Phase vs P.aradox
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-25-05 at 04:20 AM

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Phase has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 02:43 PM.

P.aradox has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 03:08 PM.

I know its alot early but i already had it wrote......

Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..
Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..
Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..
Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……



*"textual sickness" is the name of the lyrikal saigonz text unit

If you dont get the punches then dont vote!!!!!!!!!!

Jus wait 4 dis bitch to drop now!!!!!!!

Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..
This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..
This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..
Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..

What are you talkin bout kid LS text unit was illunatext you retard.

Uppin dis shit 4 votes plz........................

Voted For: P.aradox

damn man that was some good shit right there man.... you got thsi battle easy you had structure on lock punches were sick man u just talked about hwerbs too much... u have elevated alot since ur last battle :D good job homie

phase your l;ines were good but p.aradox came harder just work on better conceps for tyour punches and you'll do better fam...

good battle though keep droppin em....

v/ p.aradox

for having better structure and harder hitting punches...

Voted For: P.aradox

This was a pretty weak battle but to me P.aradox wont his battle


This was a pretty good drop , had some nice punchlines some were okay , some were just plain fillers.. you tried to use some personals and i comend you on that , but it was okay , nothing really to good , structure was good , flow was decent , .. Overall pretty decent verse... it was enough to win this battle ,..elevate and learn to make more direct punchlines.


Eh.,.. your verse was pretty good you had like 2 nice bars.. the rest to me were mostly fillrers... you had nice structure... You had an okay personal about being beat by a marvel comic , pretty good , Flow was on point.. you had some okay punchlines..Overall if you came alittle harder you would have won

Overall vote =P.aradox

Lmao this shits halarious now i see why poeple say RV is all DR's and kids who dont know how to battle.

LoL seys dis bitch^^^^^

so hu u be????

N uppin!!!!!!!

Uppin this shit 4 votes plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for P.aradox
 

Checkin Polls..

~R~

Uppin for some more votes plz.....................rtf!!!!!

Plz can we get sum votes in this joint!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin this for votes......................rtf..........

Uppin 4 votes plz..................

N im lettin u know that Phase is MoTiF!!!!!

Will somebody plz vote on this so i can get it closed!!!!!!

Voted For: P.aradox

Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..

Ok opener

This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..

Decent again

This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..

Lol str8

Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..

Nice

VS

Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..

Good opener

Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..

lol pretty tight

Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..

ok

Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……

Too forced 1st line but 2nd line was str8

Ok
Punches - Para
Personals - NA
Flow - Phase
Metas/Similes - Phase
Opener - Para
Closer - Phase

Overall - Damn this was def close to call both came pretty much even 1 having 1 cat then 1 having a dif catagory
But Bottom line is punches which paradox had

Please return the favour with similar voting criteria on the battle in my sig ppl
good battle stay up
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Fanx dawg^^^^

Can we get some votes PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: P.aradox

Fuck breakin it all down,

Phase your verse was not bad, but in my opinion was wayyyy to basic and your punches had no creativity..it flowed pretty well, structure was aight but drop the "" they too played and newbieish, decent voters can notice the wordplay without em.

Para,
you came pretty decent buty again i wasnt feelin some of the concepts you used. The reason you get my vote is for coming harded with punches and you used personals.

No hate

RTF IN 3 DAYS OR THIS VOTE GETS DQ'ED!!

Fanx dawg!!!!!!!

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Voted For: P.aradox

Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..
7/10
This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..
4/10...second line was ass
This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..
8/10
Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..
5/10...second line was ass
^24^

Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..
8/10
Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..
8/10
Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..
6/10
Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……
9/10
^31^
punches...phase
personals...p.aradox
creativity...p.aradox
multiz...phase
flow...p.aradox
wordplay...phase
enjoyment...p.aradox
V/P.aradox (tha personals KILLED it, i thought phase had it until i read his verse fareal)