Carlton Banks vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

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No crew votes
No recycling
No biting
No d/r
No hate

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-23-05 at 12:36 PM

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Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 12:40 PM.

talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!

last bar= he got knocked out of korv by a keystyle, and hes recently done more topical and poetry than text...get it!?

(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 09:05 PM.

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones


Bastien Tel Fair is on the Portland Trail Blazers
He is a FLY WEIGHT
and Tom Jones sings Its Not UNsual..which is carltons
fav song and singer...

*Nuff Said*

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straight verse, but you know that "not unusal" line has been used in every one of my battles chump. but anyways upping..

lets get some voting going down here..
upping this.

Voted For: Carlton Banks

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Nah....4/10
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Meh...5/10
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
[B}So foreced, you had to say Fass instead of Fast...3/10[/B]
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
Coulda worded this better....6/10

Overall: 18/40


talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
Funny...6/10
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
Word...6/10
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
Meh...5/10
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
Hahaha....7/10

Overall: 24/40


Carlton Banks came harder in this with better, harder punches..

Vote: Carlton Banks

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

boooooooooo @ carlton FAKES y do have an alias datz gay...aneway i have 2 go with jimmy....he played off dat fresh prince of bel air shit and i was feelin it shit was funny...cartlon i had some creative shit but last couple lines were very weak he had no real personals...everybody knowns he got koed in korv tell us somthin we dont know fam..

jimmy.p:
Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
^^^LMAOOO GOOD OPENER
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
^^^^DOPE....
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
^^^LMAOOOOOOOO YO I LIKE DIS PUNCH
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
^^^^SOMBODY SAID DIS 2 HIM ALREADY IN A ANOTHER BATTLE...BUT U WORDED IT BETTA


cartlton banks:
talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
^^^GOOD OPENER...VERY ORIGINAL
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
^^^DECENT
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
^^^WACK...TELLIN PPL UR AN ALIAS WONT HELP U WIN
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
^^^OKAY...

V/JIMMY.....

RETURN DA FAVOR BOTH OF YA'LL.....OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER

Wow carl your vote wasent explained at all...but itz coo ima leave it

only vote u gone get 4rm a kid who hatez me

*Nuff Said*

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Voted For: Carlton Banks

v/ Carlton...this was clearly a clean sweep
His punches were humourous..but Jimmy you need to up your game...you really dont have that good of punches or humorous punches...your best was Unlce Phil one but blah...I liked Carltons much more

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

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Niceeeeee battle dawgs!!!!!

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sori about dat it was jus ment 2 be feedback!!!!!

My BAD

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i dont even no y u like carlton banks.....hes gay and short
but my boi (Jimmy Pocketz) is gonna merk you

vote for my main man (Jimmy Pocketz) .......y coz carltons a short pice of shit

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

I think that (Jimmy Pocketz) got this battle because i feel that (Jimmy Pocketz) came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt (Jimmy Pocketz) got it they were used effectifely and were on point Carlton Banks u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to (Jimmy Pocketz) good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to (Jimmy Pocketz) and flow and structure i'll give to None as both were decent enough in my opinion.

V/(Jimmy Pocketz) There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup:

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Checkin Polls both MC's came and Did they're thing and dis was a good battle

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

I give this one to troop because of tha play off his name. He was creative wit it, he stayed on point, and tha most of all, tha part that i really liked about it is, that he stayed consistent wit it. Every line was a play off his name, which i think showed some creativitie in a way. i liked how he turned his personal name play lines into punches to bring more flavor to them. so, i was really feelin troops verse.
carlton-you had very few personals in there that couldve been directed towards troop, n only troop. tha rest couldve been directed towards any one. when u droppin short verses like that, you need to come flawless. you need to drop wit some consistency, and i didn't see that in ur verse. you were thrownin punches out from every direction hopin that they made since because they rhymed. that showed a huge lack in effort, and a lack in personals. ima hafto give this one to troop, because his verse was tha better outta tha 2 in this one. he came wit more consistency, and took it home. troop cops my vote.


yall RTF on any Livin' Legend battle. Just chose one.


Daubs
M-Eazy
Pen N' Paper
Black Queen
kid~ca$
ghost
infamuz

and theres more, but fuck it...if one of those dont get RTF'd in 1 day, this vote will be removed.

Now that was the best explained vote ive seen in a long time

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

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