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E.C vs Delaware
Battle Rules:
6 Lines (as requested) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no hate just for fun... gd luck.... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-22-05 at 06:50 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 06:23 AM.
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Delaware has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 06:27 AM.
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like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air,
you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food, this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews, i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy, still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies, ------------------------------------------------------- _Explanations_ 1st bar: Name play "delaware" "dela wears" 2nd bar: macdonals fat "phat" is good thats it just a quick key... hope u like :thumbup: |
Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane……
Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’…… How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope… I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*…. From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair….. *An old saying If u don’t get it don’t vote :thumbup: |
good verse man... upin for votes...................
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Voted For: Delaware
Vote - Delaware Delaware had better punches in his verse and it was flowing better. Both of ya'll had a good structured verse. E.C your verse was aight but i werent feelin it as much as dela's. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for E.C
hard to call
paradox had weak lines, one fairly good play on E.C's name E.C on the other hand had some played concepts and nuthin overly original if i had to pick a winner though, prolly E.C cuz he had a better play on the other persons name!!! |
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Voted For: Delaware
so lets see......... paradoxs: From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair….. ......fucking dope line.....ur best..others....good.... E.C: like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air, you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, ...........good punch...never seem punch like that before..lol..... ..........still.......par get more greative punches...e.cs good too..but give vote for paradoxs |
Voted For: Delaware
V/P.aradox.....this was a good battle Ec u came wit a good opener but it wasnt consistent from there structure a bit strechted but i felt u came to lightly....Paradox....u came wit a good verse u were consistent wit punchs an personals also structure was onpoint...NO Hate.............RETURN THE FAVOR..... Opener=E Closer=P Punchs=P Structure=P personals=Tie vocab=Tie Multi's=Tie(none really) Werdplay=Tie Overall=P.aradox Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Delaware
overall an alright battle ... paradox u been work'n hard and its been paying off vocab goes to paradox because he had alot better words...but i think that he coulda worked on the delievery and wordplay a little more...but still you had em with your punches and personals.. overall not a bad job.. you have been elevating alot e.c... i could tell you did this fast... it was an alright verse.. just not up to par with paras... overall i think para got this because he had alot better wordplay and his verse was more creative... Vote//Paradox |
Voted For: Delaware
this was a pretty weak battle but i think paradox took this one E.C like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air, you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, Wack opener you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food, this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews, Wack i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy, still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies, Decent Paradox Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane…… Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’…… Weak opener How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope… I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*…. Decent From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair….. Okay multies, weak punchlines, okay closer Overall this was a weak battle but i think paradox took this one, he came alittle harder better pucnhlines.. okay personals overall keep it up both and elevate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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uppin dis shit 4 some votes plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: E.C
Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane…… Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’…… How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope… I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*…. From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair….. Da First 3 Linez Wuz Iight, Den U Started 2 Fall Off, I Wuznt Feelin Dat Closer, If U Kept Da Consistancy Goin From Dem First 3 Linez U Prolly Wuld Of Got Da Win, Keep It Up Tho like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air, you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food, this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews, i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy, still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies, Iight Dat Wuz An Okay Verse, I Wuznt Feelin Da Mcdonalds & Foreskin Bar, Seemed Uncreative & Forced, Bu Da Rest Of Yo Verse Wuz Good & On Point, Da Closer Wuz Humouress, An Da Opener Wuz Good Wordplay An A Creative Personal, So For More Consistancy In Da Verse EC Gets Mah Vote Plz Return Da Vote In One Of Da Battlez In Mah Signature |
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Voted For: E.C
I'm voting for E.C because i felt that E.C came harder with the punches, Deleware had a few played concepts and his punches didn't land for me. E.C had a good all round verse so i think he took it in these aspects. Punches - E.C Creativity - E.C Vocab - Delaware Overall i feel E.C took this, rtf E.C in my battle with confidential or this vote will be deducted. |
ight ill vote now fam...... uppin for more.........
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Fuk me wot a bunch of shit votes!!!!
Uppin..... |
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Voted For: E.C
like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air, you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, ^^nice name/werdplay you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food, this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews, ^^nah this was terrible fam...oh so terrible..lol i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy, still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies, ^^no you didnt..? . you started off dope n went downhill right after shit, i read ya 1st line n thought you had it... . . Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane…… Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’…… ^^eh ok, nothin special How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope… I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*…. ^^ya ive heard that, decent but basic From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair….. ^^nice..lol,...funny shit... . your verse was basically same but opposite to ec's you started weak then ended strong...hmm damn.. . . basically it comes down to who's punch was best n most original/hard hitting......... i gotta go with ec his punch was more direct but it was really close |
lol i hate not trying in battles lol... uppin for more votes.........
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Voted For: E.C
E.C.- your verse was nice n all...your punches..were good too...some were funny n all...but they were all good because they hit hard and connected..structure was good n all easy to read...had a few personals...but overall 8.9/10..For just an over better verse and punches... Delaware- your verse was decent...but your punches were also good...but some came weak tho...structure was good n all easy to read...had some personals...but overall 7.0/10...Because some of your punches were weak... Vote For the battle in my Sig...*If Not I Will Remove My Vote* |
ill rtf tomoro when i got tiem fam... uppin for the last vote
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Voted For: E.C
Aii This Is the breakdown EC like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air, you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears, Funny And A Nice Nameplay you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food, this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews, That was Good i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy, still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies That was aii Nuttin Specail Overall mayne I Think That You take this battle BuT i Know taht you can do way beter Than this Delaware Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane…… Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’…… ..No Punch?...:( How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope… I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*…. ....That was aii.. From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are…. E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair… Aii name play But The seond line fucked it up Overall I Think That YoU Should Try and elevate from This And try to work on Dissing your Oppenet and Not to much on Self Glorification RTF In anyh Battle link in my Sig PLEASE |
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