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Ackrite vs Daubs
Battle Rules:
10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Tikz Vs LL Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 05-21-05 at 05:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 11:33 AM.
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AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 03:35 PM.
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The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge..
Bitch claims he godly? Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!! People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite. My rhymes are infinate.. You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!! Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive.. Boom it...... And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig.... This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em.. Fuckin peedo... Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion! My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old... TKO?? After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"! __________________________________________________ _____________ click link, www.ackrite.com has 1 page says hes aka "TKO" and his sig. dont get the punches, dont vote! :thumbup: |
uppppppinnnnn for ya drop dawg....................
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[SIZE=1]AYE!...Listen Kid...
Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline! Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin! Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore! Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'! Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store... LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!.... Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause? Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws! 12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS! EZ... (1) Foreign Ppl...Misunderstood (2) Diabetics Get Insulin Shots......Aha (3) Carnivores Eat Meat, He Let A Dick Who Eats Meat Fuck Him..Get It (4) Sellin His Spot...Ppl Call They House Their Spot...Sellin Someone=Hor (5) JAWS Is Dat Shark Dat Eats PPl....Da Movie....Dun Dun Dun (6) Bitch=Dog...Ah-Duh?!?! |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
good battle yo just viewwin poles... good luck daubs and ackrite...
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LMAO @ Daubs..............I Have No Site Lol...............Where You Get Dat From Son
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uppin fo some honest explained votes......................
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
ez.................lmao................daubs is a genious.........Livin' Legendz niggas!
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Aeyo Vote Up On Dis Shit So It Can Close....Cuz Tiks Done Anyway Lol Uppin
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This was feedback posted for AckRite
Jus checkin polls 4 da ex-crews...................
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Jeah @ Ex-Crew................Aha...............I Got In 2 Battles For No Reason! Kinda Upsettin..
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
both verses had good punches...but, daubs seemed to come harder. liked the structure too.
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Its Funny.................This Kid Josh Neva Likes My Shit..............In Every Battle I Have............Weird!
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^he voted against me before too....
but why didnt you vote, fucka feedback. |
Voted For: Daubs
Ackrite-- came decent, punches were alright, flow was decent, wordplay was ight'.... Daubs-- tought ackrite prolly won till i see ya verse, started alright, ended good..punches hit harder, flow was alright.... Punches-- Daubs Flow-- Tie Wordplay-- Ackrite Metaphors-- Daubs Multis-- Niether Structure-- Ackrite Final vote--- Daubs.. R.t.f http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191164 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Explain your vote alot more herb..................................
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Jeah Explain Dat Shit More Fool............I Wasnt Feelin Ya Breakdown At All...........& No I Aint Bitchin
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Voted For: Daubs
The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge.. Bitch claims he godly? Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!! 6...nice opener, pretty funny!! People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite. My rhymes are infinate.. You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!! 5...nah, not feelin this punch!! Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive.. Boom it...... And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig.... 4...nah!! self-g in the first line!! This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em.. Fuckin peedo... Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion! 5...weak, cud be done better!! My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old... TKO?? After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"! 5...nice 2nd line, but 1st line was self-glorifyin!! OVERALL: 25/50 Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline! Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin! 4...weak, drug lines are one of the great played concepts!! Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore! Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'! 3...1st line fake personal!! 2nd line played!! Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store... LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!.... 6...nice, a funny ass line!! Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause? Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws! 6...clever 2nd line, nice shit!! 12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS! 5...not feelin this closer!! OVERALL: 24/50 at first glance i thought ackrite took this, but going through it Daubs takes it. he had a nice opener but then fell off with some weak lines and some played concepts. but ackrite started off with a played concept then had a fake personal which aint gonna win ya shit, had a couple of funny lines but they weren't enough. V/ - Daubs http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191568 RTF!!! that bizattle!! don't and i will remove my vote!! |
Voted For: Daubs
lol bit of a one sided battle here if u ask me.... ackrite: Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline! Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin! good opener decent punch 7/10 Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore! Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'! fake personal? not a hard hitting punch 5/10 Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store... LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!.... good wordplay not effective punch 6/10 Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause? Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws! decent punch here 7/10 12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS! ^^ weak closure man wtf is tht lol 4/10 29/ 50... im shcoked ackrite u usually drop doper than this man... u need to stay consistant in your battles thats how u get the win u didn't come hard in this battle and you should ab... structure is good though just work on your punches... daubs.. The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge.. Bitch claims he godly? Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!! decent opener 7/10 People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite. My rhymes are infinate.. You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!! good man this was actually dope lol 8/10 Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive.. Boom it...... And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig.... ight punch kinda weak compared to the others 6/10 This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em.. Fuckin peedo... Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion! haha good personal 7/10 My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old... TKO?? After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"! alryt closure not bad punch 6/10 34/ 50 daubs u did good in this battle u stayed consistant all the way through and kept the punches flying in lol... try to find some better concepts for your punches coz they are kinda played good battle daubs gets this for having better punches all the way through and staying consistant... good battle though pzzzz rtf... links in the sig pzz n no hate |
Dis Is Bullshit.......I'm In Dis "Crew" Battle Down 2 For A Crew Dats Not Even Togetha Ne More! Shit......
