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E.C vs daubs
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting g'luck :shoot: no hate..... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-21-05 at 09:58 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 09:29 AM.
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E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 09:30 AM.
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lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook"
this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look, she screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin', its in the past, you need to realise she'll never be alive n kickin', you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen, fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen, you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete, little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet" you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice, n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce" -------------------------------------------------------- __Explanations__ * first bar ghost and shook refers to lauren, his dead friend * second bar he got rip lauren in his name on msn * third bar he is a faild gfx head * fourth bar... foot and mouth feet and mouth animals get it? * fifth bar... clainms he lives on a rough estate, smoke weeed so i went off the cat theme and rolls royce... that sums it up sorry for the long explanation but it had to be said or else non of yaz would get it lol... soo g'luck daubs 20 mins to write this not 2 days lol...... no hate pz... |
....Saw the pics you posted, and aint noway suprised that u a virgin..
The way ya sounclick leaves me in stitches....you should be a surgeon! The way ima damage ya reputation, you should accepted a no-show.. And ya skill couldnt be mint......if ya did a trick with a polo!! ......Im like Lennox Lewis, to me your just a feather weight.. Caught in a discount hawks store?...proves you a cheap skate!! He def. aint god, coz we dont racognise the skill he bring-us. The way he jacks his wins,...no wonder he got sticky fingers!! Your lyrics must be wearin out, coz your raps seem coroded... And even if ya were a rich preist....you couldnt be REloaded!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Explanations for retards..... 1= stitches -surgeon, you get it.. 2= mint means good (if you not from the uk, you may not know) 3= too obvious 4= jacks (off) and sticky fingers (theif) 5= his alias is reloaded.. RE is religion lesson in school and loaded = rich. GL... |
harsh dickhead...was supposed to be a friendly battle...but seriousely....
FUCK YOU!! |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
ec should really fix his structure up. his flow was somewhat on point, but fix ya structure. and daubs, dope drop as usual. i can see u on tha comeup and guna be dope.
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ay wasnt it you that said... no matter what happens....
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This was feedback posted for E.C
Jus checkin Polls
A good battle................ |
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Voted For: Daubs
....Saw the pics you posted, and aint noway suprised that u a virgin.. The way ya sounclick leaves me in stitches....you should be a surgeon! —2nd line was good, 1st was weak The way ima damage ya reputation, you should accepted a no-show.. And ya skill couldnt be mint......if ya did a trick with a polo!! —not feelin this one ......Im like Lennox Lewis, to me your just a feather weight.. Caught in a discount hawks store?...proves you a cheap skate!! —pretty decent He def. aint god, coz we dont racognise the skill he bring-us. The way he jacks his wins,...no wonder he got sticky fingers!! —eh, kinda decent Your lyrics must be wearin out, coz your raps seem coroded... And even if ya were a rich preist....you couldnt be REloaded!! —good persona, punch was okay overall – ur verse was okay, could’ve thought of some harder punches, but ur flow was okay, hardly saw any personas.. & ur structure was decent.. lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook" this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look, —decent persona, wack punch she screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin', its in the past, you need to realise she'll never be alive n kickin', —nope you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen, fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen, —decent punch you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete, little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet" —eh, weak you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice, n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce" —decent overall – ur verse was aight too, ur structure was in place.. ur flow.. kinda lost me there, personas were decent, & the punches could’ve been better Winner – Daubs cuz.. he less weak w/ the punches in this battle.. no hate …1 |
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Voted For: E.C
Diz Wuz Iight I Think Dat E.C Gets Da Winz Tho Cuz Hiz Personalz Were Like Really Perosonal lol Ya Know Wut I Mean Lyke Using His Dead Friend Against Him n Shit Datz Sum Really Real Persons For Dat Ass Mayn But Daubz Had Dem Hot Azz Punchlinez I Wuz Really Feelin Dat Sticky Fingerz Line But Personals Over Take Punchlinez In Pointz So I Base My Vote On Dat Good Shit Frum Both Of Chall, ChaBoth 2 Top Notch MC'z Keep Up Da Good Work Culd Chall Hit My Battle In Da Sig Witta Vote Cuz Itz Only Fair After I Votted On Diz |
up to the fuckin to bitches.......................
