The Sorrow vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 12:52 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 12:54 PM.

The Sorrow has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 12:51 PM.

This should be an okay battle eh? I'm just drinking beers, I'll get drunk and then write my verse..

Forgot to say...

Yay my second win...........:)

You made a thread asking for an award, but for a noob that's no surprise
You'll get as much votes as that "OM of the Month" has gotten in replies
Remember King~~Dipset?...Wait didn't that alias get banned for cheating?
Shit, without voting rings Stanza's as hoplesss as blind children reading!
You claim that your dope, but check your stats...you're not a fuckin veteran
Wins? battling noobs and getting them DQ'd is the only way you getting them
Like "breakfast foods" I'm eating you early, you're about to have regrets
Because your words only have "good taste" when you're eating "alphabets"
Look, For every three wins you have, it seems that you recieve a loss too
You just won your 9th battle...do the math...even it shows that I own you

If you don't get anything, don't vote...
..PM me for an explanation if you need one..

Yes his alias was King~~Dipset..
- Got banned for voting rings...

Alphabets is a Cereal...

For the last bar his records 9-2, that should be all you need to know

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Voted For: The Sorrow

It Took You A Long Time to drop so Face The Reality Timer
When I finish With You Im Goin to Jail for Bruatility to a Minor

7/10...decent opener

Your Done for Now Yo Crew is Lookin for A Leader To Hire
When U dropped U get stomped On & spat at like small fires

6/10...eeh dont know if the personal is true

You No Show Yo Flow's Mystery Bcuz No ones Seen it Bro
Not a win on Yo Record yet?...No Wonder U "The Sorrow"

8/10...lol good punch and personal

I Give & Take back What You Borrow So Gimme My Skills
U wont Step To this Battle Cuz I Left U In a Chair on Wheels

8/10..lmao

Watch me send Stroke 2~Yo Grandma as presentz Like Santa
You Thought Your rymes was Like "Eazy E"
....................BuT Yo ass Is comin "Straight Outta Canada"

7/10..eehh
36/50
nice verse but some played lines and soem punches wre attempted but not successful....voerall, decent verse, no hate homie

You made a thread asking for an award, but for a noob that's no surprise
You'll get as much votes as that "OM of the Month" has gotten in replies

8/10..good personal nice ass opener

Remember King~~Dipset?...Wait didn't that alias get banned for cheating?
Shit, without voting rings Stanza's as hoplesss as blind children reading!

7/10...good personal, okay punch

You claim that your dope, but check your stats...you're not a fuckin veteran
Wins? battling noobs and getting them DQ'd is the only way you getting them

9/10...lmao, nice personal, killed it wit dat one

Like "breakfast foods" I'm eating you early, you're about to have regrets
Because your words only have "good taste" when you're eating "alphabets"

7/10..haha, nice werdplay, made me laugh

Look, For every three wins you have, it seems that you recieve a loss too
You just won your 9th battle...do the math...even it shows that I own you

9/10...great personal, havnt seen a verse with this many personals in hellaz
45/50
good verse nice ass personals but also had good punches in each one

damn these high of numbers have never popped up in any battle ive voted one, nice job to both of you, stanza, you cam dope, jsut not enuff, sorrow, you came reall dope...keep it up both of yall, both rtf(no hate stanza)
v/the sorrow

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This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

im totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

checkin the polls....go Sorrow lol...u got this....

^ Yeah, you're a pretty cool guy..

B to the umping this battle..

Voted For: The Sorrow

TS:
You made a thread asking for an award, but for a noob that's no surprise
You'll get as much votes as that "OM of the Month" has gotten in replies
coulda been sooo much harder, 5/10
Remember King~~Dipset?...Wait didn't that alias get banned for cheating?
Shit, without voting rings Stanza's as hoplesss as blind children reading!
meh, shit like this is getting played, 3/10
You claim that your dope, but check your stats...you're not a fuckin veteran
Wins? battling noobs and getting them DQ'd is the only way you getting them
ok personel, 6/10
Like "breakfast foods" I'm eating you early, you're about to have regrets
Because your words only have "good taste" when you're eating "alphabets"
nice line here, lol cereal, 7/10
Look, For every three wins you have, it seems that you recieve a loss too
You just won your 9th battle...do the math...even it shows that I own you
solid hit, 8/10
29/50

Stanza:
It Took You A Long Time to drop so Face The Reality Timer
When I finish With You Im Goin to Jail for Bruatility to a Minor
Played like mad, 2/10
Your Done for Now Yo Crew is Lookin for A Leader To Hire
When U dropped U get stomped On & spat at like small fires
blah, not good, 4/10
You No Show Yo Flow's Mystery Bcuz No ones Seen it Bro
Not a win on Yo Record yet?...No Wonder U "The Sorrow"
ok, 5/10
I Give & Take back What You Borrow So Gimme My Skills
U wont Step To this Battle Cuz I Left U In a Chair on Wheels
blah, kinda played, 3/10
Watch me send Stroke 2~Yo Grandma as presentz Like Santa
You Thought Your rymes was Like "Eazy E"
....................BuT Yo ass Is comin "Straight Outta Canada"
gay lol, 3/10
17/50

v/ sorrow

he came harder and kept shit solid, you came with played and weak punches, ts had some hard hits, thats what one it

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

hahahahaha, alphabets are good....................

