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Skitzo vs P.aradox
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6 Lines Crew Votes Allowed No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-22-05 at 03:05 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
P.aradox has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:39 PM.
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Skitzo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:52 PM.
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Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back
To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you |
Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more… Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath….. Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath…… Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water….. Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……... Anotha quick quick 4 a bit of elevation....... If u dont get it, dont vote!!!!!! |
Nice verse dawg uppin for votes....................
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Rule change cuz i thought we were in da same crew.........
No CREW VOTES.......... |
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\^^nice verse g'luck//////////////////
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is da rule change ok wi u?????????????????????????
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yea no doubt......................................
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Voted For: Skitzo
Nice Versez For Both of Yall! Vote:Skitzo ................................ Skitzo Ur Structure Was Pretty,Wordplay Pretty Basic,Punches Were Pretty Good,Personalz Alright ................................................. Paradox I Didnt Vote Against u Cuz We Had beef! ur Verse I Was Feelin 2! Structure Was kind Of Off,Wordplay PRetty Good,Punches iight,Personalz Not 2 Good! ...................... Punches>Skitz Wordplay>Skits Personalz>Tie Rhymez Scheme>Skits Structure>Skitz ....................... Nice verse Both Of Yall! pleaz pleaz Return Da Favor>> http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191658 |
This was feedback posted for Skitzo
Good verse skitzo u got this win in the bag ..6FEET thats how we do.......uppppin for the famz..........
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Voted For: P.aradox
ight close battle here imma break it down.... skitzo... Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that ^^ good opener alryt punch... 6/10 But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about ^^ played conecept had potential thogh 5/10 You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you ^^ nicee line decent wordplay 7/10 overall i gfive you 18/30 u have got potentail just keep practising and you will get far u only had one dicent punch in the whole verse and the rest of it was what brought u down just stay consistant thropught your battle and u will wi... flwo and structure was decent though.... P.aradox Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor…… Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more… ^^ good opener decent punch 6/10 Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath….. Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath…… ^^ alryyt punch not effective though 5/10 Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water….. Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……... ^^ decent closure good name play and good punch 8/10 overall i give u 19/20 u just skraped this but you came out on top overall it was a gd verse u have got potential to be super dope just keep wrkin on your punches and you will get there rtf links in the sig... vote fairly!! pzz |
Fanx dawg 4 the REAL vote..........
Uppin this joint 4 votes!!!!!!!!! |
Uppin for some votes...................................
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Voted For: Skitzo
Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor…… Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more… ehhhhhh it was aight.... shoulda explained wat LL is, if its Lyricist lounge, the line was weak Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath….. Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath…… blah line, u have potential, but right now im not feelin these bars, kinda bland Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water….. Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……... not real good name play in this one......... u tried but didnt suceed at all at doin it well Skitzo Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that eh....... kinda weak closer, but right now ur even with him But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about as weak as his second bar also..... right now this isnt the greatest battle.... first line was better than the second You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you lol...... only funny or decent line i really found in this battle for that last line u get my vote..... also, Paradox had mad stretched bars while skitzo had a real nice structure in his verse....... V/skitzo |
Voted For: P.aradox
this battle was certainly wack to me.....no hard punches...no multis....vocabulary was basic....I vote P.aradox do to the better diss he made towards the otha emcee....if yall eva battle again go for atleast 10 bars cuz under 8 bar battles are trash ta me cuz dey to quick ta read. Both emcees elevate on sum punches...add a lil wordplay...and basickally try harda cuz diz quick shit people say dey be doin...i aint buyin it...if it aint ya tyme ta rip sum1 it aint ya tyme...dont go around it by sayin u typed ya verse quick.....Skitzo...ya verse was weak....it wasnt really a diss its more like u tawkin to sum1 about him...and in battles i feel u should direct the person u battlen...not tellin da people how wack he is. V/ Paradox |
Uppin for more votes in ere plz...................
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Voted For: P.aradox
I'll say one thing, this was a BOLD battle (wordplay hoez) :thumbup: Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor…… Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more… 5...partial filler, and played concept!! Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath….. Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath…… 5...not really feelin this, worded wrong!! Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water….. Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……... 6...ok, but forced play off his name!! OVERALL: 16/30 Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that 4...weak shit, the boldness was pointless But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about 3...wtf!!! weaker, and played!! You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you 6...LoL!! this was pretty funny!! OVERALL: 12/30 weak battle, both had some played shit in there and sum unnecessary filler, Skitzo was weaker, first 2 bars were pointless filler and only real punch was the closer, paradox, weak punches really and the one ok punch was more of a forced play on his name than a natural one!!! still, ya came less weak!!! V/ - P.aradox |
Voted For: P.aradox
aiight decent battle both need to elevate.. especially u skitzo... paradox - your verse was good, was a little simple and genralised but was good, flowed very well, good vocabulary, your structure was a lil bit off but wasnt bad, and your punches hit overall pretty well... 7.5/10 Skitzo - your verse was ok, it flowed well but went off about half through... punches were aiight and u had a good structure, work on ur vocabulary a bit more... you also need to work on ur creativity a bit more cause ur verse was a bit played... 6/10 opener - S closer - P flow - P punches - tie structure - S vocabulary - P creativity - P enjoyment - P punches - P v/ P no hate just how i saw it.... |
Uppin 4 one more vote plz.....................rtf!!!!
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Uppin dis shit plz................................
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Voted For: P.aradox
Iight This Wuz A Real Nice Battle Right Here All P.aradox: Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor…… Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more… Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath….. Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath…… Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water….. Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……... Yo Wordplay Wuz Rite On Point, Flow Wuz Good 2, Da Closer Wuz Real Creative, Good Use Of Wordplay 2, Mettas Were Witty, Overall U Had A Good Verse Dawg, Nice Stuff Sktizo: Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you I Wuz Feelin Yo Verse Rite Up Until Dat Spongebob Line, After That Yo Verse Fell Off, U Lacked Consistancy Anm Yo Shit Wuznt Az Creative V/P.aradox Hit Up Da Battlez In Mah Sig Mayn |
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