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Topical vs CrazyDogg
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8 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 votes=KO Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 05-27-05 at 07:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Topical has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-05 04:46 PM.
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CrazyDogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-05 05:19 PM.
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Beating kids is something that I can do anyday...
I never wanted to battle, but ya set it up anyway... I know that might sound weak, but it's enuf to destroy him... Poor guy is played like kids toys, maybe santa will employ him... How ya gonna name ya self topical, when you can't write shit... After reading my stuff you'll be "standin' up" like luda right quick... Man I hope that you don't call the words you just wrote hot rhymes... Making those rhymes....you'd lose money...literally you'll drop dimes.. This battle was over-blown like a whirlwind blowin out the snot... If ya brain explodes on ya keys....that's how you write ya thoughts! DON'T NO SHOW |
You can't play me 'Dogg', this man isn't even crazy ya'll So I'd have to teach him a few tricks to be a CrazyDogg My rhymes feed this feind like smoke from Snoop's trees Like beans, your skill releases a stench that doesn't please* Crazy cries, and the make-up ya applied is runin from ya eyes Man I'm sick of your lies, ya secrets are what ya cant hide** "Put your hands aside, Hey!, this man isn't a guy, see!" "Ya right, the makeup helped us see what he was disguising" OK so maybe your a CrazyDogg as you say you are 'Bitch' Cuz I snitched bout what part of ys name implies truthfulness*** *Snoop is a pot feind and beans make you fart creating a smelly stentch **His avy has an eye with running mascara, and it says "Sick Of Lies" ***Female dogg=bitch Don't Get It, Don't Vote :thumbup: |
uppin for votes I will rtf thanx pz and good luck topic nice spit
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yeh not too shabby yourself......uppin this battle.......kinda close to me
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uppin number 2 cmon people don't sleep I will rtf
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Voted For: Topical
aiight battle...punches ima have to go wit topical he had some word play decent punches nothin that blew me away but it was a good drop crazy dogg your shit was streched as fuck had some punches but i thought topical got this one... |
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uppin fo sho good vote man thanx
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uppin cmon yall don't sleep
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my last up cmon yall
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Voted For: Topical
CrazyDogg You punches were basicly weak N played much less berly there work on ya structure a lil bit too N keep elevatin Topical You had better punches thought immature but better structure was better aswelll Both had nice flows but i beleive Topical Gave better show RTF N both hit me up for a battle |
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Voted For: Topical
Yall Please RTF Topical You can't play me 'Dogg', this man isn't even crazy ya'll So I'd have to teach him a few tricks to be a CrazyDogg Not all that But An Aii Nameplay My rhymes feed this feind like smoke from Snoop's trees Like beans, your skill releases a stench that doesn't please* ..LOL Stank Ass beans LOL That was a coo Bar Crazy cries, and the make-up ya applied is runin from ya eyes Man I'm sick of your lies, ya secrets are what ya cant hide** ....Nice pErsonal... "Put your hands aside, Hey!, this man isn't a guy, see!" "Ya right, the makeup helped us see what he was disguising" .........SaySo ......Wasnt All dat OK so maybe your a CrazyDogg as you say you are 'Bitch' Cuz I snitched bout what part of ys name implies truthfulness ....LOL That was str8 You Take this battle but Ima tell You know Up Ya Game bcuz You Still lack Certain Parts off being dope But You Aint Far From It keep it up and youll get somewhere ... CrazyDogg Beating kids is something that I can do anyday... I never wanted to battle, but ya set it up anyway... .....No Punch Jus an Insult I know that might sound weak, but it's enuf to destroy him... Poor guy is played like kids toys, maybe santa will employ him... .......The concept in that bar was played How ya gonna name ya self topical, when you can't write shit... After reading my stuff you'll be "standin' up" like luda right quick... ...Too Many words but the concept was ok Man I hope that you don't call the words you just wrote hot rhymes... Making those rhymes....you'd lose money...literally you'll drop dimes.. ....LOL That was Str8... This battle was over-blown like a whirlwind blowin out the snot... If ya brain explodes on ya keys....that's how you write ya thoughts ......Couldve been worded better Aii BasicallY man I Think that You couldve worded your bars a lil better but You did have one bar that I Liked But You didnt Have an Overall better verse Than Topical Srry |
This was feedback posted for Topical
nice shit cutty..........do the damn thang fam.
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