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Dirty Nigga 05-26-05 10:36 AM

E.C vs Tephlon
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 11:06 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

System 05-26-05 10:39 AM

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 10:39 AM.

System 05-26-05 10:43 AM

Tephlon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 10:43 AM.

E.C 05-26-05 10:48 AM

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,

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_explanations_

1st bar: vest is made of tephlon :D,
2nd bar: he ripped his forskin....
3rd bar: he's battled like 100 times and lsot most of them his crew is 6 feet
4th bar: dopeman was his old name presciption is something u get at a checkist for antibiotics
5th bar: look at his user title.... and in a convo on msn he said i was better than him...

ight i aint droppin links coz they are gay so imma leave u with that hope u like... :D

good luck teph homie and no hate man!!! pz

Dirty Nigga 05-26-05 10:50 AM

No hate, E.C.........Check It..

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics


Lauren = His Girlfriend and she also played him with another fella,s hence the personals about him being played an her being in the rhymes :thumbup:

G'luck E.C..

E.C 05-26-05 10:53 AM

lol nice verse man who told u she takes it up the rear though? coz i didnt say tht thats a fake personal lol.... no matter good lookins now we need votes...

E.C 05-26-05 01:07 PM

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E.C 05-26-05 04:26 PM

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E.C 05-26-05 05:25 PM

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E.C 05-27-05 05:27 AM

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E.C 05-27-05 09:59 AM

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E.C 05-27-05 01:09 PM

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E.C 05-27-05 05:24 PM

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King Solo 05-28-05 12:58 AM

This was feedback posted for E.C
 
aight.......
i can't vote cuz E.C in my crew.......
.....but i'm so cool that i will break each verse down anyway.........WERD!!! :thumbup:


Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
6...personal, i know this, but the wording was pretty basic!!
i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
7...LMAO!!! ownin him and his bitch!! PROPS!!
i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
4...BOO!! first line was kinda filler and the 2nd line, how many times shud ppl be told that gay lines don't cut it!!
Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
5...too basic of a punch, i see wat you are saying but you made it seem to basic!!
how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics
6...decent closer, i like the mathematics wordplay!!

OVERALL: 28/50



it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
4...NO!! 2nd line you are basically self-glorifying!! also, neither of you are the best cuz i've KO'ed both of ya!!! :thumbup:
hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
7...LMFAO!!! this was fuckin hilarious!!! i laughed mya ss off reading the thread about that!!
i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
7...this was a nice personal play with his loss count and the crew!!
15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
6...dope shit is played, but i think it is allowed when it is playing off the name as a personal!!
so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,
6...personal to finish with, nice!!

OVERALL: 30/50


pretty close battle
personal opinion on teph's verse, either the short drop time killed him and he cudn't come up with some sick ass punches, or he took it easy cuz he didn't wanna go real personal on E.C cuz they are boyz!!! either way, he had a couple of nice punches, but his verse was too basic, and one played concept in there.

E.C came good in this battle, best i seen from ya playa....you took shit seriously here and fired teph with the killer personals, some funny ass shit especially the "foreskin" line......you weren't that basic, played concepts were there but overall you took this

no hate or anything, that is my honest breakdown!!!
and i wudn't be surprised if E.C pulled out a 5-0 KO!!!!

E.C 05-28-05 06:02 AM

haha ye man thanks for the feed..... i jus keyed up summet real quick coz i only had 20mins lol good job teph uppin for votes.................

E.C 05-28-05 09:23 AM

uppin man this is nealy a wh9le page of ups... wheres the votes man

MyNamesGrafhYall 05-28-05 09:54 AM

Voted For: E.C

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Dat Verse Wuz 2 In-Consistant, U Had Sum Ok Punches & Personalz, But Sum Linez Dint Hit Hard, Better Luck Next Tephlon

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,

Yo Structure Iz Fukked Wherre U Carry Linez On Lyke Dat, But U Had Da Better Personalz In Diz Battle, Flow Wuz Good Frum Both, But Fo Better Personalz Mah Vote Goez 2 E.C

Return Da Vote In Da Signature Plz

E.C 05-28-05 02:14 PM

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E.C 05-28-05 05:52 PM

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E.C 05-29-05 07:06 AM

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E.C 05-29-05 04:49 PM

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E.C 05-30-05 02:42 PM

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B. Magik 05-30-05 03:22 PM

Voted For: E.C

Aiight...

Tephlon:

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!

NO...3/10

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren

OK personal, nice punch...6/10

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!

NOPE!!!! Weak man...3/10

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''

Blah...5/10

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Best line in your verse...7/10

Overall: 24/50 (48%)

Really weak verse man...Expected much more from you knowing what you are capable of...Your punches were not hitting at all and the only thing that made you verse halfway decent was your closer. No hate man, but you really fell off in this battle.

