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REDZONE vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
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REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 03:14 PM.
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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 03:23 PM.
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Yo Disses Are Short Changed, For U Fellow MC'Z O'z Are Bankrupt//
Guess Datz Why U In Da REDZONE, Never On Da Come'Up// Stick Da Emotion ThumbUp, Cyberly Givin U Propps// Fake Recognize Fake Aye?? Yo Flowz Immitatin Milli Vanilli Dropps// Pull Out All Da Stoppz, Because Datz Where It Stoppz, You'd Have Too Steal My Mic// Your Never A Step Ahead, Lyke Cheating In A Walk Race On A Byke// Your Da Illest Yeah? Booo! Hahaa SYKE// Diz Pussy Getz Fucked Lyke A Set Of Twin Dykez// I Really Dunt Wanna Fight, Mainly Becuz Ahm NICE// It Wuldnt Be Fair On U, Even Tho Erry Hooker Has HIS Price// Ur Nuthin Mo Than Vice City, Rappin Shitty An Getting Played By Kidz// U Culdnt Even Sell Yo Shitz On Ebay With Free Bidz// Try Watching Porno Vidz, Releaze A Little Tension// We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension/// Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me// Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely// Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest/// If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best |
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battle me, where ya vest at, mah flow'll leave ya chest wet... I'm tha best yet, can't test that, you like a stripper get messed at... mah THEORY will leave you KHAOZ, worst than black plague... tha gat spray, ya back lay, off tha shots tha mac made... Red'll destroy ya cuz, then preceed defense ta finish off ya family... exploit and expose ya wit mah 6 sense like stutterin stanley... you jus shit, only way you buss shit is nuts you buss quick... can't touch this, mah flow MC Hammer ya guts bitch... unbelievable how RV accept homo's, that try ta flow fa promo's... no mo' of you faggot, mah punchline get cha strike 3 like Nomo... you slow mode, even special olympics couldn't figure out... so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out... with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds... it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude... Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed... before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE... |
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Voted For: REDZONE
Yo Disses Are Short Changed, For U Fellow MC'Z O'z Are Bankrupt// Guess Datz Why U In Da REDZONE, Never On Da Come'Up// DECENT... Stick Da Emotion ThumbUp, Cyberly Givin U Propps// Fake Recognize Fake Aye?? Yo Flowz Immitatin Milli Vanilli Dropps// nah played... Pull Out All Da Stoppz, Because Datz Where It Stoppz, You'd Have Too Steal My Mic// Your Never A Step Ahead, Lyke Cheating In A Walk Race On A Byke// 1ST LINE NAH, 2ED WAS BASIC BUT DECENT.. Your Da Illest Yeah? Booo! Hahaa SYKE// Diz Pussy Getz Fucked Lyke A Set Of Twin Dykez// aight.. I Really Dunt Wanna Fight, Mainly Becuz Ahm NICE// It Wuldnt Be Fair On U, Even Tho Erry Hooker Has HIS Price// nah not feeling it.. Ur Nuthin Mo Than Vice City, Rappin Shitty An Getting Played By Kidz// U Culdnt Even Sell Yo Shitz On Ebay With Free Bidz// ha good one.. Try Watching Porno Vidz, Releaze A Little Tension// We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension/// decent... Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me// Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely// nah... Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest/// If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best good ending... u had a couple iffy lines i wasnt feeling but u had some good punches in there some basic couple celever but not a bad verse just plez fix ya verse lay-out dont cram everything together space it out bar by bar / slash by / slash it makes it alot easy to read and follow which fucks up ya flow 6.0/10 battle me, where ya vest at, mah flow'll leave ya chest wet... I'm tha best yet, can't test that, you like a stripper get messed at... multis decent... could of had a better hit thou.. mah THEORY will leave you KHAOZ, worst than black plague... tha gat spray, ya back lay, off tha shots tha mac made... ha im feeling that 2ed line good flow... Red'll destroy ya cuz, then preceed defense ta finish off ya family... exploit and expose ya wit mah 6 sense like stutterin stanley... nice hit feeling this bar creative... you jus shit, only way you buss shit is nuts you buss quick... can't touch this, mah flow MC Hammer ya guts bitch... straight raw i like it... unbelievable how RV accept homo's, that try ta flow fa promo's... no mo' of you faggot, mah punchline get cha strike 3 like Nomo... played.... you slow mode, even special olympics couldn't figure out... so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out... nah def aint feeling this.... with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds... it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude... just flowing not direct hits... Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed... before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE could of been a better ending... 7.5/10 u started off good had some decent multis some hit but they wasnt hard hitting some raw lyrics but u fell of towards the end which hurts but u had way more harder hits still and some decent multis but next time dont fall of towards the end some-times that might cost u a battle stay up.... |
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he just had better punches that was more creative thats all no hate fam
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
okz diz wuz an ok battle REDZONE u git some iight stuffz in yo verse a few ok personals nuthin 2 special da punchez wuz nice in placez 2 lyke dat stuttering stanley line dat wuz da best u had 2 offer most opf yo verse wuz uncreative doh where as KhAoZ ThEoRy had dem killer blowz wit da punchlinez dat vice city line wuz fukkin nice az hell an dat closer getz u da vote frum me ///If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best dat wuz fukkin nice rite dere my vote goez 2 KhAoZ ThEoRY |
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Voted For: REDZONE
Easy win for redzone the multies pretty decent goin troughout the verse your structure was readable and your metas made sense eventhough you talked about alot of herb shit your flow was way better than khaos's garbage asss verse. Khaos i dont know what you were thinkin your whole verse was garbage it looks like you were pullin random words out off a bucket and pasted them in the verse pure garbage and look at your structure learn t use the enter key and stop with the herb talk talkin about dykes and cocks unngh NO thats so poserish whatever you got owned v REDZONE |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
