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_JooKsta_ vs kelsick39
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10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-22-05 at 02:57 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
_JooKsta_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 11:58 PM.
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imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick....
0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... |
kelsick39 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 12:24 AM.
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y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore
cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" lmao, thisll be good |
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Voted For: kelsick39
LoL Nice BAttle! but Vote:Kelsick .................................................. .......... y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores ^alright 7/10 Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns ^iight7/10 wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that LoL^8/10 thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy ^6.5/10 Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes ^7/10 i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" LoL^8/10 ......................... jook ........................ imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick.... 0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... LoL Nice^8.5/10 i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. ^?6/10 dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ^7/10 ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... ^7/10 u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... ^6.5/10 ........................ overall-- 7/10-8.5 <jook/1st linez 7/10-6/10 <Kel/2nd 8/10-7/10 <kel/3rd 6.5-7/10 <Jook/4th 7/10-6.5 <Kel/5th CLOSE VERY CLOSE but my vote goes to Kel .................... I Alwayz Vote Honestly .................................. |
This was feedback posted for _JooKsta_
Jus check out da battle
Jook make all ur lines da same length!!!!! |
chea,chea good lookin out on da vote GhoSt....and good lookin on da hint Paradox
upin fa m0re v0tes.... |
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Voted For: kelsick39
jooksta: imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick.... 0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... ^^^EHH DECENT OPENER... i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. ^^^REAL WACK dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ^^^LOL...HELL NO ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... ^^WHUT????? u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... ^^^^AWWW MAN FAM....WHUT R DOIN LOL....U DIDN'T HAVE A HOT LINE IN YA WHOLE VERSE...REAL TALK NO HATE kelsick: y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores ^^^^LOL GOOD PERSONAL.. Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns ^^^DA FLOW WAS GOOD..BUT DA PUNCHLINE DIDN'T REALLY HIT DAT HARD wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that ^^^GOOD USE OF DA MULTIS..AND PERSONAL thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy ^^UUHH OKAY Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes ^^^NAH i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" ^^^WEAK CLOSER... V/KELSICK...JOOKSTA U CANT BE MADD FAM YA VERSE WAS REAL WEAK RETURN DA FAVOR....AND EXPLAIN YA VOTE LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL BATTLE |
Nah G i AinT MaD...i KnOw WhaT i DiD WRoNg...BuT GoOd LoOkiN oUt On Da HoNeSt VoTe aNd GoOd ExPLaiNaTioN....
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Voted For: _JooKsta_
Jooksta: ok good structure liked ya punches it was iight openor was also good your closer was aslo good it was a good battle between ya but you came on top of him......................you're verse it was good man gotta give you props wen its due kelsick: your verse was iight it was not as good as jooksta ya punches was also good it was an ok structure and you stayed on point too bad you didnt end up on top v/jooksta I gotta give it to you please return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2167988 |
^^^^^ i really doubted anyone would think he won........ but u can have ur opinion
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looook........ isnt this battle so cool!?!?!? vote people
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This was feedback posted for kelsick39
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Voted For: kelsick39
dayum... kel took this easy... haha tha first line about the underscores was tight that send in the clowns was funny and the best line of all was the cut out the jokes.. i like the personal plays on his name.. nice job for a newbie... Removed by RobKilla's request.. was to be feedback |
LoL....Y0 i ApPreCiaTe ThOsE oF YaLL WhO VoTeD HoNeStLy.....KeEp Em CoMeN i NeEd 1 mOre LosS....tHeN i'LL kNoW WhaT i NeEd To WiN BatTLeZ
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thanx for the honest votes................................
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w/e......... upppppppppppppin
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uppin biatches
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upin for more votes...damn i need this battle closed
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^^^^^^^^^^^ yea.................. wat he sed........
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god damn.......... can we get some votes.....
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can i get another fuckin vote..............................
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kid is def. hot right now.............. he might be a problem
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damn...................................... i guess ima have to start votin alot more to even see another vote
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wtf is wrong wit u people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 no respect
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lol, ive even been votin........ this is straight homo now........
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kid is gangsta yo..................................
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Voted For: kelsick39
Kelsick39 ate cream! Kel you had harder punches and better flow. |
the only reason i would keep that vote is cuz i think Jook wants this closed just as fast as i do...............
but its definetely all cool if u want that taken off |
................................. uppin
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Voted For: kelsick39
In Mah Opinnon, Diz Shit Wuz 2 EZ......... Klesick Had Da Better Everythin Dawg, Humouress Punchez, Witty Wordplay An Decent Hard Hittin Personalz, Diz Jooksta Kid Had Like 6 Words In 1 Line, Den 14 In Another Or Sumthan, I Aint Feelin Dat, Da Vocab An Use Of Metaphours Wuz Basic In Jookstas Verse 2, Kelsick Came Iight With It, Much More Complex Verse Wit Harder Hitting Errtyhin, An Anybody Who Think Diffrently Izza Damn Fool!!!!! Plz Return Da Vote Kelsick, In Mah Battle Wit Skriptz, Link Iz In Da Signature |
uppin for one more vote.......................................
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still uppin for thagt voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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