EC:

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best

Decent wordplay in first line, punch was ass...4/10

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",

Nice...good personal, nice punch...8/10

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"

NO!! WEAK!!! 3/10

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",

LOL...Nice shit...8/10

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,

Nice personal, shoulda provided a link, but it was cool...6/10

Overall: 29/50 (58%)

Aiight you pulled thru...Your verse wasnt great but it was enuff for the win. Had a couple nice personals in there, punches were decent for the most part, and you had some decent wordplay.

No hate to Teph...

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:29 PM

This was feedback posted for E.C
 
it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,

Ok opener not strong though

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",

Yeah i see the personal attempt but needs re=wording to be dope still a str8 hit though

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"

Played

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",

LoL Ok

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself

Thats a decent finish

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:30 PM

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!

Ok personal

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren

Niiiiice personal

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!

Immature and wack

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''

Er ok

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics

Played

Dizzee Rascal 05-30-05 03:31 PM

Voted for EC i think it worked lol
Please vote unbiased on mine

E.C 05-31-05 02:28 PM

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Mad Dog 06-02-05 07:37 AM

Voted For: E.C

For the record...vote is a guarantee safe vote as i have already voted on both members for the same battle as previous anyway...

E.C verse:

it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
^ good opener on the personal

hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
^ LOLOLOL nice personal/moved into a punch nice bar

i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
^ nice diss punch/personal on his crew

15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
^ LOL nice punch/personal on his name made me laugh

so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,
^ personal on the closer wasn't as good but an aight closer

TEPHLON verse:

Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
^ Ok opener on the personal but not really a diss...more of a mentioning

i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
^ personal on his girl...it's aight nuthin special though

i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
^ fake personal -_- and the gay thing played

Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
^ it's ok but it's nothing special again not ya best Tephlon

how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics
^ Closer = good personal and rhyme good best bit of ya verse IMO

Overall
IMO one sided...E.C had humour in his punches personals in most bars punches too blended in to be honest some real good stuff from him in this battle you gave it all in this...Tephlon on the other hand it's like you underestimated him coz your verse was basic man it jus wasn't as good as what i've seen to be honest...so my vote is for E.C

E.C 06-02-05 11:50 AM

ight thnx for the vote.... uppin for moreeeeeeeeeeeee

E.C 06-02-05 05:31 PM

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E.C 06-03-05 06:11 AM

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E.C 06-05-05 10:59 AM

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E.C 06-06-05 08:07 AM

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E.C 06-07-05 06:48 AM

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E.C 06-07-05 01:13 PM

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E.C 06-08-05 08:21 AM

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Dirty Nigga 06-08-05 10:13 AM

0 - .....................................3, wtf lol
e.c is beating me *hangs up microphone* I QUIT LOL

¤ÐÅž¤ 06-09-05 09:26 AM

Voted For: E.C


Kid!....................i can't believe you wanted to battle, your my toy soldier
tell RV about the time you asked for tips on MSN, like i was gonna mold-ya!
^^ok, but i wasnt feeling the overall punch
i done told-ya, your ''my nigga''...but that dont mean your a G like Warren
an dont get it mistaken, in this battle...i'll fuck u over quicker than Lauren
^^decent.....but basic
i heard she likes it from the rear............ an she aint affraid too Play
well with you she is....but i always had my suspicitons you was GAY!
^^lol, but not hard hitting
Now..all of a sudden your established?..shows where RV is at
GOD HELP YOU!...you know its bad, cause your best bestline concept is ''Phat''
^^nah....maybe against a newb...
how basic can you be? please tell me your gonna stick too Graphics
you, audio and text just dont add up, like subtracting Mathmatics
^^there wasnt a punch..?
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it seems so long since u last popped off without a "vest",
coz u usually battle herbs, i guess no he's battling the best,
^^nah, basically wasnt a punch..
hows it goin teph? we boys but i'm only in for a whores win,
i guess the feelings neutral but i'm ripping him...........
................ like his "foreskin",
^^basic, n punch was worded a little wrong(but)
i cant believe u, i thought you wudda ran out of fuel to compete,
coz u got beat that many times your already buried "6 feet"
^^him, not his crew homie...its ok but only cuz how your worded it
15 mins check 20 drop? me must be running his "choke scam",
coz when u singin a "prescription" is the only time u writin "dopeman",
^^nice, good play off his old name
so u a "made nigga" have u come on rv to share the wealth?,
want to battle me? i'm better!................ you even said it yourself!!!,
^^ok, but thats been said lots.....
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im gonna go with e.c cuz he had one bar that was good
the dopeman bar, even thou yous dropped alot...most of them
werent worded properly or considered a punch...just statements that were...well ...well known facts....

E.C 06-09-05 09:49 AM

ight uppin fotr the last vote........................


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