i voted for Khaoz... punches: khaoz Redzone attempted punches but his werent strong enough, and some of em made no sense..fareal personals: khaoz Redzone was concentratin on throwin in punches and wordplay...i barely seen a personal from him creativeness: both Both of u niggas were creative, i think redzone put more thought into his verse, but i think both of u had it so its a tie wordplay: redzone Redzone's was full of wordplay, not sayin khaoz's shit wasnt but red had wordplay throughout his verse so he took this multiz: noone self-explanatory flow: redzone redzones shit flowed more because of tha wordplay opener=khaoz middle=khaoz closer=redzone hit up one of my battles...wun |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
GOOD: Flow - Both Structure - Redzone Punchlines - Both vocab - Khaos Wordplay - Khaos Nameplay - Both BAD: forced Rhymes - Both (I saw form both sum forced rhymes) Forced Multis - nope Non Sence - nah CREATIVITY Theme Battle - nope Creative Punches - Redzone creative multi's - khaos PERSONALS: Khaos came harder with the personals, I didn't saw any good from Redzone, but both came hard hittin with punches OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Redzone Closing: Redzone COMMENT: Both battles wur good, but khaoz came harder with punches...... tight battle V/ Khaos |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
This was a pretty close battle: Khaoz: Yo Disses Are Short Changed, For U Fellow MC'Z O'z Are Bankrupt// Guess Datz Why U In Da REDZONE, Never On Da Come'Up// ...... this opener was decent, but nuthin special Stick Da Emotion ThumbUp, Cyberly Givin U Propps// Fake Recognize Fake Aye?? Yo Flowz Immitatin Milli Vanilli Dropps// ...... lmao, this line made me laugh, pretty good, altho setup is alil eh Pull Out All Da Stoppz, Because Datz Where It Stoppz, You'd Have Too Steal My Mic// Your Never A Step Ahead, Lyke Cheating In A Walk Race On A Byke// ehhh ok simile and shit here, but the punch u tried to bring with it was worded alil off to make it effective Your Da Illest Yeah? Booo! Hahaa SYKE// Diz Pussy Getz Fucked Lyke A Set Of Twin Dykez// ....this was pretty weak... stay away from gay and lesbian lines.... I Really Dunt Wanna Fight, Mainly Becuz Ahm NICE// It Wuldnt Be Fair On U, Even Tho Erry Hooker Has HIS Price// ..... ehhh it was ok multis but nuthin else was done very well Ur Nuthin Mo Than Vice City, Rappin Shitty An Getting Played By Kidz// U Culdnt Even Sell Yo Shitz On Ebay With Free Bidz// ....ehh, wording was off again, ok concept but it made for a weak punch.... Try Watching Porno Vidz, Releaze A Little Tension// We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension/// .... haha, this line made me laugh also, i unno y, but decent bar Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me// Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely// .... lol, ok wordplay, the end of ur bar coulda used lil help so we could comprehend it better, but ok bar Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest/// If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best ...... ehh not that good of a closer overal u had decent punches, only a couple personals, but they were aight........ some multis in there to string it along better, however, i dont like ur structure... stay away from the slashes and all the CAPS and ull be fine.... .also work on ur wording alil bit to make for more effective punches, along with more creative concepts Redzone: battle me, where ya vest at, mah flow'll leave ya chest wet... i dont know how u did all those multies and than didnt rhyme it that well at the end... no punch really, just multies I'm tha best yet, can't test that, you like a stripper get messed at... mah THEORY will leave you KHAOZ, worst than black plague... tha gat spray, ya back lay, off tha shots tha mac made... ..... only multies really, and that gangsta shit isnt very well accepted on this site Red'll destroy ya cuz, then preceed defense ta finish off ya family... exploit and expose ya wit mah 6 sense like stutterin stanley... ... lmao @ stutterin stanley...... but not very hard hittin dissin him wise.. sayin u have a 6th sense is kinda SG you jus shit, only way you buss shit is nuts you buss quick... can't touch this, mah flow MC Hammer ya guts bitch... ....... ive heard this same Hammer shit since 2000, So NO! not good unbelievable how RV accept homo's, that try ta flow fa promo's... no mo' of you faggot, mah punchline get cha strike 3 like Nomo... ok bar..... nice multis but thats about it you slow mode, even special olympics couldn't figure out... so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out... ..... i liked this bar, best one of ur verse to me, just try and be more creative like this with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds... it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude... ...... ur just sayin shit in this bar, no real punches or creativity, along with metas Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed... before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE... ehhh this wasnt very creative and not a very hard hittin closer ok, Khaos gets my vote for more consistency, creativity, and metas and similes.......... REDZONE had one nice bar and the rest was like SG or gangsta type shit....... one line, and multies do not win battles.... u need more balance like Khaos... khaos also had multies, but they were more useful and helped the verse out better..... V/Khaos |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Damn this was a sick battle, Red you came strong, I really liked youre whole verse, I thought Id be voting for you when I read it because you really went strt8 to the heart on this. so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out... with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds... it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude... Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed... before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE... Good endin, sick wit it thurrr. Khaoz man u rly came strong you probs beat him by 0.5, I didnt think you started off well but from the twin dykez line this nigga got killed. Mad propps to you , gd stuff. We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension/// Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me// Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely// Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest/// If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best The suspension line, was the winner. RTF |
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