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Vote fuckers.........
nice OM ec............... |
thnx man i just needed to get it off my chest man.... uppinn
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Voted For: Daubs
I think EC used that pot head thing in another battle, he must really smoke some weed. Both verses are decent, Ill give EC-5/10 and Daubs-6/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol^^
explain more or it will need to be dqed... |
werdd lol... that is a post on how not to vote lol... uppinnnnn
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Voted For: Daubs
e.c lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook" this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look, ^^^^DIDN'T LIKE DIS...IM 1 OF DA MOST DIRESPECTFUL MC'S BUT I WOULD TALK ABOUT A DUDES FRIEND DAT PAST AWAY she screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin', its in the past, you need to realise she'll never be alive n kickin', ^^^^NO you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen, fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen, ^^UUH...OKAY NO PUNCH you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete, little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet" ^^^LOL FUNNY you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice, n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce" ^^^DECENT PUNCH daubs: ....Saw the pics you posted, and aint noway suprised that u a virgin.. The way ya sounclick leaves me in stitches....you should be a surgeon! ^^^^GOOD OPENER The way ima damage ya reputation, you should accepted a no-show.. And ya skill couldnt be mint......if ya did a trick with a polo!! ^^^^I GOT DA MINT PART...BUT WHUTS WITH DA POLO???? ......Im like Lennox Lewis, to me your just a feather weight.. Caught in a discount hawks store?...proves you a cheap skate!! ^^^^LOL GOOD PUNCH He def. aint god, coz we dont racognise the skill he bring-us. The way he jacks his wins,...no wonder he got sticky fingers!! ^^^^DECENT..KIND OF PLAYED THO Your lyrics must be wearin out, coz your raps seem coroded... And even if ya were a rich preist....you couldnt be REloaded!! ^^^^GOOD PERSONAL/CLOSER.. V/DAUBS....E.C NUN OF UR LINES STOOD OUT...INSTEAD OF TALKIN ABOUT HIS OLD FRIEND DAT PAST AWAY..WHY DIDN'T U JUST DISS HIM...IM NOT A HATER OR NOTHIN JUST VOTIN HONESTLY RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
wow now I know what that OM was about...damn......
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to the roof bitches...............................
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votes anywhere??
not here nooooooopeeeeee........ |
Voted For: Daubs
V/Daubs.....this was a good battle but daubs came wit the punchs that got him the win they were creative an had good personals wit good structure....Ec....u had a good verse but some ur punchs were played an ur structure was a little strechted....it felt like u had a good openin but u werent consistent wit the diss's none really caught my eye.... No Hate........RETURN THE FAVOR (Or u never get another honest Vote from me) Opener=E Closer=D Punchs=D Structure=D Wordplay=D Personals=D Vocab=D multi's=Tie Overall=Daubs Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol y do u always vote against me for a start daubs didnt have any personals i killed him wit personals damn man actually read the verse before u vote....
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wtf son i never vote on any ur battles an if i did i dont remember i jus vote for battles i see...an thats to bad obviously the other kat gotta better verse if i voted for them......get it removed if u think its a hate vote cause it aint....i jus vote fair.....complain to all the other 3 that voted too...need i say more....done....
