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Mad Dog 05-23-05 07:21 AM

Mad Dog vs E.C
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Unexplained Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 05-23-05 at 08:21 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 05-23-05 07:22 AM

Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 07:22 AM.

System 05-23-05 07:24 AM

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 07:24 AM.

Mad Dog 05-23-05 07:33 AM

*I'm gonna actually hurt your feelings...and possibly your reputation*

This the 3rd round new name, old game u still ain't elevate,
Could throw flour at your ass and you still wouldn't self raise,
It's insane Manchester got drugs, gangstas...and then E.C,
The closest to drugs he'll get is by eating his #* key,
Records 7-1 well Seven done dissed you and no response???,
It jus shows you only man up to kids...sumthin bout this nonce,
That ain't ya overall rec...coz truth is it's jus a wreck,
If disrespect was currency you'd be cashin in cheques,
On a UK merking spree, so far EC's 0% successful,
So ima jus wait here for the first...this'll be forever suspenseful,

*Merking over*


# is a hash key

E.C 05-23-05 07:38 AM

ill just type some quick shit that'll seep through your spine,
see how much ive elevated...........
.......mad dog is still a couple of years behind,
best u.k head audio wit 1-1 something doesnt seem right,
coz your a mod, you get that much d/r's they never see light,
u merked me twice, now times have changed your dated,
dont understand the fuss, mad dod has always been overrated
me losin to you again? never happenin there aint no stoppin me,
you winnin this battle...........
........faggots got a better chance of winnin the "lottery",
see my "ghetto gospel" looks like the end of the battle has arrived,
i can prove this bitch is sad................. he still thinks "tupac" is alive,

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_explanations_

1st bar: sayin he hasnt elevated
2nd bar: he's mod of LL so he gets dr's
5th bar: oin an msn conversation he said that tupac was alive n goin on bout his 2 collabs n how he saw him lol...

n e wayz that sums it up... g'luck no hate fam... pzzzz

Dirty Nigga 05-23-05 08:04 AM

This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 
not gonna vote because yall both my boys, but this was a close battle, good luck to the both of ya'll...

King Solo 05-23-05 08:13 AM

This was feedback posted for E.C
 
close battle...........

both came pretty weak............

good luck to both!!!!

13th. 05-23-05 10:02 AM

Voted For: E.C

This the 3rd round new name, old game u still ain't elevate,
Could throw flour at your ass and you still wouldn't self raise,
NAH.........
It's insane Manchester got drugs, gangstas...and then E.C,
The closest to drugs he'll get is by eating his #* key,
GOOD
Records 7-1 well Seven done dissed you and no response???,
It jus shows you only man up to kids...sumthin bout this nonce,
OK.........
That ain't ya overall rec...coz truth is it's jus a wreck,
If disrespect was currency you'd be cashin in cheques,
SO-SO
On a UK merking spree, so far EC's 0% successful,
So ima jus wait here for the first...this'll be forever suspenseful,
AIGHT.......
=6/10 AN OK VERSE BUT NO REALI HARD PUNCHES......

VS

ill just type some quick shit that'll seep through your spine,
see how much ive elevated...........
.......mad dog is still a couple of years behind,
GOOD
best u.k head audio wit 1-1 something doesnt seem right,
coz your a mod, you get that much d/r's they never see light,
SO-SO
u merked me twice, now times have changed your dated,
dont understand the fuss, mad dog has always been overrated
GOOD
me losin to you again? never happenin there aint no stoppin me,
you winnin this battle...........
........faggots got a better chance of winnin the "lottery",
NICE
see my "ghetto gospel" looks like the end of the battle has arrived,
i can prove this bitch is sad................. he still thinks "tupac" is alive,
LOL NICEEEE
=7.5/10 STILL NOT UR BEST BUT THERE WAS A FEW GOOD PUNCHES BUT U NEED 2 SPEND MORE TIME ON THESE!!!!

V/EC FOR COMIN A LOT HARDER WITH BETTER PUNCHES!!!!!

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Mad Dog 05-23-05 10:27 AM

-_- @ the great unexplanus........................

E.C 05-23-05 04:57 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

Mad Dog 05-24-05 03:17 AM

cijlflrufliffl....................................

E.C 05-24-05 03:36 AM

uuppin nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn................

E.C 05-24-05 01:17 PM

uppin uppin uppin ...............................

Sik Wit It 05-24-05 06:31 PM

Voted For: Mad Dog

....pretty decent battle here....

but i think that m.d. took this one.. cuz to tell u the truth.. he came a little stronger... the flow goes to both..pretty much had decent shits.. strcuture goes to both also..but it doesnt matter...the punches go to m.d. for comin a little stronger n' them.. e.c. u could've came a little harder in this battle tho... i guess this isnt ur best work here tho..

