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Skriptz vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-26-05 at 06:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:39 PM.
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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:48 PM.
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i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself ... |
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' :thumbup: Fender = A Model Of A Guitar |
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Voted For: Skriptz
Aight I'm Lazy...So I'ma Jus Do It Real Simple...Dont Take Da Vote Away...It'll Still Be Explained... PUNCHES: Skriptz...Both Used Em, His Were More Effective PERSONALS: Skriptz...Khaoz Really Didnt Have 2 Many... CREATIVITY Khaoz...Khoaz Verse Had More Thought...Lines Were More Clever FLOW/STRUCTURE: Skriptz...Just Take A Look At Da Verse...Both Went Off At Points But Khaoz Was More A Lil More Off WORDPLAY: Both...Both Niggas Used Wordplay In Da Same Way, No One Stood Out In Dis Category OPENER: Khaoz MIDDLE: Skriptz CLOSER: Skriptz "I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself" OVERALL VOTE: Skriptz Tight Battle...RTF...$cream At Me Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Skriptz
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked Eh ok 6/10 HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender Good attemp of a punch line but didn’t hit hard 6/10 Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya Wack 3/10 Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' Iight good 7/10 Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' Eh 6/10 Overall: 28/50 i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt Good punch line and openor 8/10 u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat Nice 7/10 There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway Eh okay 6/10 Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker Eh 5/10 I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself Iight good closer 6/10 Overall: 32/50 v/ skript for just a better verse Rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188590 |
Voted For: Skriptz
Nice battle. Khaoz had a nice verse. good structure and punchlines. skriptz had better punches and his creativity was better. skriptz won this battle. but it was a close call. fav line: 'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz - The flow was allright,with a good structure. I have seen harder punches from you, but you came pretty good enough for the win in this battle. Not really any personals, cept for the punch with the welcome link..The vocab was meh, and the wordplay was allright... KhAoZ ThEoRy - Pretty good drop...The structure is allright....The punches were pretty good, but most of them were played out, and I have seen them before...The fender wordplay was pretty hot...if you woulda came a bit harder with all your punches you coulda won... vote: skriptz...just came harder |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
lol this was a real close battle ihad to read each verse twice to make sure... imma break it down... sik wit it: i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt ^^ nice opener decent wordplay 7/10 u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat ^^ lol nice 7/10 There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway ^^ not feelin this one 5/10 Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker ^^ doesn't rhyme 4/10 I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself ^^ ok closure couldav ben harder 5/10 ok i felt your verse wasn't as good as it couldav been... u sarted off wit some dope punches and then u started to come less consistant giving you the loss... u just need to stay consistant in your battles and then u'll be good.... 28/50 khaoz: Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked ^^ good opener and wordplay 7/10 HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender ^^ nice again 8/10 Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya ^^ ok i spose 5/10 Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' ^^ haha dope wordplay 7/10 Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' ^^ not really feelnig this one 4/10 overall i felt u came hard in this battle you had some dope wordplay and i enjoyed reading your verse you had some lines that made me laugh lol... just try to keep those punches gonig all the way through and you'll be sorted 31/50 im giving this to khaoz for havingt better wordplay and punches... keep droppen em homies no hate pz.... |
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lol bno way is it 4-1 sik wit it has got mad d/r lol your verse was better than his
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^lol mad d/r's? yea right...i'll let that one stay e.c
u just got mad cuz i voted against u...nuttin much tho |
na man i aint botheerd u voted against me tht dont bother me i just felt that khaoz stayeds consistant if u had another decent punch in there then u wouldav got it its like u dint try at the end u get me ? aint no hate vote so dont even be sayin that ashit
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Voted For: Skriptz
Sik Wit It - You hadda consistant verse, punches were creative and witty & they all landed pretty well. The flow got knocked a few time`s through ya verse. But you had one weak bar which was.. u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat I really wasn`t impressed nor feeling this. But at least you compensated w/ harder bar`s. So I'mma give you 65`%. Khaoz Thery - Decent drop, you coulv`e worded ya punches a bit better. Flow as avergae and you had a bit of wit thrown in there. You just need to set ya punches up better. Coz` a few lines were played. But overall ya drop was just decent. Overall I'mma give you 45`%. No hate yo. |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt da second line is coo but d first wasnt u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat 1st line was solkid but d second is uncreative There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway that is just whack, d first line was horrible and d second wasnt much better Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker didnt relly rhyme that well but it was cool I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself weak closer niga d verse was average alot of uncreative rhymes in d verse an da bars wasnt effective Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked not a good opener HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender very good personal/punchline it was d highlight of d battle Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya could of been alot better Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' that is alot bettr really good punchline and metaphour here Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' pretty decent closer Khaoz Theorys verse was d better one his punchlines was more creative and original and d wordplay was good. skriptz had t many uncreative uneffective rhymes an his punchlines were off good battl doh homeys |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Skriptz: One of the better drops from you. Punches were decent, but really could've hit him harder. I liked your locker line and the tripping over the doorway line tho. Funny shit. Personals were spread around, you had a few, but they weren't hitting when they needed to. Had a couple of played punches. Work on your creativity and consistency. KhAoZ ThEoRy: Very nice verse. I was kind of surprised. Punches hit him where it hurt, personals were pretty decent, and you had some nice meta's in there. Take out the slashes and shit tho, because that is herbish. We do not need those to be able to find your flow. Both verses flowed fine, but KhAoZ gets the vote for his consistency and an overall better verse. V/ KhAoZ ThEoRy RTF and hit up my battle with MarvJay1009 and drop an honest vote. It is in the Frontlines Forum. Thanx |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked ehh, not that great of an opener HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender haha, ididnt git ti ttill u explained it, but not bad Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya ha, that wuz aight Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' lol, i like it Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' ok finisher, not bad i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt ehh, i c wut u were tryna say, but it just didnt sound right 2 me u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat same az tha last bar There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway ehhh, not that good, lol Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker lol, man u really gottta werk on ya punches I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself ay, sik wit it, no offense or nuthin, but u really gotta werk on ya punches. khaoz, this wuzznt bad, i can c u gittin retardedly good i fu werk on it, no hate sik, payce Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
I vote Khaoz, even if we got beef he did better. His rhymes were tight, youres were kl but kinda bored me, Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' Best bit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt nuthin 2 special, okay 1st line tho u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat better punch There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway nope, concept of the first punch was he's ''gay'' an that dont cut it in a battle Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker better, better, im really really really feelin that, niiiiiiiiiiiice I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself weak closer, could of been much much harder overall: 22/50 expected much better from u skriptz, i could care less about this new guys verse but he really did see you off in the battle, better rhymes skriptz, better punches an alot more creative an orifginal with his disses, better all round verse from here, what happend skriptz? damn boy vote/khaoz, overall the more enjoyable an harder hitting verse, i'm dissapointed in u skriptz yall need to take a look at my battle with E.C an drop a vote, aight skriptz? you too khaoz drop a vote or ima fuck yall baby mommas an get this here vote removed peace the fuck out niggas. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Right first things first both of you had a fairly nice verse. Khaoz Theory's verse kept me interested most of the way through, although, to be honest, i've seen you rhyme better than this. Skripts, some of your lines were kinda weak, like your line: "There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway" Overall, generally, I wasn't really feelin it. That's just my personal opinion anyway. My favourite line in this battle was from Khaoz Theory: "HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender" I thought that line was kinda funny. I can't really honestly say theres a line in Skriptz's verse that i was feelin. On that basis i gotta give my vote to Khaoz Theory. |
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