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Ghost 05-21-05 06:00 AM

Ghost vs XquizitLyricist
 
Battle Rules:

10-12UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 05-24-05 at 06:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-21-05 06:01 AM

Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 06:01 AM.

System 05-21-05 06:09 AM

XquizitLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 06:09 AM.

Ghost 05-21-05 06:27 AM

Youz Battlin A Pro,So I Suggest Ya Come Prepared With ya lyriks
Leave Ya Deceased Like Da Dead,N No Reason to Maintain Ya Spirits
Ima Capture Ya Soul,N Let It Rot With mA Victimz
You Couldnt Be -Sick- If Ya Linez Had Break outz With Symptomz
Take Ya out in -Secondz- Cuz I got No Time To Waste
Surely My Linez Are more XQUIZIT,Urz Are Decently Embraced
Leave ya Heart As A Pendent or Even better A Souvenire
Steppin Up To Battle,But Steady Shiverin As u get Near
This battlez Gon be A Tragic Mistake For Ya Record n ya text
Done Ripped My Last Victimz So u Volunteerin to be Next
Your not An XquizitLyricist Youz A Newby Waitin For A Loss
Im Strictly on An Emcee -Diet-,As u Steady gettin Ya ~salad~ Tossed
Im onda -Top- level So i Reach Down Below to Serve you Dis Verse
Cuz Readin Theze Lyriks Make Cause Ya Iris n Pupilz Ta Burst!

Ghost 05-21-05 06:56 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ghost
Youz Battlin A Pro,So I Suggest Ya Come Prepared With ya lyriks
Leave Ya Deceased Like Da Dead,N No Reason to Maintain Ya Spirits
Ima Capture Ya Soul,N Let It Rot With mA Victimz
You Couldnt Be -Sick- If Ya Linez Had Break outz With Symptomz
Take Ya out in -Secondz- Cuz I got No Time To Waste
Surely My Linez Are more XQUIZIT,Urz Are Decently Embraced
Leave ya Heart As A Pendent or Even better A Souvenire
Steppin Up To Battle,But Steady Shiverin As u get Near
This battlez Gon be A Tragic Mistake For Ya Record n ya text
Done Ripped My Last Victimz So u Volunteerin to be Next
Your not An XquizitLyricist Youz A Newby Waitin For A Loss
Im Strictly on An Emcee -Diet-,As u Steady gettin Ya ~salad~ Tossed
Im onda -Top- level So i Reach Down Below to Serve you Dis Verse
Cuz Readin Theze Lyriks Make Cause Ya Iris n Pupilz Ta Burst!

My Verse!Holla Back

XquizitLyricist 05-21-05 07:15 AM

there aint a Humen Standing that "Envy my Post"
ill Kill ur Apearance in humanity then you'll really be "GhOsT"-//

i Coss Lyrical Casualtiez~After We~Battle my Rhymen Capsulez "Sinkin Tight"-

comen at me? man ill blow ur Brain left to remind u u aint "THINKEN RIGHT"-//

Terrifying RukUs~i Encounter~Around The~Hood as i SLay Lyrically And "Barry Him Deep"--

even if u play'd nba in miami with the jersey on u still wouldnt be carrying "HeaT"-//

SeriOus Beef-
is Not GhosT~why he "Wanten The Streetz?"-
Ur Linez like Juilce at the corner store in the ghetto man ur "Punchez is Cheap"-//<25 cent drinks

rippen his Metaphorz-as i Indore-Power-u cowards neeed to "LEAVE IT BE"--
in flowen its like aol chatten we talken with s/n's but u aint "SEEING ME"-//<seeing my face>

im the truth best "Believe iT"--u sounden quite Heated--
but how the Fuck is u The "GhosT" when im the one u not "SEEING"-//

I Got Nothen but PoWder-Like ash from the Towers--
ill drown ur seeds as im wetten u like over Flooded Flowerz-//

this punk nigga sweet like CandY--Fuck who ever ur CLAN BE--
All u do is sit on dicks like STRIPPERS At Brandy's-//<strip club

