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Carlton Banks 05-20-05 12:59 PM

Ice-D vs Carlton Banks
 
Battle Rules:
8 lines
No crew votes
No recycling
No biting
No d/r
No hate

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-23-05 at 12:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-20-05 12:59 PM

Ice-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 12:59 PM.

System 05-20-05 01:11 PM

Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 01:11 PM.

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 01:30 PM

your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird :confused: how'd they know your name!


if you don't get the wordplay/anything...then please, don't vote :thumbup:.
g/l ice-d.

King Solo 05-20-05 01:42 PM


Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…


* Walt Disney film “Bambi” – the rabbit in it is called “Thumper”

Restricted 05-20-05 05:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 
Checkin Polls..

Decent Verse Man....Like Ya 2nd Bar Fasho.

~R~

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 06:45 PM

lets get some votes in this bitch, i seem to be always getting feed lol damn.

King Solo 05-20-05 07:36 PM

yes, get some votes so i can own this chumpstain!!!!!

Carlton Banks 05-21-05 04:52 AM

lol, nice verse. but you had a played line which is a no no...upping.

King Solo 05-21-05 03:58 PM

fuck you hoe..........ya verse was some of the weakest shit i seen

all basic rhymes, played shit, nuthin overly creative no real punches

i'd be shocked if ya got one vote................this is an easy KO!!!

13th. 05-21-05 04:08 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
OK
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
NO.....
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
SHIT
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird how'd they know your name!
GOOD
=7/10 AN OK VERSE BUT I WAS EXPECTIN BETTER......

VS


Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
GOOD.....
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
NICE.....
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
LOL.......
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…
nICE
=8.5/10 A REALI TITE VERSE, SOME GOOD PUNCHES.......

V/ICE-D

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King Solo 05-22-05 09:17 AM

uppin..................weren't you Delaware yesterday.................

13th. 05-22-05 09:48 AM

Yep lol u noticed.................................

E.C 05-22-05 11:45 AM

This was feedback posted for Ice-D
 
one sided battle i think... i cant vote coz ice is in the same crew... so imma leave some feed...

carlton u had some good lines but u fell off near the end i think u ran out of things to say maybe?

ice u stayed consistant and hard throughout the whole verse u had some solid funny punches in there man keep droppin...

id i could vote then i would vote got ice.. pz

Ryan Hughes 05-22-05 12:23 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

V/Ice-d......this was a good battle but ice came wit the punchs an personals that wrapped up this battle his structure was on point....
Carlton... came wit a good verse u had some good punchs but nuthin to special alot of played ones...but u did have a good closer an structure...work on those things........NO Hate.............RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=I
Closer=tie
Punchs=I
Structure=tie
personals=I
vocab=C
Multi's=Tie(none really)
Werdplay=I
Overall=Ice-D

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King Solo 05-23-05 02:49 AM

werd bitchez uppin this bizattle............................

King Solo 05-23-05 07:48 AM

..................................humpty dumpty children.................................

King Solo 05-23-05 12:27 PM

bump like a bitch niggaz..........................................

Daubs 05-23-05 03:01 PM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.

funny ass opener.. nice wordplay

i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.

yeah quite nice....good wordplay again

your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.

not really feelin this one but blah..

not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird how'd they know your name!

funny closer made me laugh.

Very nice wordplay (was your strongest aspect), reasonable flow, structure was a little off but overall good punches and wordplay.

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Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…

yeah funny opener..nice

Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…

nice nameplay and funny punch

Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…

again nice nameplay personal punch

Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…

hahahahaa nice closer.

brilliant battle here, what i expected from ice, was suprised @ carlton, especially if he not an alias had dope wordplay.

ice edges this out due to the nameplays. no hate carlton, you are gonna be recognised as a dope head soon.

rtf in sig!