Know-Gimix 05-24-05 07:02 PM

Voted For: Mad Dog

This the 3rd round new name, old game u still ain't elevate,
Could throw flour at your ass and you still wouldn't self raise,
It might be just me, but elevate and self raise are so off from a rhyme... and yeast makes thinks rise, not flour, flour makes it not stick to shit :)- didn't feel it
It's insane Manchester got drugs, gangstas...and then E.C,
The closest to drugs he'll get is by eating his #* key,
This was better, could go both ways, hash key, pound key, I think you could have set it up better, but not bad
Records 7-1 well Seven done dissed you and no response???,
It jus shows you only man up to kids...sumthin bout this nonce,
the second line is bad, wtf is a nonce?- first line, lol is a good setup, snuck some personal shit in there, but finish the bar next time :)
That ain't ya overall rec...coz truth is it's jus a wreck,
If disrespect was currency you'd be cashin in cheques,
Probly best bar so far, it was interesting straight through, decent punch, kept a flow to it, I liked it
On a UK merking spree, so far EC's 0% successful,
So ima jus wait here for the first...this'll be forever suspenseful.
This was o.k, not great, not horrible- but it was o.k



ill just type some quick shit that'll seep through your spine,
see how much ive elevated...........
.......mad dog is still a couple of years behind,
weak opener, but it wasn't bad, just nothing to get me hyped about, simple diss nothing real personal, nothing creative
best u.k head audio wit 1-1 something doesnt seem right,
coz your a mod, you get that much d/r's they never see light,
This was weak, I mean you could have gone about this so much better, all you say is he has d/r's - the rhyme is forced, no creativity again
u merked me twice, now times have changed your dated,
dont understand the fuss, mad dod has always been overrated
o.k, but your not packin enough of a punch, it rhymes and all, but this shit don't stand out
me losin to you again? never happenin there aint no stoppin me,
you winnin this battle...........
........faggots got a better chance of winnin the "lottery",
Best bar of yours so far, and the concept is played, you could have included some wordplay, or doubled up on your punches
see my "ghetto gospel" looks like the end of the battle has arrived,
i can prove this bitch is sad................. he still thinks "tupac" is alive,
blah, this was o.k, not great, not horrible, but it was o.k


I think both of you could have made your verses alot more impactfull with more work, both seemed kinda bland, nothing stand out, kind of a boring battle to vote on. Ima give it to Mad Dog, cuz he had the only creative bar I found w/ that hash key shit, but all around this was close. Both just get to writing more, cuz it needs more. 1

Status 05-25-05 04:07 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

well im gonna have to give this to mad dogg,

EC, you talked too much about how he beat you in the last few rounds, and you didnt really have hard hitting personals, and not really any good punches, and dog, work on your metaphores, i dont even think there was any...but you also need to work ont he selfglorifacation, but other than that it was decent but you had to try to hard to make your personals hit, for me, if you have to explain your personals then you shouldnt have them, and you explained alot of shit, and that tupac line was dumb becuase alot of people think hes alive *although i think he is dead*
but yea if you wouldnt have explained your personals and if you would have had hard hitting personals then you ould have beat him

MAD DOG you had some decent shit, Vocab was tight, your personals where a lil better than his, you went alot harder when you batled me, so im gonna have to say you didnt even really try..and you also had to exaplian a line, but it was real creative, and i like that...also you had some decent punches nothing amazing but it was alot better, and i was feeling your strucutre it was easy to read

vote=mad dog

Mad Dog 05-25-05 06:21 PM

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E.C 05-26-05 09:47 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Wickedclown 05-26-05 01:15 PM

Voted For: Mad Dog

aight this was a dope battle. close but here is my breakdown.......

Maddog- shit was dope dude... this is one of the better drops ive seen from u lately... structure was good but could have been better i think but its ok... flow was on the whole time and never fell... punches were hardhitting and i think u did indeed hurt his feelings.... personals were good.. vocab with u is always good... overall 8.5/10

EC- your shit was good too.. i was supprised... structure needs work the ..................... need to go it screws up the whole thing so work on that... flow was ok but i think it was hurt by the bad structure... punches were good but not as good as Maddogs... personals were pretty ok... vocab was pretty good... overall id give this a 6.5/10

aight maddog gets this with an overall better verse... EC no hate at all but up on that strucutre and rhyme scheme and everything will fall into place... this was a dope battle but this one goes to Maddog.........

VOTE-MADDOG......................

Acuity 05-26-05 01:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 
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Mad Dog 05-27-05 04:22 AM

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up

E.C 05-27-05 10:13 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnn

Mad Dog 05-28-05 05:06 AM

chicka chicka chicka up...........................

E.C 05-28-05 07:52 AM

up up and away all the way to the top :D..........

Premanition 05-28-05 08:15 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

very very very one sided

mad took this hands down, E.C came here with not one quotable I thought, punches were real weak, flow was o.k, basically alot of it was filler basic stuff, personal in the last few lines but you were just statin not punchin...

mad - nice verse man gud punches liked ya opener and the cheques line was coo, not ya best but by far the best here

pz

mad i wanna battle ya, pm me man, text then audio homie


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