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Ca$per vs Bonecollector
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8-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting etc Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-23-05 at 11:07 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 10:38 PM.
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It’s a shame this kid just keepz on thinking hes dope……….
He only wins battles cause of tha dick riderz votes…… your lines r played like hockey,not to mention OFFSIDE…… u fell asleep on tha keyboard,then this verse was derived.... imma swell yo lipz with this line, if that’s even possible... u cant even see tha screen ,your lipz r a fukkin obstacle.... yo wheres your usual one punch,i think i musta missed it...... cause on x mas and yo birthday is tha only time u gifted.... Its funny against me how I know u pre writen tha shit……. If you were a famous boxer u still couldn’t make one hit….. im let this kid rest now,this was menatlly exausting no doubt... flap yo lipz so much they huge,its like an oral workout...... |
Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 10:48 PM.
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Its done Bones Known to "Roll Factors".. "Disfold actors" Cause i'll Palm ya Heart and Box your Shadow!!
"Bones a body snatcher".....so "bones" will put Ca$per to dreams Like me being His "Soul Catcher" Diagnosis put facts Down!! Uh Huh "He's Thru" Crip Huh? so i guess You'll "Bleed Blue"? ....................But How are you suppose to show Skills!! Ca$per if NoOne Can "See-U" I can Spit Gangsta To!! So watch how da "Snub SHouts" Cus ill put them "Day In An Day Out" frown on his face and look how this "Thug Pouts" Crip cus? Lmao dude was Part of a national "Club Scout" Bonecollector's Known to "Speak raw" Crack ya Mouf den i'll "Tweak Jawz" Cus i need no Cause ill just put an End to Ghosts Like Graves and a "Deep-falls" You dont come close to my ranks , so like the first thanksgiven you better give thanks ..........Cus im letting you live,But how the fuck did you lose to .......Carlton Banks!? So im sorry the friendly ghost it about to be Terminated..and gone for good(s) You aint no "Gang"Star", cus you will never come to my neck of the woods* |
Diagnosis is my new name!..getting a name change!
Sorry about my fucked structure damn! |
This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
Man your structure is fucked...no offense...just checkin this battle out...
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^yeah i know damn i didnt mean to make it come out that way
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Punches-Bone...none was really hard hitten,but i can see the potential in ya verse...5/10 Multis-Bone...u got this on lock thru the whole verse...try addin some hard punches to the multis then u good ta go in future battles....7/10 Vocab-Tie...pretty much basic on both parts...i really dont care bout this category much..but try expandin it a lil more Personals-Ca$...nothin ta really say on this,but Ca$ add more punches ta ya personals...Bone add more personals Strucuture-Ca$ Opener-Tie...both of yall came off weak on this category Closer-Ca$...ok closer,liked how u added it wit the personal V/Bone due to more punches and nicely done wordplay RTF links in sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
DAMN Diz Wuz A Fiyah Battle Frum Diagnosis, Hiz Verse Wuz Fuckin Sick, Da Wordplay Culdnt Have Been Better, Da Flow Wuz Rite On Point, Dat Cub Scout Line Wuz Fuckin Nice Rite There Mayn, Propps Fo Dat, Yo Personals Killed CA$per Casper U Had Sum Okay Stuff, But Fo Real, I Bet Even U Admit Diagnosis Beat U,. No Shame Dawg, Look At Hiz Verse, Itz Fiyah Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature Or I'll Contact Da Adminstrator And Have Mah Shit Removed |
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Voted For: CA$per
Damn, That shit was hot by casper, It all want together good, Bones-8/10 Casper-9/10 |
This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
....wow...now ur verse is lookin like Kin*Ethnic
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH NICE@Ca$per!I Would Vote but NO CREW VOTES!Nice verse @ Diagnosis!
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Voted For: CA$per
GOOD: Flow - Borh Structure - Both Punchlines - Both vocab - Bonecollector Wordplay - Bonecollector Nameplay - None BAD: forced Rhymes - bonecollector Forced Multis - bonecollector Non Sence - none CREATIVITY Theme Battle - none Creative Punches - Bonecollector creative multi's - bonecollector PERSONALS: Casper came up with more hard hittin personals than bone, cuz bone only did good punchlinews but didn't seen any personal thet could put casper in the floor like he did... OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Both Closing: Casper COMMENT: Casper: need to improve in multi's, but you got great personals Bonecollector: Casper did killed you with personals, but you got great multi's although they seem a lil bit forced V/ Ca$per |
Wow can you say ill d/r ..hope off
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Casper um very good stucturre ncie flow but you have no complexity in your verse you need to add bigger words and you need to stop using punches so self glorified none of ya punches hit ahrd cause you didnt aim them towards your oppenent some ddi but lots were madly off spot work on with hitting with personals and wordplay and keep elevating 1 Diagnosis um not bad decent verse stucture wasn't to bad but you had a weird rhyme scheme good flow though nice complexity good vocab hard hitting personals and hard hitting wordplay that crip line got to me. overall i think that your verse had the better flow hands down just a straight up better overall verse from you. keep elevating. V/ Diagnosis rtf links in the sig |
lmfao i get a vote and he calls it d/r very herbish bone......
