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M-Eazy 05-26-05 09:27 PM

ackrite vs M-Eazy
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshitting

3-0=KO




Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 09:57 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 05-26-05 09:38 PM

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:38 PM.

System 05-26-05 09:38 PM

M-Eazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:38 PM.

M-Eazy 05-26-05 09:53 PM

Aight, yo...Quick Spit. 30, but I need 15...


When RV decides whose hot you at the bottom of the pot
I’ll kill you before I son you, like my name was Scott *
U couldn’t spit hotshh, if you were tha man himself**
And you comfortable with failing, cause you defend ya self
Dissin you is too easy, like slut hoes on tha corner
You could be a vet, I’ll take ya spot like u was Kurt Warner***
Saying you could win me. Spf…that’s a PROBABLY NOT
I’ll shove a gat down ya throat so you could really down shots
This guys a wanksta…white witta du rag cap?
Even if yo knee-grows (negros), you still wont be black
So run and tell tha site, how quick my 5 votes coming
I’m tha bully in this verse, and I’m taking ya lunch money


Explainations:
*Scott Peterson-Killed his wife and unborn son
**Talking bout tha RV member, hotshh
***Kurt Warner, a veterain NFL player got cut for a 1 year player

AckRite 05-26-05 09:58 PM

...Listen Kid...

Brains You Dont Have...Either 'Jeans Onya Mind'...Or Ya Thoughts Jus Sag
M Suffers From Jet-Lag...Mad? His Pussies Ancient...Keep Fuckin Old Hags!
Told Him He Stupid...He Cried 4 A 'Shot Of Genius'...Got Einstein From Cupid
When Niggas Hear His Music.....They Cotton-Swab.....Ears Filled Wit Q-Tips!
M-Eazy aka Dickhead...Been Lame! Couldnt 'BEE-SMART' Wit A 'Buzz Brain'
He Lost His Senses Last Yr??.....No Wonder Ya Raps Dont FEEL Ashamed!
M I'm Serious!...Shits Dead Real....Compared 2 Me, You Really Have No Skill!
Eazy Your Diseased...If U Think U Signed....Must Be A Hypochondriac Deal!
Give Me A Reason Not To Smoke This Ho......Blatantly Dispose His Photos
Shit..I Drop Loads....Like 'Throat Submission'....Dis Fagget CHOKE-HOLDS!

EZ...


(1) Da Pussy He Gets Is Old....Ancient
(2) Niggas Dont Wanna Hear His Shit...So They Put Cotton In They Ears
(3) He Lost His Senses, He Cant FEEL...So He Cant Be Ashamed Of Himself
(4) Hypochondriac's Normally Think Somethings Wrong With Them, When In Reality Its Nothin....He Thinks He Got Signed 2 A Label...He Thinks Its True, Its Not
(5) Self-Explanatory...Use Ya Brains!

AckRite 05-26-05 10:01 PM

Son I'm Not White.......I'm Black LMAO.......Just Light As Fuck.......BS Personal

VOTE UP

Raining Waffles 05-26-05 10:21 PM

This was feedback posted for M-Eazy
 
checkin the pollz....................................

M-Eazy 05-26-05 10:21 PM

oh, well ya sig make you look white. Oh well. Who cares.

20 GraND 05-26-05 10:29 PM

Voted For: M-Eazy

This was actually a close battle, both had about the same amount of wordplay and lyricswise was close. M-eazy had the best flow of words, not too long of times. i didnt like the other dudes structure.. wif the ......... and random words in there just to rhyme, that kinda runied it for me. Id have to say m-eazy had better structure and "flow" for text.

Ackrite - 7/10
M-Eazy - 8.5/10

M-Eazy 05-27-05 10:44 PM

uppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

AckRite 05-28-05 03:45 PM

20 Grand's Vote Was Ass............But Fuck Bitchin...............Vote Up Oh & I CARE

I'm Not White...Period

CounTREE Jay 05-29-05 10:35 PM

Voted For: M-Eazy

First dude, you really sucked on this one man. I mean, you had bars that made completely no sense and were throwing in multis just like it was the cool thing to do for the moment, not to enhance the rap. both of you guys had madd self-glorification, but at least M-Eazy's shit was aight and had some fuckin' wordplay in it. This shit is a no-brainer, so don't make me do the whole breakdown, anyone can see other dude lost. If it's a problem, have strobe let a nigga know and i'll edit.

Vote: M-Eazy

M-Eazy 05-31-05 01:22 PM

uppin.......damn. I didnt kno i said that down shots line in here..thats why my other battle was DQ'd...fuck. oh well...uppin

M-Eazy 06-01-05 10:33 AM

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
ackrite 0 0%
M-Eazy 2 100.00%
Voters: 2. You have already voted on this poll

TeamOne 06-02-05 06:48 AM

Voted For: M-Eazy

When RV decides whose hot you at the bottom of the pot
I’ll kill you before I son you, like my name was Scott *
.... lo decent opener with the wordplay and meta, but its alil SG
U couldn’t spit hotshh, if you were tha man himself**
And you comfortable with failing, cause you defend ya self
..... aight, ok
Dissin you is too easy, like slut hoes on tha corner
You could be a vet, I’ll take ya spot like u was Kurt Warner***
... this bar was decent but not all that funny or hard hittin
Saying you could win me. Spf…that’s a PROBABLY NOT
I’ll shove a gat down ya throat so you could really down shots
..lol. nice line, funny, but i dont really feel that gangsta shit... but u only used it to get that punch out
This guys a wanksta…white witta du rag cap?
Even if yo knee-grows (negros), you still wont be black
... ehhh not reallu feelin this...... ive seen that "knee-grows" shit, and im not talkin about in another battle, just in general
So run and tell tha site, how quick my 5 votes coming
I’m tha bully in this verse, and I’m taking ya lunch money
.......weaknesss

u had a decent verse but i think u fell of at the end......... decent use of wordplay to make for a harder punch at the end. but u had a few that werer just thrown in there with no good setups or anythin, and some was a lil self-glorification, altho thats not too bad...

Brains You Dont Have...Either 'Jeans Onya Mind'...Or Ya Thoughts Jus Sag
M Suffers From Jet-Lag...Mad? His Pussies Ancient...Keep Fuckin Old Hags!
...... fake personal, ur shits alil stretched but good flow
Told Him He Stupid...He Cried 4 A 'Shot Of Genius'...Got Einstein From Cupid
When Niggas Hear His Music.....They Cotton-Swab.....Ears Filled Wit Q-Tips!
..... lol, thios was decent, i see potential
M-Eazy aka Dickhead...Been Lame! Couldnt 'BEE-SMART' Wit A 'Buzz Brain'
He Lost His Senses Last Yr??.....No Wonder Ya Raps Dont FEEL Ashamed!
...... nah, not feelin this bar, coulda been worded better
M I'm Serious!...Shits Dead Real....Compared 2 Me, You Really Have No Skill!
Eazy Your Diseased...If U Think U Signed....Must Be A Hypochondriac Deal!
..... lol, this was pretty creative and decent
Give Me A Reason Not To Smoke This Ho......Blatantly Dispose His Photos
Shit..I Drop Loads....Like 'Throat Submission'....Dis Fagget CHOKE-HOLDS!
ok closer..... it was the best worded bar of ur verse

i see some potential for u to be real good but u needa find some personals and harder punches to throw in there to get that "ohhhhh!" effect from ur verse........ right not u just have bars with alotta metas and shit, but with no hard hittin punch or personal to finish it off

V/M-Eazy

M-Eazy 06-02-05 10:12 AM

3-0=KO...this shit is ova...Good battle ack..Stay up homie!


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