(Jimmy Pocketz) vs Oz™
 

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Check in by: 05-26-05 at 08:32 PM

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(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 05:32 PM.

This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars
Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical
Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins
Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients
Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus
Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion"
Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections
U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions

*Nuff Said*


His Name use 2 be Mercinal

*Nuff Said*

Oz™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-05 03:34 PM.

lmao....werd...i accepted right at the deadline...i'll drop when im ready

uppin....

*NUFF SAID*

lol...2 much self glorification equals A Loss lol

and wha Does 7 mile have 2 do with ne thing in your drop?

Garbage

^^^^^^^^^^you dont get it do you....eminem is the best rapper from the D and he from 8 mile...and you said u from 7 mile.....and wow...self glorification in my first line...uh oh...im in big trouble...pfft

Garbage

NUFF SAID

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uppin folks..........................................

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uppin like my vertical leap............................

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This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

checking votes... id say JP won but some..... i liked ya last bar........

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Voted For: Oz™

Breakdown

Jimmy Pocketz
This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars
....Good.....
Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical
.......Better....
Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins
Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients
........:nono:...
*Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus
Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion"
.....Funny.......
Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections
U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions
Kinda bad bcuz I cant see his avy inside the battle thread but Nice personal anyway LOL

Overall man You had some good bars they couldve been better i think That You Lacked good concept but you had good wordplay and far as your pucnhez go ...they couldve been betetr you only have one bar that i really liked and thats the one with the (*) beside it so ........I cant give you my vote bcuz Oz dropped way much harder

Oz
the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig
cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!!
.....Good Personal...
Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew
im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool*
....LOL I Jus Got Threw Eatin some Foo LOL Nice bar
you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy
i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy
..:roll: ......That was Tight ....
jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections
he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection
.....Nice....
i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest
cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best
...even Better Personal ...

Overall i Think That your verse was Gettin Off to a bad start and then you dropped some Serious bars Like The snickers Bar Line ....>oh yeah That was Good and thats why I Hade to give you my vot ein this battle You came harder and you came consistent with punchez and Personals

RTf In the battle link in my sig please

Voted For: Oz™

jimmy may have me blacklisted

so i will vote now just to see if i can
so i dont have to waste time explainin for no reason....

This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars
5...weak, gud personal but you rhymed all the same words together.
Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical
5...weak, ok wordplay but not a real good play off his old name.
Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins
Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients
5...again, nuthin too creative, some filler and more of a statement than a punch.
Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus
Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion"
5...you rhymed slow together, that was weak, and the bar was too basic.
Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections
U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions
6...decent closer, a gud play off the avy he has.

OVERALL: 26/50


the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig
cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!!
5...an ok play off the sig, but the setup was bleh!!
Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew
im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool*
6...LoL!!! kinda stretched but the chinese/foo concept was clever and funny.
you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy
i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy
5...the candy concept was nice, but you didnt really use it as a punch.
jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections
he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection
5...played concept, and you kinda self-glorified much in the setup.
i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest
cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best*
6...decent closer, aight flow and a good personal.

OVERALL: 27/50

that is my explanation for my vote
Oz came with a couple ncie punches to JP's one nice punch...
he was more consistent.....so he gets my vote!!!

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Voted For: Oz™

EZ..........

jimmys verse was aight, had a good structure but seemed to be just too basic and the punches werent all hard hitting, personals were used but didnt take much effect.

Best bar was :

Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical

And even that had a weak set up and played concept.

Oz, your verse was nice, although the structure wasnt that good, your personals were harder hitting and had more creative punches.

NO HATE

RTF ASAP ON THE EC BATTLE OR THIS GETS DQ'ED :thumbup:

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rtf man, vs EC if pss,

i dont wanna have this DQ'ed but i will!

uppin....i'll do it later.................................

Voted For: Oz™

good battle on both sides


Jimmy Pocketz - u kinda disappointed me..i expected a harder verse from you..your first 3 barz i wasnt really feelin..but the last 2 were good..u some personals in there and the avy one was good..but i jus wished u woulda had more.....6/10




Oz - good verse overall..ur opener?..wasnt the best but its alright..from then on ur wordplay was very good..the snickers line made me laugh..and the chinese one..i like how u used the 9 and jordans line..very good punches.....8/10




Oz wins!!!!!

uppin folks..........................................

This was feedback posted for Oz™
 

last day today...........................................

last chance, no bullshit or this gets dqed, and you get put in mah dog for not rtf!

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What A Bitch.......................................

man, your the one who doesnt vote...

You should learn.

My votes getting Dq'ed now.

Voted For: Oz™

the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig
cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!!
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DECENT HIT

Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew
im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool*
^^^
GOOD CONCEPT, BUT COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER

you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy
i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy
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NICE, SECOND LINE WAS STRETCHED, BUT FUCK ALL THAT, IT WAS A DOPE LINE

jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections
he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection
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NO..............WEAK AN JORDAN RHYMES IS PLAYED

i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest
cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best*
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DECENT PERSONAL

Decent verse OZ, Nice punches, nice personals....alot more creative than Jimmys verse, concepts of your bars were more original, a few lines could of been worded better, but this is an easy win for ya'.......






This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars
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HORRIBLY WORDED, AN CALLIN YOURSELF A STAR IN A BATTLE ONLINE IS NOT GOOD.............DONT GET TOO CONCEITED HOMIE

Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical
^^
FIRST LINE WAS GAY, BUT YOU SAVED IT...NICE METTA IN THE SECOND LINE

Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins
Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients
^^^
AGAIN, THE SET UP WAS WEAK, SECOND LINE WAS STRAIGHT, OK HIT HERE

Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus
Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion"
^^^
WEAKEST BAR IN THE BATTLE, SHIT DIDNT EVEN RHYME DOG

Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections
U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions
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NOT FEELIN IT


Not the best verse from you my nigga....weak punches, nothin too complex, wordplay was basic on the whole...personals didnt really hit hard what so ever man.....dunno if its 'cause OZ had a better verse or you came weak...but ya verse was in no way what so ever in comparion with OZ, He easily got this

No hate dog

Return the vote in my battle with marvjay or vote will be removed....links in the sig :thumbup:

Peace out, good job y'all.