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Voted For: Daubs
....Saw the pics you posted, and aint noway suprised that u a virgin.. The way ya sounclick leaves me in stitches....you should be a surgeon! 7.5/10....Real Nice Opener....You Got Da Laced The way ima damage ya reputation, you should accepted a no-show.. And ya skill couldnt be mint......if ya did a trick with a polo!! 6/10...I Didnt Get Da Mint Shit...I'm From NY Lol ......Im like Lennox Lewis, to me your just a feather weight.. Caught in a discount hawks store?...proves you a cheap skate!! 7/10...Feelin Dat Shit...Nice Personal He def. aint god, coz we dont racognise the skill he bring-us. The way he jacks his wins,...no wonder he got sticky fingers!! 10/10...Ahahaha Best Line...Funny As Fuck...Good Personal Your lyrics must be wearin out, coz your raps seem coroded... And even if ya were a rich preist....you couldnt be REloaded!! 8/10...Damn Nice Shit Fareal Daubs...Anotha Personal You Had Punches/Personals/Creativity/Flow...Structure Was Aight It Was Centered So...*Shrugs*...You Killed Him Wit Da Personals Tho... lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook" this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look, 6/10...Nice Personal...Shoulda Had A Link I Dont Really Get It she screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin', its in the past, you need to realise she'll never be alive n kickin', 5/10...Nah Son, You Got On Her Once...Its Done you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen, fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen, 6/10...Dat Was Aight...Nice you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete, little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet" 7/10...Nice Line Son...Best 2 Me you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice, n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce" 6/10...Not Strong... OVERALL: Daubs Took This...His Personals Were Serious, E.C. Had One But It Didnt Stand Out...Punches Had Me Thinkin, His Verse Was Much Stronger...Da Nigga Was Hungry E.C. Wasnt Good Battle Tho...RTF...1 |
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yb, explain ya vote better so it dunt get dqed, then il rtf!! |
Voted For: Daubs
I'm voting for Daubs becaue i feel he had the stronger verse, Daubs you had alot of nice metaphors and ya punches landed pretty good. Creativity was good & orginal. E.C you coulda come harder than that, but no hate you shouldnt of used lines about his dead friend like that. Harsh personal no need for that. i mean you had 2 bars dissing him abouth er & they hit pretty weak. You had one good bar which was the gfx/animal line. Props on that but overal lyou just dropped weaker than Daubs. v/ Daubs. Rtf in my sig Daubs, otherwise this vote will be deducted. No hate. |
ight good lookin, i will rtf later tonight..........
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Iyt, thats cool with me just as long as you do lol.
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Voted For: E.C
....Saw the pics you posted, and aint noway suprised that u a virgin.. The way ya sounclick leaves me in stitches....you should be a surgeon! weak punch, flow but weak hit..... The way ima damage ya reputation, you should accepted a no-show.. And ya skill couldnt be mint......if ya did a trick with a polo!! ok but need to come harder... ......Im like Lennox Lewis, to me your just a feather weight.. Caught in a discount hawks store?...proves you a cheap skate!! just flowing no attacts...... He def. aint god, coz we dont racognise the skill he bring-us. The way he jacks his wins,...no wonder he got sticky fingers!! ok but the punch wasnt doing much.... Your lyrics must be wearin out, coz your raps seem coroded... And even if ya were a rich preist....you couldnt be REloaded!! nah i wasnt feeling this ending... u had alot of weak punches no hate it's just u'r set ups are ok and then ya punches is like what happen?? u need to get more creative with them and u would be a hella lot better.... 5.0/10 lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook" this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look, who is lauren?? dont get the punch? she screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin', its in the past, you need to realise she'll never be alive n kickin', ooh-shit if thats off someone who passed away thats messed up but decent at the same time... you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen, fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen, ok... you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete, little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet" preety good.. you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice, n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce" decent word-play decent ending... u had more focus punches and better lines that made sense besides that lauren thing who is that? anyways u still had a good flow and all and came harder thats why i voted for u... 6.5/10... RTF in any of my battles.... * im not a hater if u dont vote for me oo-well.... must of been a good reason....* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^only person who has said that, if you dont get a punch...your dumb, but whatever...
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lol ok lol ill rtf later tonight.... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn
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getting my vote removed lol... i aint botherd lol uppinnnnnnnnnnnn
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