& Dat "ActRite.Com" Shit Is A Fake Personal....There Is No ActRite.Com Wtf....UPPIN' |
yes there fuckin is...type it and see...or click the link!!!
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to the roof bitches...............................
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
I'ma just give feeback since I don't have enough posts to vote so I'ma just give my feedback. I think that Daubs took this battle beasue his punches where better and also his flow, and structure was good. Ackrite you really didn't have that many good punches.
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votes anywhere??
not here nooooooopeeeeee........ |
Fuckkkkkkkk I Hate Battlin On Hea...........Votes Take A Whole Leap Year 2 Come In
Dis Shit'll Neva End..UPPIN' |
Voted For: Daubs
Aii This Is what I Think Ackrite Daubs Life Consists Of 'Foreign Principals'........Understand Discipline! Drugs? Thought 'SNIFFIN DIABETICS' Would Get Him High Off Insulin! Aii Lets Talk About Ya Lil Incident..........Fuckin Asshole Cant Shit Anymore! Cuz He Let His Last 'HOLE-MEAT'............A Dickhead Dats A 'Carnivore'! :nono: You Tried a Lil to hard on that bar Damn Its Funni Daubs Begged Me 2 Spit, Knowin A Loss Is In Store... LL Has No Faith In You, Dey 'SELLIN YA SPOT' Like A 'Housin-Hor'!.... LOL That Was .....Not funnY j.k :roll: Tell Me Somethin Good About You......I'm Waitin......Y Da Long Pause? Ya Man Told Me You SUCK-SHARKS........No Wonder Dey Made Jaws! ...Somewhat Aii Nuttin specail 12 Lines? 10 Is Enough You Merked, Feelins Wet? I Know Ur Sogged Since I'm Killin A Bitch I'm Goin 2 Jail....................For Cruetly To DOGS! Nice bar LOL Nice!! Daubs The pic in his sig, turns it from abstract to grunge.. Bitch claims he godly? Well he couldnt be holy..........if he were a sponge!! Holy...sponge ...Godly ....:roll: that was Good People gona see this battle, say its wack, based on ackrite. My rhymes are infinate.. You got about as much skill.........as pages in ya website!! :shocked: Owww Ohhhhh awww ...damn Gotcha there Fuck tha TNT, we just need me, coz ma lyrics so explosive.. Boom it...... And what kinda bitch reps his own lyrics in his own sig.... Not all dat good couldve been worded better This bondage bitch is the type to have sex where he gotta force em.. Fuckin peedo... Fuck ya skill coz even your earings to ya face are outta proportion! That Was Coo My lyrics so perfect and consistant, yet still dont grow old... TKO?? After this battle you can officially be know as "The K O 'd!!"! I Had to read it Twice to get it LOL Nice Overall aii Overall I Think That Daubs takes this battle with consistence pucnhez and Proof for personals that hit hard and ETC basically You deserve this battle Keep up the good wrok RTF In the battle link in my sig |
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lazzzzzzzyyyy twatz not returnin favor.......................................
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This was feedback posted for AckRite
..................checkin polls here...............
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...Damn...I Aint Been On In A Day & Da Votes Still Da Same....0-3....Dats Sad
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