OneStepBeyond vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-05 10:43 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 07:02 PM.

you're fuckin stupid... parapledgics are paralized from the waist down.. hahahaha... and what open mic do i have with no replies?

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

OSB:
structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 7/10
Enjoyed: 6/10
Overall: 40/50

Stanza:
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 3/10...none of them was accurate
Enjoyed: 8/10
Overall: 38/50

Stanza lost because he had inactuare prsonals if not it couldve been a tie

v/OSB

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
Dope opener. Nice diss. And a nice punch

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
Ight personal. Not all that good of a punch tho

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
Nice personal on tha first line, but i wasnt feelin tha second

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
Ight ender. Not all that hard hitting


Personals were coo for me, but yo punches were just ight. I wasnt feelin em too much. I think you couldve came harder. I dont kno if its just how u worded them or what, but i wasnt feelin most of em. Your opener is ur dopest bar, which is bad. that should never be your best. that made tha rest of ur verse boring. so i doubt i can give u my vote

OSB VERSE:
Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
ha! funny shit. Nice wordplay. Nice punch, and a tight ass personal

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
:roll: .. this was tight as fuck. I liked that punch. It was hard hitting. Flawless.

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
Not really a diss towards him. I can see what you were sayin, but you made it sound stupid. Wordage here was a factor

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
Ight personal. Not all that great, but ight

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
HAHAHAHa. even better ender

I really liked this verse. I seen alot of creativity, and alot of nice unplayed concepts. Wording your punches were on point, except 4 maybe 1 bar, but other than that, you were there. I liked tha few personals, but I'ma give this win to you, simply because of punches. You were just more consistent wit em, and they hit harder.


No hate to either one of you. Nice battle, but OSB gets my HONEST vote.

rtf.....link in sig....


Removed by M-Eazy's request

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

uhhh, wow, stanza......just to comment on your parapalegic punch

they do infact have hands, and actually, a parapalegic has complete paralysis from the waist and down, so they still can use their hands, that they infact have

i think the term you were loooking for was "quadripeligic", but the funny thing is, they still have hands too....just can't use 'em...

nice verse OSB, word

Aii Man ok ..........A Lil mad over in that corner aint ya ? LOL

Wateva still Uppin for more votes

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Polls....good drop my boy.........................

Also, your definition for paraplegics is wrong Stanza...

I KNow i used the wrond word ..............Watch how i whole lotta people try to bitch about it LOL

i won anyway so it don't really matter.............

I removed my vote because you didn't return it like I asked.

You Wish You Could win But Watch How I take this with ease

Peace Out

Nah, I think my boy OneStep won this one fa'real yo..

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Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...


2 Many Played Concepts Dawg, Not Enough Hard Hittin Punz, I Lyked Da Wordplay 4 Da Most Part, But Few Linez Wuzza Lil Played, & U Had Less 2 Offer In Da Form Ov Personals

Best Line=
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

Worst=
Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,

1st Line Wuz Meaningless & Da Second Line Iz Played 2 Fuck, Seemed Lyke Force Nameplay 2 Me


Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

Good Verse, U Had Better Nameplay Than OneStepBeyond, A Few Decent Ideaz Also, Flow Seemed More Complex & Original Than OneStepBeyonds, Punz Were Not Anythin Special, Sum Hit Tho, Wordplay Wuz Iight & You Had A Few Pretty Decent Personalz, Ya Verse Wuz Da Mo' Enjoyable Read.

Vote=Stanza, Better All Round Verse Wid More Fluency & Consistancy In Da Flow & Disses

Return Da Vote In Mah Signature [or dis vote will be removed]

Good Job Both, Keep It Up, Pz Out


Crew vote removed.. looks as if Khaoz was posting in TBN up till 5/29

Thanx Mayne ...................Still Uppin ...............

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

stanza

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
ehhh...decent...played concept...4/10
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
decent....5.5/10
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
weak....4/10
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
that was the best punch in your whole verse...6/10

overall-19.5/40(49%)

Onestepbeyond:

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
good...culdve been worded better...6/10
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
jjjjjeeeessssssuuuuuussssss...that was so played...3/10
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
ehhhh....5/10...wasnt feelin it to much
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
skraight...couldve been worded better as well...6/10
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
decent closer...6/10

overall-26/50(52%)

vote/onestepbeyond

Stanza...my advice to u is stop explainin so much shit in ur verses...most of them i was able to understand without u explaining...the only thing that should be explained is personals...and elevate ur wordplay......

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Voted For: Stanza

votes goes to stanza just cus he had more creativity in his he also had bettah punches dat hit har while onestep did good in his verse also i jus wasnt feelin it n his struceture was also bettah den your good battle and good verses from both of yall

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Opionion.Wow dis battle was pretty nice specialy with Onestep he canme way harder than Stanza. Stanza had some alright punches but i just didnt feel them as hard as Onestepbeyond's punches.

Flow- I was really feelin One's punches more N is flow it had me boucin my head a lil

Punches- One's had harder punches by ease N were a lil unique

Metas- Both were nice-

Personals- One's took to him hard with that no show

Winner- One took this with ease in my opionion. If Stanza was going aginst somebody less talented he would of had a better chance

RTF on my battles when u see em N drop feed back in my OM's

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
^^decent, feelin the personal
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
^^played to shit...not good
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
^^decent, but ive seen it b4
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
^^nice personal...
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
^^nice closer, decent verse
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Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
^^ok, but weak
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
^^koo, basi thou
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
^^nope, weak as baby shit
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
^^ok, but thats a played concept too..
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imma go with osb cuz his personals hit harder n his
concepts werent so played ..both were to basic thou, up the
wittyness guys...pz...no hate, RTF

someomne said they were going to win this with ease

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Stanza you're wack as hell man... Shit shoulda been closed already...

Ive Jus notice that all your post were Hate post and yet I havent stated any cumbacks LOL

Your wack Man So STFU

Then Only reason you up is bcuz you keep gettyin the votes DQed

Im not gonna dq anymore votes bcuz this battle doesnt mean shit to me anymore Ive taken down way better heads than you so Your Jus a Blowby Opperation So

Peace

hahaha, i owned you... stfu... you fail at life and your votes were dickrides.... faggot

Voted For: Stanza

both were throwin punches disses and errthong was a close tie i liked rhis battle both looks like they had beef and their punches were good
stanza ur punches were the best i liked this line
{Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"}
that was a good one but to both competitors good battle but my v// goes to stanz cuz he just had a two more punches that did more damage then osb but good job to both and keep doin ya thing

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..............w/e man i Had 4got this battle was open and you still beefin With But it aint wit me bcuz Your wack ass fuck
So We Upin

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