Fuck it ill send the "HOLLOWS WITH THE BIRDS"--

And Pop ur VOcAL CoRd down ur StOmAch now u "SWALLOWING UR WORDS"-//


IM A "G...HO...ST.. Is Where u BelOnG~
cUz Niggas constinaly fucken u Im Not to be Seen like a Fat bitch with a "THONG"-///HAHA




Case u didnt get this bar


IM A "G...HO...ST.. Is Where u BelOnG~


its like

IM.. A ...G <im a gangsta

HO<<<AS IN HOE

ST<<<<AS IN STREET

IM A G...HO...ST. IS WHERE U BELONG CASE UGUYS DIDNT KNOW HOLLA

XquizitLyricist 05-21-05 07:19 AM

Im.. A ...g <im A Gangsta
Ho<< As In Hoe
St<<< Street

Ghost 05-21-05 12:59 PM

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Ghost 05-21-05 04:07 PM

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Ghost 05-21-05 05:33 PM

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Ghost 05-22-05 01:21 PM

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_JooKsta_ 05-22-05 01:45 PM

Voted For: Ghost

0ff T0p! Dis like one of da hottest battles i seen so far on RV!! Str8 up,b0th 0f yall ill wit da punches and w0rdplay! Big ups! Iight here g0es da break d0wn th0...

Punches-XL...u g0t sum gud punches bruh,Ghost ya shit 0n p0int too B...d0 t0 better punches,i have ta v0te GhoSt 0n dis

Multis-Tie...b0th emcees had sum good w0rdplay in dey verses...

Personals-Didnt really see any here...but the disses was on p0int...

Opener-GhOst..wun 0f da best barz in ya p0st,good shit...dats what i like da see

Closer-GhOsT....haha again anutha wun of ya best lines...

Structure-Ghost...XL ya structure was sloppy s0n...wurd...ya punches and er'thang else on point just work on dat structure...was kinda hard ta read.

RTF To links in sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

Ghost 05-22-05 04:28 PM

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josh654789 05-22-05 10:50 PM

Voted For: XquizitLyricist

xquisit had better personals...
better play with his words...

ghost...i like a lot of your verses...but, this bull got ya...

TuNiT 05-23-05 06:05 AM

Voted For: Ghost

hey okz diz wuz a hot battl rite here frum yull peoplez Xkwizit yo verse wu ok i dunt lyke da way u seperate yo barz lyke dat but da content of yo rhymez wuz not bad at all a few decent punchlinez nuthin dat had me like ''oh'' but u came pretty strong, but Ghost had dem killer blowz dat will fuck'a niggah up witz dem hard hitting personalz an mettas my vote haz 2 go 2 ghost

Ghost 05-23-05 08:19 PM

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Ghost 05-24-05 01:58 PM

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Sik Wit It 05-24-05 03:11 PM

Voted For: Ghost

Youz Battlin A Pro,So I Suggest Ya Come Prepared With ya lyriks
Leave Ya Deceased Like Da Dead,N No Reason to Maintain Ya Spirits
—4, an okay punch
Ima Capture Ya Soul,N Let It Rot With mA Victimz
You Couldnt Be -Sick- If Ya Linez Had Break outz With Symptomz
—1, weak, could’ve made it a lil better
Take Ya out in -Secondz- Cuz I got No Time To Waste
Surely My Linez Are more XQUIZIT,Urz Are Decently Embraced
—4, this one was okay too, should’ve added a persona in there
Leave ya Heart As A Pendent or Even better A Souvenire
Steppin Up To Battle,But Steady Shiverin As u get Near
—5, eh, this one was decent
This battlez Gon be A Tragic Mistake For Ya Record n ya text
Done Ripped My Last Victimz So u Volunteerin to be Next
—2, not really a punch here

