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Diagnosis vs Gongshow.
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-26-05 at 04:59 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Gongshow. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 04:30 PM.
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Diagnosis has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 04:44 PM.
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Im battling a nine year old ,and he's a supposed O.G?
How you Origional when you on rapverse,And a wanna be Emcee.? Your just like ever other newb on this site... Always going after vets.. But like everyone else , you lose and next thing ya records reset... Take the lose like a man , but shyt what kinda name is GongShow? You Suck Down low, and you like 'Gang Bangin'so i turn this bitch into a dutch Hoe... Let me guess , you look as homo , as the cat in your sig..probably worse... But ya ass couldnt be an origional Gangsta ...Cus you on rap-verse!... Now u fake so gon is always getting exposed more than the last 5 mins,of a scobby doo show Cus im that metelling kid... that just gave you a lost so lets exposed this john doe... cutting off your thoughts so its hard for"S'Say to say how u truely feel" without strep throat durin pologram exams Cus this homo ass will always be a no weight...even if i measured him in grams!... |
Afraid of getting fucked, Diag probably started to battle in safe mode
But I’ve got ‘Bone’ goin’ down quicker than RV in attack of the clones* You couldn’t moderate a broken home in one of Tim Allen’s build-offs Because your ideas are never ‘for-word’ like Apple versus Microsoft Can’t stop me bitch, my words will imprison your mind like oxygen cells And then I’ll have this fag’s lips swellin’ quicker than this collagen sells I’ll spit your pit’s to hell, watch me skin this fruit just to kick his core Diagnosis should broadcast himself on TLC…With all of his ‘junk-wars’* Ask this whore to suck your dick…seriously, do it, he just might will… “RV’S Most Hetero?” Click + Drag your mouse under his name – looks like he blue his title. *changed his name from Bonecollector to Diagnosis shortly after alias invasion *junk-wars = show on the learning channel where they take shit and throw it together |
Voted For: Gongshow.
your only getting my vote because you had more play with your words. and i liked your rap a little better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
blaah...might have to explain better......
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Voted For: Diagnosis
ight bone i like this verse good flow dope punches hit right on point and almost everyline had them good structure easy to read kinda simple vocab but enough to take this one fo sho gongshow-you started off bad so it was hard to recover u had good structure and flow just tha punches were not accurate and not funny at all pretty simple to see why he won u coulda came way harder gong keep elevatin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Diagnosis
Cong um you had a very good stucture very good flow as well but the thing that i didnt really feel was your punchlines they were weak well decent actually just not good enough i guess but your personals were decent just not connecting right wordplay wasn't really hitting hard and overall i just wasn't feeling your verse 1 Diag well of course you had a better verse your flow was pretty damn good and ya stucture was good you hit hard with lots of personals and the thing that made me feel like giving you the win was that you had better personals and punchlines so overall you had the better verse wordplays were hitting harder as well. 1 |
Voted For: Diagnosis
Battle wasn't really that good but u feel me - diagonisis took this because of the lines and other dude wasn't really rhymin like that tho fam... well good overall battle but... Damn... I'm so used to audio battles man... anyways Vote - diagnosis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Diagnosis
Diagnosis Good Verse Man You Came Creative You Had A Superflous Amount Of Vocabulary Which Was Good In This Battle, Punchlines Came Nice And Clean Straight Up, Wordplay Nice Rememberable Shit Man, Structure Was Decent Structure Aint Really En Object Though Just Some Thing Made Up It Doesn't Really Matter Actually, Over All You Came Creative And Decent With A Good Flow... GongShow Okay Yo uCame Good With Structure Not Really An Object Though Punchlines Was Okay Played Out Material Not Really Hitting Hard Wordplay Wasn't To Good,Vocabulary Mmkay Iffy At Some Points But Decent Personals Was Okay Not Many Hitting Hard Really Just Had A Good Flow Overall I Think This Battle Goes To Diagnosis For A Better Flow And Better Wordplay No Hate Return The Favor If You Can EyeTalik Vs Murdz, Holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Gongshow.
