Souljah vs tim dim
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 06:46 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 06:51 AM.

Yo...listen to me...lil Timmy...da,
Only reason your here's cos your dad forgot da jimmy,but
Then again,do you call him daddy or cousin,cos i
Know how you hicks love da "family" lovin,but
Seriously,lyrically i'll break you down to simple
Compounds,cuttin you down pound by pound,Ca-
reer left inda ground,food for da worms,in da
Dirt,da idea of you beatin me is absurd

tim dim has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 10:04 PM.

You shitting on me isn't possible like you got kidney stones
Yo, I'll give soulja flesh wounds till I hit he's bones
Your not worth a right hook so Ill give you a left one
Then stand on your chest and turn you into my "step son"
I've seen rolexes at the market realer than your fake ass
It's not the mourning but still, I'll make you "Break-fast"
You see bottom line's, you spit rotten rhymes
Dropping ya verse first is the only way ya topping mine

hmm strange strucure you have.....................

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Lil Tim shuddufukup n stop freepostin dat shit.

Yo uppin for votes...............................

You fucking idiot I was just upping this thread................ lol

Voted For: tim dim

Tim Dim - this was a weak battle.. your punchlines barely hit and your opener and ender was iight...your flow was ok and your structure was bad but this was still better than Souljah

Souljah - this freestyle was pathetic you had now flow and your opener and ender was pathetic....your structure was bad...keep working hard.

V/ Tim Dim

Motherfucker who da fuck you callin pathetic when i ain't even seen yo bitch ass battle anyone............................
.................Try a lil constructive criticism...........
.................PUNK

lol dont worry bout that weezy herb...............

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LMAO why i got to verse someone that is sorry like yo ass ?? :gfy:

Voted For: tim dim

not the best battle, lol, but very one sided in my opinion

You shitting on me isn't possible like you got kidney stones
Yo, I'll give soulja flesh wounds till I hit he's bones
real weak......... even got bad grammar, bu i see wat ur sayin..... 2/10
Your not worth a right hook so Ill give you a left one
Then stand on your chest and turn you into my "step son"
i heard a line like this before, but its decent i guess......... 5/10
I've seen rolexes at the market realer than your fake ass
It's not the mourning but still, I'll make you "Break-fast"
i havent seen sumthin like this..... kinda creative and a good punch at the end .. 7/10
You see bottom line's, you spit rotten rhymes
Dropping ya verse first is the only way ya topping mine
ight....... lil multi but not the best of closers...... 6/10

Souljah:

Yo...listen to me...lil Timmy...da,
Only reason your here's cos your dad forgot da jimmy,but
......... ahhhhh wtf?????? 2/10
Then again,do you call him daddy or cousin,cos i
Know how you hicks love da "family" lovin,but
doesnt really rhyme........... 2/10
Seriously,lyrically i'll break you down to simple
Compounds,cuttin you down pound by pound,Ca-
wtf, doesnt rhyme again..... 1/10
reer left inda ground,food for da worms,in da
Dirt,da idea of you beatin me is absurd
ok, multies but doesnt rhyme with the setup 3/10

v/ tim dim

ohhhhhhh and id appreciate it if u returned the favor to: to my battle against _Jooksta_ ......... illl get the link here in a sec, or u could justg search it

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191836

heres the link......... and look...... im pratically uppin ur thread for u in the process

WTF? i thought ur vote was legit until you made it obvious you jus want him to vote for you.

Ain't a thing tho.jus lettin u know i clocked you straight away...

^you really are a fool. You have to honestly vote on other peoples battles so you can get honest votes on yours

Voted For: tim dim

aiight good battle you too.. lets break it down...

Tim Dim -
You shitting on me isn't possible like you got kidney stones
Yo, I'll give soulja flesh wounds till I hit he's bones
^^^ good opener and nice punch...
Your not worth a right hook so Ill give you a left one
Then stand on your chest and turn you into my "step son"
^^^ original nice punch..
I've seen rolexes at the market realer than your fake ass
It's not the mourning but still, I'll make you "Break-fast"
^^^ nice punch flowed well..
You see bottom line's, you spit rotten rhymes
Dropping ya verse first is the only way ya topping mine
^^^ ehh ok closer...
7/10

Souljah -
Yo...listen to me...lil Timmy...da,
Only reason your here's cos your dad forgot da jimmy,but
^^ wack...
Then again,do you call him daddy or cousin,cos i
Know how you hicks love da "family" lovin,but
^^^ weak punch...
Seriously,lyrically i'll break you down to simple
Compounds,cuttin you down pound by pound,Ca-
^^^ better punch still a bit herbish..
reer left inda ground,food for da worms,in da
Dirt,da idea of you beatin me is absurd
^^^ weak closer...
3/10

weak battle soul but tim dim got this in all areas except wackness..

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Can we get this over with already?................

Yeh man for real.admittedly my verse was off in this battle...
but whats done is done
so just vote already