Thoughts (Mad Dog, Creativitie & E.C)
 

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Its fukin dope dawgs thats all i can say!!!

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o.k this was pretty dope y'all

mad - nice flow and lyrics were pretty gud too, didnt feel a great presense on this piece but overall nice dawg

creative - flow was gud and i liked your presense on this track cos you had it there but kept a gud amount of emotion in there to, lyrics on point so overall dope

E.C - ur improvin man, the weakest of the three but still pretty gud, lyrics were pretty dope and emotion was there, just felt ya flow went off in places slightly and presense wasn't great but that will come with time

verdict - nice piece

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uight thnx for the feed.... first song i done in ages got my new mic workin any wayz :D

Smooth, gangsta beat, lol, i like it. Mad Dog~your lyrics were dope, flow was on point in this track, it was the perfect beat for you.Creativitie~nice mic presence and flow, i like your voice,lyrics were decent as well.EC~your flow is a little choppy,but i liked your lyrics, and i think you have an interesting style, good shit guys,keep dropping.1

thnx for the feed... its much appriciated

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upinnnnnnnnnm i am 10x better than this.it was a free sttyle, i was gona re do my verse but my mic broke

lol^^ hjow come u thought i was from america?

First verse: Nice flow...nice lyrics man...nice topic and all ....your reaalllyyy did elevate man....i love the ssecond verse,flow is dope,love thje lyrics,voice is pretty cool,you lost the flow in one place tho but blah who cares...nice chorus scratching,nice last verse too,this hole song is dope,quality is dope,best quality of the song,nice flow too,u flow perfectly,overall pretty dope track
9/10

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2184628

weerd cheers man uppin

shit was nic ey'all..........already know wat MD bringin to the table, nice lyrics flow on point, not ur best but still easily best verse on track, creativite nice shit man, good lyrics, werent feelin the way u spat ur verse tho, jus needed a lil bit mo urgency or enrgy bout it, EC nice levation in terms of quality n flow, ur quality is muuuch betta, u still neeed 2 work on not soundin a lil shy on hte mic and ur flow, but good work nonetheless....RTF on ma ish - survivor...Peace

-AC-

Typing as I listen through my stock G4 speakers. I'll just coment on quality and execution.

First Verse: Vocals would have benefitted fomr recording a little further away to get that crunch out of em and some more echo in the BG to give it more ambiance to get that "dream-like state" going. The lyrics are pac-esque with a UK deliv.

Second verse: needs more annunciation and stop mumbling. has a textee-turned-audio type deliv.

Third verse: WAY nasal. sounds liek you're speaking directly thorough your nose. You need ot use some compressor on your5 vocals too so your volume is equal across the board instead of loud at times then quiet at others. Song it self was ok. Nothing that made me go "hmm..never looked at it that way" which I presume was the intent, but that's just me personally.

Hope this helped.

yo dooms that was freestyle.................lol nbut good looks

I'm Not Intrested In Da Quality Ov Sound, I'm Juz Intrested In Da Beat, & Ur Lyrikal Content.

I'm Not Sure Which Iz Which Out Ov Da 3 Ov U....First Verse=Good Flow, Ur Raspy Vocals Stood On Da Whole Track, It Wuz Kinda Lyke Ur Track & Da Others Juz Featurin On It, Cuz Da Beat Suited U Down 2 a T, Raspy Flow Matched Up 2 Da Beat, It Wuz A Lil Gangsta, I Wuz Feelin Dat...Second Verse: Good Shit, Ur Lyrikal Content Wuznt Az Strong As Da First Guy Who Dropped, But Da Diffrent Style U Had In Yo Flow Suited Diz Collab Perfectly, Good Job...Third Verse=Good Lyrical Content, I'm Talkin Fiyah, Ur Flow & Vocals Didnt Seem Rite 4 Diz Beat & Da Other 2 Guys Stood Out A Lil More Than U Did, But Ur Emotion & Content In Da Lyrics Cannot Be Faulted

Yall Came Live Wid It, Good Job, Each Style Complimented Each Other, First Dudes Raspy Flow Wuz Da More Suited 2 Da Beat But Dat Dont Mean 2 Say The Other 2 Guyz Didnt Shine On Diz, Good Job All

^^^ that first guy was dope eh :evilgrin:

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yo eveyrone needs to realize i freestyled this shit.............and fromt he feedback im getting im guessing i can freestyle good? LOL

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wow so much damn feedback...BY ME

wtf why not up.