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Murdah.txt 05-19-05 02:23 PM

Carlton Banks vs CA$per
 
Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-19-05 at 02:53 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

System 05-19-05 02:27 PM

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 02:27 PM.

System 05-19-05 02:28 PM

Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 02:28 PM.

Murdah.txt 05-19-05 02:42 PM

this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...

Carlton Banks 05-19-05 02:44 PM

i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.

Carlton Banks 05-19-05 02:46 PM

sozzles peeps, my structure went haywire after i posted it, it wasn't like that in go advanced :(.
but anyways...
*i checked his battles stats and he had 5 consecutive wins, then lost 4 in a row after that. meaning he elevated a bit, then fell off. i hope you get it.

EsKalayde 05-19-05 02:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 
this guy had harder punches and better wordplay...I was feelin this verse more still...

Carlton Banks 05-19-05 04:23 PM

i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot.

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 09:07 AM

i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 2.

josh654789 05-20-05 09:20 AM

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 
banks gets the v on this just thought his verse was better. but, the other verse has some good lines in it.

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 11:08 AM

i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 3.

King Solo 05-20-05 12:02 PM

Voted For: CA$per

this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
5...weak opener, more filler than disses!!!
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
6...nice tom jones line!!!
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
5...weak again, not a good personal!!
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
4...weak shit, homo gay crap is played!!
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
4...weak!!! but ya not tryin as ya said!!
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...
6...best bar of the verse!!!

OVERALL: 30/60 (50%)



i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
5...nice meta, but fairly weak!!
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
5...weak, played concept to!!
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
4...still weak!!! consistensy is good though!!
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
5...nice personal!!! NO!!! actually played and gay!!!
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.
5...another weak ass line!!!!

OVERALL: 24/50 (49%)


weak battle....wtf!!! casper ya didnt try and ya nearly lost, lucky for you ya opponent didnt drop anythin orignal or hot, carlton ya need to elevate and get creative, casper ya need to actually try in battles or next time ya might get whored!!!

V/ - Ca$per

RTF!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191228

Murdah.txt 05-20-05 12:09 PM

Lol Chea Uppin I Just Fukked Around Here As U See From My Shit Ill Try If Its Worth Tryin But This Kid Is No One So I Dont Really Give A Fukk Anyway Uppin....................

MaRVJay 05-20-05 12:18 PM

Voted For: Carlton Banks


cartlon banks:
i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
^^^^CONCEPT IS KIND OF PLAYED..BUT U PULLED IT OFF GOOD OPENER
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
^^^LMAOOOOOOO DOPE SHIT...ORGINIAL
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
^^^NAH
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
^^^WEAK PERSONAL
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.
^^^^DA FLOW WAS HORRIBLE HERE...BUT DA PUNCHLINE WAS DOPE...FIX YA STRUCTURE FAM

casper:
this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
^^^^LOL..DECENT OPENER
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO GOOD PLAY OFF DAT SHIT WHEN CARTLON BANKS WAS DANCIN
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
^^^^HUH????
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
^^^NOW UR GETTIN WACK
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
^^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ..UR BORIN ME NOW
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...
^^^^LOL WOW U HAD A DECNT BAR AFTA 2 VERY WACK 1'S...


V/CARTLON BANKS...HE HAD SOME CREATIVE PUNCHLINES....CASPER U STARTED OFF KIND OF GOOD THEN U JUST FEEL OFF REAL HARD..U GOTTA BRING IT DA WHOLE BATTLE


RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL...

Stanza 05-20-05 04:59 PM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

Aii This IS what I Think

Carlton Banks
Aii Man You STarted off pretty weak Man Id Have to tell you bcuz nobody else will tell you HONESTLY how you did these days but I think THAT YOU NEED TO0 WORK ON fixin ya structure up a lil bit bcuz Some people Will Judge your verse jus basically on how it looks which is a bunch of bullshit if you ask me Becuase you Cant Judge a book by its cover so i think that your verse LYRICALLY was terrfic but your verse Strcutre like was kinda off so try to fix that up a little bit in the future
HIT UP THE BATTLE LINK IN MY SIG

Casper
Aii man Although your strcuture was on Your verse was off man Some of your bars didnt work together to create a correct punch and ya shit was really off LYRICALLY but I think That You Will fix that up in the time that comes to past

HIT UP THE LINK IN MY SIG

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 05:16 PM

i will hit up one of your battles with a vote soon. thanks for the votes ya'll..

B2Kbumpbump.bump 05-20-05 05:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 
fucker this yo like eggs nah mean ????????

LyricalMa$tamind 05-20-05 05:41 PM

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 
checkinnnnnnnn polls n uppin 4 mah nigga CA$

HOLLA

Compose 05-20-05 06:34 PM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
was feelin the wordplay a lot and good opener
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
lmao...good punch
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
eh...ok
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
...
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.
good closer...liked this more then last 2 bars...

this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
Didnt feel like a punch, not a good opener
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
eh...i liked the connection between the punch and the setup but punch felt weak
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
nah...
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
nope...isnt a punch it just feels like your just talking...
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
again its just eh...
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...
ok...best bar in the verse but still weak

Overall no hate to both but I pick carlton for harder punches basically and some wordplay...i liked his opener and closers, casper i wasnt really feelin your verse no hate...just the punches were weak and werent up to par with carltons...
Best bar from each verse IMO:

Carlton...
i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.

Casper
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...

Good luck to both
peace

Chris Stylez 05-20-05 07:00 PM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

While.........i didnt think Rich boy from Fresh Prince of Belair could rip like that..........Nuff said Banks took this wit ease...he head better punches and vocabulary while Caspers was medicore......Ups to both rappers but i have to say dis belongs to Banks

~Sundance Kid~ 05-20-05 09:19 PM

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 
checking in here to how how the votes are going.xxxxxxxxxx

Carlton Banks 05-21-05 05:27 AM

i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 4.

BiZzO 05-21-05 09:27 AM

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 
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E.C 05-21-05 09:36 AM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

weell wasnt this a one sided battle lol....

ne wayz imma break it down...

ca$per...

u go thinkin u are dope but u aint as good as u think u need to stop tht coz its getting out of hand lol... u had some good lines in there but none of them really stood out.. overall it was a bad verse, u jus lacked the hard punches, structure and flow was real gd u got that on lock u just need to practise punches....
overall 65/100

carlton banks...

now this verse was good man... u had some funny lines in there they were all dope but that elevated line i played, you need to work on your strucute but other than that your verse was dope man keep it up...

overall 87/100

good job keep it up and keep elevatin both of you... you can only get better pz...


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