Vote switched

King Solo 05-24-05 10:11 AM

uppin..................uppin...................... uppin......................uppin

MaRVJay 05-24-05 12:42 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

ice-d:
Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
^^^YO DIS IS TOP 5 MOST PLAYED LINES...EVERYBODY SAID DIS 2 HIM FAM..
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
^^^^LOL NICE PUNCH/PERSONAL
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
^^^LMAOOOOO...DAT WAS FUNNY
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…
^^^DECENT CLOSER...PERSONALS WAS KOAY U COULD OF ADDED SOMTHIN 2 DAT

carlton banks:
your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
^^^DECENT PUNCH...
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
^^^YO I GET EVERY PUNCHLINE EVER SPIT ANY MC..BUT DIS HAS 2 BE DA WORST RITE HERE LOL...Y DIDN'T U EXPLAIN DIS
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
^^NOTHIN...NO PUNCH
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird how'd they know your name!
^^^^A BADD ATTEMPT AT TRYIN DA BE FUNNY...

V/ICE....HE HAD NOTHIN BUT PERSONALS AND THEY WERE HITTIN HARD....CARLTON U HAD LIKE 1 GOOD BAR THEN DA REST WAS WEAK.....

King Solo 05-24-05 09:22 PM

humpin this bitch...............now vote on it

i want my KO damn it!!!!!

Also Known. 05-25-05 12:26 AM

Voted For: Carlton Banks

I wasn't really feelin that Fresh Price of Bel Air shit was pretty weak and you based your whole verse on it which is sad none of your lines really stuck out they were just cheap talk no real personals nothin special and you shouldn't make it bold when its size 1 made it hard to read.

Carlton none of your lines were that good either I didn't find anything that special but your closer won it for you that line had e weak good job with that so the vote goes to Carlton.

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King Solo 05-25-05 11:44 AM

uppin this shit..........that carlton vote is going...........so still uppin for the KO

Stanza 05-25-05 11:57 AM

Voted For: Ice-D



Total Breakdown

Ice -d
Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
Umm Not The Best Bar But I Good Opener
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
Damn That was Some Hot ass Wordplay :thumbup:
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
LOL That Was jUs Comedian Like
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…
Again NIce Nice NIce ......I 4got That Jazz used to get thrown out so I Almost didnt get your Bar LOL

C.Banks
your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
Best Opener Ive seen iN a While
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
:nono: Not Gonna say It But You know that thats Played Rii ? No HATE
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
...Wait A min while I Find The punch?......:nono:
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird how'd they know your name!
Good Closer :thumbup:

Overall
aii Basically Ice-d Takes this battle because he suppplied more effective punchez and he came more original than banks ....Although banks had a strong opener and closer the rest of his verse wasnt all that good and i have to judge on the overall verse and Banks your verse jus didnt cut it overall so Ima have to give this battle to

v/ ice-d

RTF In Any Battle Link In My SIg

King Solo 05-26-05 12:35 PM

fuckin herb!!!

my votes gettin removed
i KO'ed this fool.................

bitchez, give me my votes!!!!

Germ 05-26-05 07:03 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

word, ice'd took this easy, harder hitting shit, nah mean?

carlton had one good line, just the closer, all the rest had poor wording/weak, word, but still pretty good battle for quickness

ice'd's punches were better, and he threw some personals in there about fresh prince, which were pretty funny, word

v/ice'd

King Solo 05-27-05 10:48 PM

uppin this shit for some explained votes............

King Solo 05-28-05 01:39 PM

uppin this battle
come on
one more vote

KO to me!!!!!

King Solo 05-29-05 11:34 AM

assclowns....................vote damnit...........b4 i slap ya

King Solo 05-30-05 02:32 PM

...............uppin this shit once again...............

King Solo 05-31-05 02:12 AM

jesus christ ppl

one more vote

that is all i need

King Solo 06-01-05 04:39 PM

fucking hell

does it take that long to vote

just fucking drop a vote

MyNamesGrafhYall 06-02-05 08:31 AM

Voted For: Ice-D

Ice-D Got Diz Cuz He Had Better Rhymes n Stuff Yo :thumbup:


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