NewKid vs AckRite
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Jea...G'Luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-21-05 at 09:15 PM

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AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 08:47 PM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 08:58 PM.

look....

u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'

chris tucker played n da movie money talks mah rv name NewKid mah nik name G came meanin 'orgy' wordplay

upppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: NewKid

kid took this easy....

overall a really bad battle... i was who's didn't suck more.. both of you need to work on your punches and set ups.. both of your vocabs sucked....newkid work on your spelling... and ackrite... fix your structure...overall though newkid will take this i think partially because he had more creative punches...ackrite... cum jokes are played so are head jokes...overall both of you need to up.. but becuse newkid came with some less weak stuff he's gonna get it..

Vote//New Kid

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i voted on two of your battles...honestly...pay me

Voted For: AckRite

Punches-AcK....Da NeWkiD LiNe WaS FiRe LoL...aloNg WiT Da ToLL LiNe

Multis-None...DiDnt reaLLy sEe aNy

Vocab-AcK...Better usage of words

Personals-None....didnt really see any...BotH EmCeEs ShoUld aDd mOre oF TheSe iN FuturE BaTtLeS

Opener-AcK

Closer-AcK

Good battle

Closer-

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Jeah.............THANKS @ Non...........You Really Boasted My Confidence << Sarcasm...But W.E. This Was A Quick One

UPPIN'

Voted For: AckRite

Ak:

Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!
8/10 nice openor sweet to the point
Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!
7/10 ok good punch
Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!
7/10 good closer

Overal: 22/30

New kid:
u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
10/10 good punch line good opener
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
5/10 to plain
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'
6/10 good closer

Overall: 21/30

v/ Aktrite close battle but he gets it

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da fukk wit deez 2 dikk eatin faggits dey da worste cuz upppppppppppinnnnnnnn

Aeyo Uppin Dis Shit...............Vote Up Niggas................Nice Shit NewKid

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Voted For: AckRite

ackrite getz diz win hiz verse wuz rite on point on da flow and punchlinez da only thang i wuznt feeling wuz dat closer frum u ackrite da rest of da verse wuz reel hot an da flow wuz fukking on point where as newkid yo verse wuz pretty uncreative an itz all stuff dat iz generally played out, whurr iz yo creativity dawg? newkids verse wuz ok but dere wuz nuthing in da verse dat made ackrite look like a fool so i base mih vote on dat, ackrite getz da win an it'd be kool if yull culd return da vote in mih battlez

Voted For: AckRite

AckRite...
Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!
Not to shabby...6/10
Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!
Nice punch...8/10
Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!
Meh...5/10

Overall: 19/30


NewKid...
u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
Meh...4/10
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
Self Glory really, but okay wordplay...5/10
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'
Not bad...6/10

Overall: 15/30

AckRite came with better punches basically..

Vote: AckRite

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Voted For: AckRite

NewKid's verse was complete trash, ounded like a 3rd grader talking shit and happening to put words that rhyme on the end...really simple stuff that's ultra generic...you failed every attempt at a punch =/...

yeah definetly never heard that "paying your tolls" line and it was a nyce finish for the line above it, it fit well together, most people try and put one concept all into one line and forget that they got more bars to make it come full circle...name play on the next set was aiight...werd, last set was pretty nyce man...

iono why anybody but AckRite has a voTe but whatever, everyone has their different tastes and I happen to have the BETTER taste :D...

VOTE: AckRite

This was feedback posted for NewKid
 

shitt..........this dude got like 10 battles open. but i still think you took this. just a lil off wit tha structure, but still tha overall beter verse...but i cant vote...

frogger get da fukk out of hurr u ugli as geico

Voted For: NewKid

Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!

Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!

Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!

Some Iight Wordplay Dawg,. Nuthin 2 Personal, So I Wuznt Feeling Dat, Flow Wuz Pretty Solid, Punchez Culd Ov Been Better In Placez, U Needed Mo Consistancy, Good Drop Tho & Propps Goes Out Fo Dat Opener Tho, Dat Wuz Fiyah

u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'

Yo Verse Kept Me Mo Intrested NewKid, Da Flow Wuz Good, Disses Wuz On Point, Dat Closer Wuz Real Tite, Good Shit There Dawg, Wuznt Feeling Da Opening Line 2 Da ''Screamed NewKid Or G'' Puncvh, But U Had Da Better Read, An U Stayed On Point, Where As Ackrite Had Hot Wordplay, But Sum Of Da Punchez Wuzza Little Random

Vote/NewKid

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Yo Dis Nigga Gets Everyone Of My Votes DQ'd..........Come On Man, Theres No Way Imma Win This He Gon DQ Every Damn Vote

SMH

Aeyo Vote Up In This Shit.......Its Been Up Long Enough........Half My Votes DQ'd For NO REASON Also

SMH

My Record Is BLAH.............Uppin For Votes..................I Hate Comin Back 2 See No Votes

Aeyo Uppin This Shit For Some Votes....EXPLAIN EM....Since None Of Them Is Bein Counted Ne Way...........

Voted For: AckRite

Aeyo Uppin This Shit Also.............................................. .VOTE UP

Voted For: AckRite

Voted For: AckRite

Ok Good battle here

Ackrite:

Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!

LOL Nice 8/10

Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!

Didn't connect and was gay :( Dick lines=played 5/10

Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!

LOL Good 7/10

Overall: 20/30 (66%)

Pretty Decent Verse From You. You Had A Dick Line In There, Which Is A Big Mistake Seeing That dick Lines Are Played As Fuck. Work On Creativity Fam.

NewKid:

u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?

Good 7/10

u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'

LOL Very Gay...4/10

ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'

NICE!! 9/10

Overall: 20/30 (66%)

Decent Verse, But Would Of Been Alot Better Without That Gay Orgy Line. Punches Were Decent, And You Were Kinda Consistent. Work On Those To Things And You Will Become A Much Better Battler.

However, It Looks Like We Have A Tie Here. So, I'm Gonna Have To Judge This On Flow, And Give It To Ackrite.

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