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Voted For: Bonecollector
It’s a shame this kid just keepz on thinking hes dope………. He only wins battles cause of tha dick riderz votes…… aight... your lines r played like hockey,not to mention OFFSIDE…… u fell asleep on tha keyboard,then this verse was derived.... nah not feeling this... imma swell yo lipz with this line, if that’s even possible... u cant even see tha screen ,your lipz r a fukkin obstacle.... aight but not really a biggie.... yo wheres your usual one punch,i think i musta missed it...... cause on x mas and yo birthday is tha only time u gifted.... aight.... Its funny against me how I know u pre writen tha shit……. If you were a famous boxer u still couldn’t make one hit….. decent... just word it bertter and get more RAW... im let this kid rest now,this was menatlly exausting no doubt... flap yo lipz so much they huge,its like an oral workout...... wow that was a crazy ending but u could of def came way harder and more celever with the punches mang... 6.5 IP: Its done Bones Known to "Roll Factors".. "Disfold actors" Cause i'll Palm ya Heart and Box your Shadow!! "Bones a body snatcher".....so "bones" will put Ca$per to dreams Like me being His "Soul Catcher" nice but streched... Diagnosis put facts Down!! Uh Huh "He's Thru" Crip Huh? so i guess You'll "Bleed Blue"? ....................But How are you suppose to show Skills!! Ca$per if NoOne Can "See-U" aight... I can Spit Gangsta To!! So watch how da "Snub SHouts" Cus ill put them "Day In An Day Out" frown on his face and look how this "Thug Pouts" Crip cus? Lmao dude was Part of a national "Club Scout" kinda funny.... Bonecollector's Known to "Speak raw" Crack ya Mouf den i'll "Tweak Jawz" Cus i need no Cause ill just put an End to Ghosts Like Graves and a "Deep-falls" aight..... You dont come close to my ranks , so like the first thanksgiven you better give thanks ..........Cus im letting you live,But how the fuck did you lose to .......Carlton Banks!? decent personal but carlton banks is preety decent... So im sorry the friendly ghost it about to be Terminated..and gone for good(s) You aint no "Gang"Star", cus you will never come to my neck of the woods* aihgt ending u could of came harder as well and some of ya lines was streched but u had more celever and hard hitting punches which got u this battle but u almost lost this one keep elevating ya..... 7.0 |
i have 2 open battles in front line can ya plez drop a honest vote ont hem both thanks ya......
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Voted For: Bonecollector
It’s a shame this kid just keepz on thinking hes dope………. He only wins battles cause of tha dick riderz votes…… EH OK OPENOR 6/10 your lines r played like hockey,not to mention OFFSIDE…… u fell asleep on tha keyboard,then this verse was derived.... IIGHT GOOD SHIT NICE SIMILI 7/10 imma swell yo lipz with this line, if that’s even possible... u cant even see tha screen ,your lipz r a fukkin obstacle.... NAH WASN’T THAT GOOD 5/10 yo wheres your usual one punch,i think i musta missed it...... cause on x mas and yo birthday is tha only time u gifted.... GOOD NICE PUNCH 8/10 Its funny against me how I know u pre writen tha shit……. If you were a famous boxer u still couldn’t make one hit….. WACK PLAYED CONCEPT 5/10 im let this kid rest now,this was menatlly exausting no doubt... flap yo lipz so much they huge,its like an oral workout...... GOOD CLOSER 7/10 OVERALL: 38/50 IP: Its done Bones Known to "Roll Factors".. "Disfold actors" Cause i'll Palm ya Heart and Box your Shadow!! "Bones a body snatcher".....so "bones" will put Ca$per to dreams Like me being His "Soul Catcher" NiCE MULTIES MAN GOOD OPENOR 8/10 Diagnosis put facts Down!! Uh Huh "He's Thru" Crip Huh? so i guess You'll "Bleed Blue"? ....................But How are you suppose to show Skills!! Ca$per if NoOne Can "See-U" AGAIN WIT THE MULTIES AND PUNCH LINES 7/10 I can Spit Gangsta To!! So watch how da "Snub SHouts" Cus ill put them "Day In An Day Out" frown on his face and look how this "Thug Pouts" Crip cus? Lmao dude was Part of a national "Club Scout" TOO MUCH MENTIONING CRIP THOUGH BUT GOOD MULTIS 7/10 Bonecollector's Known to "Speak raw" Crack ya Mouf den i'll "Tweak Jawz" Cus i need no Cause ill just put an End to Ghosts Like Graves and a "Deep-falls" GOOD MULTIES 6/10 You dont come close to my ranks , so like the first thanksgiven you better give thanks ..........Cus im letting you live,But how the fuck did you lose to .......Carlton Banks!? NICE PERSONALS 6/10 So im sorry the friendly ghost it about to be Terminated..and gone for good(s) You aint no "Gang"Star", cus you will never come to my neck of the woods* GOOD CLOSER 7/10 OVERALL: 41/50 V/ DIAGNOSIS |
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