overall – u had a decent drop (I didn’t want to do ur
whole verse so don’t get mad), but u had some okay
punches, couple of them could’ve been worded better,
and next time u battle.. add some personas in there too
16/50


there aint a Humen Standing that "Envy my Post"
ill Kill ur Apearance in humanity then you'll really be "GhOsT"-//
—4, an okay persona-punch, make it harder though
i Coss Lyrical Casualtiez~After We~Battle my Rhymen Capsulez "Sinkin Tight"-
comen at me? man ill blow ur Brain left to remind u u aint "THINKEN RIGHT"-//
—3, work on ur vocab, & ur punch was ai
Terrifying RukUs~i Encounter~Around The~Hood as i SLay Lyrically And "Barry Him Deep"--
even if u play'd nba in miami with the jersey on u still wouldnt be carrying "HeaT"-//
—5, haha, this punch was decent
is Not GhosT~why he "Wanten The Streetz?"-
Ur Linez like Juilce at the corner store in the ghetto man ur "Punchez is Cheap"-
—2, this one was kinda weak here
rippen his Metaphorz-as i Indore-Power-u cowards neeed to "LEAVE IT BE"--
in flowen its like aol chatten we talken with s/n's but u aint "SEEING ME"-//
—0, nah, not feelin this one

overall – u had a decent drop also (didn’t want to
do ur whole drop.. that’s too much), but anyway,
ur punches were pretty decent, some of them were
wack though, & work on that shit too, & fix ur structure
stretched lines = wackness.. but also add some personas
too, 14/50


RTF Ghost, or this vote gets removed

Vote removed by Skriptz's request

Ghost 05-24-05 05:46 PM

Damnit We Need Some Motherfkin Votes So Why Dont Yall Fckin Just Type N Say Whoz Verse Was Better Goshdamnit!fckin Lazy Azz Niggaz!(smh)

Ghost 05-24-05 09:03 PM

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Ghost 05-31-05 05:05 PM

uppin for Votes Votes Votes VOTEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ghost 05-31-05 11:13 PM

uppin............................................. .........

Ghost 06-01-05 05:52 PM

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PrahJect 06-01-05 06:50 PM

Voted For: Ghost

Yo you got my vote, Xquizit ure disses were good, hit him on a hard level apart from half, Ghost ure lyrics hit hard all the way through. You really got some talent. You dissed him evryline. 9/10 verse: my fav line:

Ima Capture Ya Soul,N Let It Rot With mA Victimz
You Couldnt Be -Sick- If Ya Linez Had Break outz With Symptomz
Take Ya out in -Secondz- Cuz I got No Time To Waste
Surely My Linez Are more XQUIZIT,Urz Are Decently Embraced

RTF on my battle with big dawg, link in sig

Ghost 06-02-05 07:08 PM

THANX for da Vote.........................uppn....ill RTF

Ghost 06-03-05 05:01 PM

need some votes so can some1 pleaz come n vote damnit............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................

Ghost 06-07-05 05:36 PM

uppin 4 votes............................................. ...................................

§ick§eed 06-07-05 06:07 PM

Voted For: Ghost

OPENER = Xquizit
MIDDLE = Ghost
CLOSER = Ghost

OVERALL = Ghost...his choice of words, some personals and punches took this...

Xquizit jus throw 2getha lines...some didnt make sense or rhyme...and da structure was UGH so Ghost takes this one

return da favor

Ghost 06-07-05 09:22 PM

uppin 4 votes...........................................

Chris Stylez 06-07-05 10:30 PM

Voted For: Ghost

Opionion-Wasn't all that good of a battle But Ghost took it for organization and a lil bit better of a structure

Flow- Ghost was easier to read more than Wuizit
Punches- Ghost had more creative punches will QL had played lyrics or lyrics i have herd one way or another
Metas- Ghost had better ones
Personals- both did good on personals but only with name play

So im giving this to ghost for better structure and organization cuz icouldnt tell which was the rap between the explanation of the rap

Winner=Ghost

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