle the name from u bitch???? thats fake..
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comeon vote on this ishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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You Recylcled A Name From one Of The Members From RB
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bullshit i did nigga.. i neva been to fuckin RB.. so suck my cock bitch....
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This was feedback posted for Murdz
I'd vote but not enough points, just peepin the poll
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upppin dis manye lets get some fuckin votes in this bitch....
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This was feedback posted for Murdz
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This was feedback posted for Murdz
Easy.....dude Had Played Lines. Esp. That Dope Crack Shit...that Was Said Hella Times....livin' Legendz Is Guna Remain Un-defeated..
Good Drop Murdz As Usual |
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Fucking Hell Man Fuckin Vote On This Ish Damnit Fuckin Pathetic
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Voted For: Eyetalik
Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard —decent opener And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living... Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given —wack Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated —pretty good I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries —eh, not feeling this one You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz* —kinda decent here Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack' —using the last word as HA? Tf.. an okay punch He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'* —kinda nice here His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One —nope You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat —nope So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak —wack, but decent multies though Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain —okay Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain —decent multies, weak punch Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin —decent I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin' —decent again overall – both drops were weak here, but Eyetalilk took this one, just had harder punches (by a lil bit), structure was decent.. (don’t center ur structures though), and he had a decent wordplay up in there, but the punches could’ve been harder though, just saying and Murdz, work on ur punches though, ur multies were decent in here, but the punches need some work though, & both.. add some more personas in there though.. ..no hate RTF Eyetalik.. Or This Vote Gets Removed!! …Seriously |
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This is pathetic. Murdz really did have tha better verse.
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Voted For: Eyetalik
This was a pretty tight battle but to me i think Anamosity took this one... Quote:
Pretty tight verse,, but it could have been alot better... structure was good, punchlines were there some were hitten hard some were just fillers... personals were Ehh cus your personals really didnt have anything to do with Anamosity..Overall nice drop..if you had came alittle harder you would have won .. Quote:
Nice drop homie , i was feeling it nice structure it was on point, nice flow... it was good , punchlines were hitten hard , some were okay, personals were okay they were pretty good, Overall nice drop fam , you won this battle in my point of view , keep it up Vote - Anamosity |
man fuck this... this bullshit... he gettin riden cause of his structe thats all it is... and how does diagnosis say its a tight battle and that idiot skriptz say its wack it dont make fuckin sence....
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...dont get mad Murdz...just voting...not unless
you want to settle it in the arenas... |
Voted For: Eyetalik
Anamosity- great verse, you came with great structure, great metaz. Your opener was only 'eh', but everything afta was dope, from tha 2nd bar to tha 7th it was hot, only 1 played idea, and that was the elevate and foodcourt line....but even that wasnt too bad....8.75/10 murdz-ur verse was ok, i felt like you were trying to use elevated vocab to somewhat make ur verse. so throughout the whole verse it seemed like u were struggling to come up with bars. u need to just let that shit flow man. 7/10 |
Voted For: Eyetalik
Yo Here it is check it . . Murdz--You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak°<<<<Nice multies but pretty weak 1 1/2 bar punch Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°° Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°° Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain<<<<<again Nice Multies but punch didnt really hit Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°° u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°°<<<<weak Multies and Sorry punch I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°° Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'<<<<<kinda lost me on that whats the rhymin word????...but in any case weak punch aight Multies... . . . Wall Street---Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard<<<<Tight punch here And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living... Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given<<<<good punch here also Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated<<<<RREEEALL nice Punch here I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries<<<great punch here You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*<<<<another great punch Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'<<<<,great Multies good punch He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*<<<pretty basic but stil a good punch His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One<<<<<Nice closer nice multies nice punch . . The Break Down---- . Murds i feel that you are relying to much on Multies chill out wit them try to hit some punches up....Not bad structure but still work on that.....that last line was too long u couldent understand it.....but any way .....nice drop... . . Wall Street---no real advise for you other then work on them multies... . Ok Punches almost alwase win and this is one of those times.....i felt like Murdz didnt hit him with near enough of them, nice multies but punches win battles so there fore i gotta go with Street.....and i expect this to be a preety one sided affair...Peayce |
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Yea...people who been here for a while and make friends got dick riders....skriptz can't vote for shit murdz, blacklist that wack nigga...thats why he got removed from tha KORV voting council.
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Voted For: Eyetalik
Wall Street- Aight, structure is like perfect, too bad that doesn't matter. Punches were ok, some are kind of played. Tha Q punch is played, period. Had a couple of personals in there, but overall I think you could have came a lot harder. One thing of wordplay, work on putting in more wordplay and personals. Murdz- The thing that lost this battle for you is that you had no personals, at all. Only punches do not win battles. Your punches were bad at some points, and ok at others. The only time you even mentioned his name was your last name, and it was bad. Eyetalik to Frownin? Wtf? I think you need to work on putting in more personals, and not so many punches. Put some wordplay in there too. Overall both of you need to work on personals and wordplay. (RTF please) v-Wall Street |
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