Voted For: The Sorrow

aight sorrow good flow sikk punches that hit right on point.....
nice vocab funny ass lines and very true personals plus u never feel off once which gived u this pretty easiely.....

stanza.....good flow punches were ight but never coneected as well as his...... vocab was basic not too basic but not up to par with his and your personals just werent there on every line like his......so my vote goes tothe sorrow return tha favour on one off my battles....

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^ Wiggidy Wiggidy Wack Vote...

You didn't even explain you just copied and pasted our verses...

BOO!

:love: The Sorrow...

:love::love::love:I love bumping battes:love::love::love:

Ca$per.... Chief... Stanza = Complete Failure at life.

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Yeah Im A complete asshole

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

Pizzy Wizzy Polls Ma'Fucka..

/Fuck I'm Sick As Fuck....fa'real though, can't stop coughing..

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

Hey Satnza U R Family An Diz Wuz A Tite Drop I Lyked Dat ''No Wonder U Da Sorrow'' Line

It was a pretty good line, but I was 1-0...muwahahahahahaha

LOL You Aint The only One

Bcuz when this battle started I Had 9 wins but now i have 10 LOL

Bumpin like humping a pumpkin just for fun man....

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VOTE YOU FUCKIN' SLUTS.....<--- I can type like C.A.L.I....

^ yeah, but you also gotta go ask for votes now on aim ;)

hahahahaa, fuckin queer eh

uppin for stanza :shoot:

Voted For: The Sorrow

You made a thread asking for an award, but for a noob that's no surprise
You'll get as much votes as that "OM of the Month" has gotten in replies
—pretty decent opener
Remember King~~Dipset?...Wait didn't that alias get banned for cheating?
Shit, without voting rings Stanza's as hopeless as blind children reading!
—decent punch, felt that this one didn’t come as hard as ur opener
You claim that your dope, but check your stats...you're not a fuckin veteran
Wins? battling noobs and getting them DQ'd is the only way you getting them
—good persona, punch was good too
Like "breakfast foods" I'm eating you early, you're about to have regrets
Because your words only have "good taste" when you're eating "alphabets"
—blah, weak punch
Look, For every three wins you have, it seems that you receive a loss too
You just won your 9th battle...do the math...even it shows that I own you
—booo, not feeling this punch Sorrow


It Took You A Long Time to drop so Face The Reality Timer
When I finish With You Im Goin to Jail for Bruatility to a Minor
—ooo, decent
Your Done for Now Yo Crew is Lookin for A Leader To Hire
When U dropped U get stomped On & spat at like small fires
—pretty decent, should’ve came harder in this punch
You No Show Yo Flow's Mystery Bcuz No ones Seen it Bro
Not a win on Yo Record yet?...No Wonder U "The Sorrow"
—haha, punch was aight here
I Give & Take back What You Borrow So Gimme My Skills
U wont Step To this Battle Cuz I Left U In a Chair on Wheels
—could’ve switched ur rhyming on this punch around here
Watch me send Stroke 2~Yo Grandma as presentz Like Santa
You Thought Your rymes was Like "Eazy E"
....................BuT Yo ass Is comin "Straight Outta Canada"
—weak closer

overall – both emcee’s did pretty decent in this battle here..

Stanza – ur punches here were pretty basic in this battle..
Could’ve made some switch-a rounds in a couple of ur bars
Ur flow was good, stayed on point there, ur structure was
Decent, (don’t center it up tho), but u cam a little weak
In the punches, could’ve added some more personas in here
& harder punches, & u could’ve tookin this battle..

The Sorrow – not ur best drop here, but some of ur punches
Were pretty forced out, & some were okay though, ur flow
Was on point on this one, and the structure was good..
Basically u had a decent vocab & good use of personas
On Stanza in this battle.. but overall u had an aight drop
Though

No hate to both.. just voting

RTF.. The Sorrow.. Or This Vote Will Get Removed

Wow an Uppin for me ?

Thanx Drakel You are a True ...slut LOL j.k

And Jus for the record im not RTF I dont give a damn if you get it removed its not for me anyway LOL

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^ After that sweet upping nobody voted...

Somebody close this..

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