this was a weak battle all around but im gonna give the vote to gong cause i actuall thought that he wanted to win and his rhymes werent as basic as diag's punchelines were weak in both verses but gongs actually made sense Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Diagnosis
ima go wit diag here, good punches by both but was feelin his more... Im battling a nine year old ,and he's a supposed O.G? How you Origional when you on rapverse,And a wanna be Emcee.? OK FOR AN OPENER.... Your just like ever other newb on this site... Always going after vets.. But like everyone else , you lose and next thing ya records reset... TRUE PUNCH, HARD HITIN Take the lose like a man , but shyt what kinda name is GongShow? You Suck Down low, and you like 'Gang Bangin'so i turn this bitch into a dutch Hoe... MEH WAS JUST OK Let me guess , you look as homo , as the cat in your sig..probably worse... But ya ass couldnt be an origional Gangsta ...Cus you on rap-verse!... DONT GET IT.. Now u fake so gon is always getting exposed more than the last 5 mins,of a scobby doo show Cus im that metelling kid... that just gave you a lost so lets exposed this john doe... PRETTY NICE cutting off your thoughts so its hard for"S'Say to say how u truely feel" without strep throat durin pologram exams Cus this homo ass will always be a no weight...even if i measured him in grams!... NICE CLOSER, SEEMED A LIL STRETCHED.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Afraid of getting fucked, Diag probably started to battle in safe mode But I’ve got ‘Bone’ goin’ down quicker than RV in attack of the clones* DIDNT FLOW WELL, BUT A REASONABLE PUNCH You couldn’t moderate a broken home in one of Tim Allen’s build-offs Because your ideas are never ‘for-word’ like Apple versus Microsoft YEAH FUNNY... Can’t stop me bitch, my words will imprison your mind like oxygen cells And then I’ll have this fag’s lips swellin’ quicker than this collagen sells NAAAA... I’ll spit your pit’s to hell, watch me skin this fruit just to kick his core Diagnosis should broadcast himself on TLC…With all of his ‘junk-wars’* NICE TRY, BUT COULD BEEN WORDED BETTER TO HIT HARDER Ask this whore to suck your dick…seriously, do it, he just might will… “RV’S Most Hetero?” Click + Drag your mouse under his name – looks like he blue his title. PRETTY NICE CLOSER.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~# tHIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BOTH WERE CONSISTENT WITH PUNCHES BUT OVERALL DUE TO BETTER MULTIS AND HARDER HITTIN POUNCHES, DIAG GETS MY VOTE. NO HATE. RTF SO I DONT HAVE TO DQ THIS VOTE :thumbup: |
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This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
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Voted For: Diagnosis
I think that Diagnosis got this battle because i feel that Diagnosis came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Diagnosis got it they were used effectifely and were on point Gongshow. u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Diagnosis good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Diagnosis and flow and structure i'll give to Diagnosis. V/Diagnosis There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
dick riding douche bags. lets get this closeddddd..
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Voted For: Gongshow.
Afraid of getting fucked, Diag probably started to battle in safe mode But I’ve got ‘Bone’ goin’ down quicker than RV in attack of the clones* Lol nice personal You couldn’t moderate a broken home in one of Tim Allen’s build-offs Because your ideas are never ‘for-word’ like Apple versus Microsoft Decent Can’t stop me bitch, my words will imprison your mind like oxygen cells And then I’ll have this fag’s lips swellin’ quicker than this collagen sells Decent I’ll spit your pit’s to hell, watch me skin this fruit just to kick his core Diagnosis should broadcast himself on TLC…With all of his ‘junk-wars’* Ok Ask this whore to suck your dick…seriously, do it, he just might will… “RV’S Most Hetero?” Click + Drag your mouse under his name – looks like he blue his title. Decent closer VS Im battling a nine year old ,and he's a supposed O.G? How you Origional when you on rapverse,And a wanna be Emcee.? Poor opener Your just like ever other newb on this site... Always going after vets.. But like everyone else , you lose and next thing ya records reset... Ok filler though Take the lose like a man , but shyt what kinda name is GongShow? You Suck Down low, and you like 'Gang Bangin'so i turn this bitch into a dutch Hoe... Ok Let me guess , you look as homo , as the cat in your sig..probably worse... But ya ass couldnt be an origional Gangsta ...Cus you on rap-verse!... Naw man weak after a too similar bad concept Now u fake so gon is always getting exposed more than the last 5 mins,of a scobby doo show Cus im that metelling kid... that just gave you a lost so lets exposed this john doe... Ok cutting off your thoughts so its hard for"S'Say to say how u truely feel" without strep throat durin pologram exams Cus this homo ass will always be a no weight...even if i measured him in grams!... Lol decent Punches - Gong Personals - Gong Flow/Structure - Gong Amusement - Both Metaphors/Similes - Both(in an abdundant of) Overall - Gongshow Decent battle Please vote unbiasedly on a battle in my sig with similar voting criteria please Stay up 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Diagnosis
bothu fuckers where wack as fuck i mean horrible i see rapjunkies is the only site left with real fuckin text heads i mean damn i feel like dissin both u u stupid mother fuckers for this wack shit..how the fuck u 42 n 4 an du cant even put together a decent bar..and gong show is wack but hes better than diags wack ass so im go with G yall ned to step yall fuckin gam euyp man ..--------------- 4 life man!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Diagnosis
my bitch is back lol j/k checkin the pollz...........
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you're 'wack'...not only did you vote for the wrong person, you're 0-3 and don't even know how to provide adequate feedback. dork. |
This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
Gong took this one..
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Voted For: Diagnosis
flow-structure=Gongshow.Diagnosis....ur verse was all over the place.Next time...write it like how gongshow had it.Just hurt to look at it. multis-Gongshow since diagnosis didn't have any punches-gongshow cause Diagnosis was really unoriginal.All he spoke about was the kid's age.Nobody had werdplay or metas.But I'll give it to Gongshow.Next time,both of you,try to actually put some punchlines in it. Vote-Gongshow(vote in the link below or this dq'd) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795 |
Voted For: Gongshow.
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Gong show drops it. Win goes to King Havoc/ battle open for longer than 21 days
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