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Which Verse Won?
Which Verse Won This?
First Verse Why aren’t you reppin Mindz Collide? Are you just ashamed to? N’ even if that bar was written to Untold..… it was ABOUT you! What the fuck’s apotheosis dude? Gettin a new name’s ya goal I got an idea that suits you well…….……… how about, apothole? Bow down n’ learn your role, unwanted faggot, you’ll never win Aurelius was born in the state of Rome…..ing for a home to live in Damn yo stop the bitchin’, how to beat me? Ya haven’t a clue Yeah you’re stumped…………….to the fucking tree I hung you to What to do, ya love life sucks, when ya girl needs money she calls But at least she’s a tiger in bed……......……….. stripes, claws, n’ all Second Verse Bars Is Weak Like Paraplegics, You In Denial Kid Don't Ignore Me Why Discuss How Whack You Are When You Just Did That For Me True Facts, When Da-Trus Spits, It's Like You Wish He Was Dead You'd Surround A Toilet Bowl, Mistaken I'll Leave Piss On His Head Your Verse Is Like Arm Amp's Punches Can Never Reach Existence Attempt To Be Gangster, And Did The Exact Opposite Of Resistance Like Circus Gimmicks Dick Riders Got This Faggot Juggling Balls Relief Of A Restroom Break Main F Had This Kid Fucking In Stalls Denied Me At-First,This Faggot Was Scared To Battle On RapVerse It 'Hurtz, Da Trus' In Other Words Displaying His Name Backwards And You Resemble Significance Of Marijuana, In Remaining A Herb Flow Is Like River Block Off's Your In Need Of Re-framing Ya Verse Your Wordplay Could Never Match Up, Like Straight To Bi-Sexual Throwing Your Life Away On Net Sites....Cuzz Life Is Text-To-You You'd Pre-Write A Verse, And Still Be Fucked Like In depth Gamblers Only Vote You'd Get Is From Your Alias, Downloading IP Scramblers His Precision Is Dimmed With For, Like The Ground On The Moon Explode His Mental's..........Left His Intelligence Around The Room This Kid's Verse Is Like A Mountain What Can't Be Found Is Pattern Stomach & Gas Relief Still Can't Spit Flames With A Jack-o-lantern |
Come On Man Bumping This Thread Up...................
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ill just say the second one...... 1st one was ok...... but it seems like he had alotta personals i wouldnt get unless u showed me the other persons name, title, avvy and aliases maybe..... i unno
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also......... the first guy did the same thing of the " blah.............. blah blah" and switchin the meanin of the first word concept like 3 times. Its aight the first time.... but having it more than that in a 5 bar battle is kinda stupid and not creative
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First Verse DaTrusHurtz Second Verse Marcus Aurelius |
second one...who is who?
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Read Up It'll Tell You
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Second one... don't know either of them.
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Please Poll What You Said An Explain It's A Site Thing I Need Polls And Explanations
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Bumping This Shit Man........................
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well i'm gonna be cool and disagree with everyone..........
the second verse had a fucked up flow, with those stretched lines they need a few multies in there to help it flow better, also a lot of the punches used were not all that original, i have seen pre-writ ballz on loads of sites, also that juggling ballz line along with the fuckin in stalls is not original at all. the first verse flowed a lot better and the punches were pretty funny, and they were actual punches, some of the shit in the 2nd verse seemed more like statements than punches!!!! so i wud pick the first verse!!! |
im gonna go with the first verse here as well..
second verse had a played punch for its opener n quite frankly was boarderline wack throughout i mainly say that cuz the content didnt flow well as punches...setups had nothin to do with the punch most of the time...... 1st verse had alot more creativity, although it didnt always come across as hard hitting, it had personals n was way more direct to the opponent........ |
Neither for the fact this has nothing to do with LL.
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^^ you cant vote anyway
you have no text skillz.........WERD!!! :thumbup: |
That bothers me Why?
Theres a reason i dont do text smart one. |
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thats utterly hilarious considering L.I did this exact thing on our battle yet nobody came into that thread n said a comment such as yours...lol |
I would have if i saw =\
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fair enough.... this is prolly the least played type of ll thread.. so to me,...i honestly dont mind...both verses were ass in my opinion anyhow........... |
First Verse>Second Verse
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MoTiF - i dont care of you are bothered with what i say
cuz i have beaten you before Ice-D > MoTiF the relevance this post has to this thread is fascinating!!! :thefinger |
If you didnt care you wouldnt post.
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irony in its purest form...
now shake e-hands and make up... |
I dont know who won.
The first verse was played as fuck... and repetetive. The 2nd verse dude didnt know how to use his vocab. |
1st verse was better, more witty. 2nd verse was decent, seemed forced.
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Hey fellas, that first verse was mine. Marcus just thinks he's good at rap and wanted to show his verse was better, but obviously as the votes are showing, it wasn't. And my first two bars I don't think anyone here would understand, especially not my opener because it was referring to a quote which he didn't even bother to quote and the 2nd was a personal that you'd have to see his crew to understand. Anyway, keep the votes coming
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1st verse was aight noting serious no good punches just look like a couple of personals with the names and shit... 6.5
2ed verse had a couple of good disses and punches was more creative and celever i think the first 6 lines best the 1st guy whole verse no hate either just facts on how i saw it... 8.0 vote: 2ed verse |
where is the battle at so i can vote on it for-real insted of this bull????????
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oo yea but who won anyways just asking?????
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why would you wanna vote on a battle that you would most likely not get any of the personals in.? . but by the way its on rb in frontlines..lol |
^^nice name... why does everyone claim the site is getting worse.. :( i'm referring to your sig. Somebody said this was one of the hotter sites.
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it was much better last season(summer)
im not knockin it, ive been here for a while n just hate to see childish shit from newbs it reflects bad on the site n everyone on it |
ok well i was just curious to know.
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Guys honestly this site isn't as talented as Rap Battles which is why I don't battle here. One day I wanted to find out for myself cause I'd heard a lot so I was reading stuff in KLL, and yeah, not nearly as dope as the shit in the LLL @ RB.
Anyway, keep voting I guess even if a bunch of my personals won't make sense to you peeps |
HaHa Omg! Nuff Said With That Concept......
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The first verse was better..
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Both them shits was trash
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