pictureperfect2 vs RobKilla
 

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10 lines house rulez
yo im postin my verse str8 off, so u prolly got yours done too by now so drop as soon u see this.

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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:41 PM.

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past

RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 07:09 PM.

u silly boy...
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?

sorry it took so long to post

Voted For: pictureperfect2




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RTF pp2 on one of my battles..
or this vote
will get removed
^^^
haha i'll return it cuz it was an honest vote and thats what i do, but if u'd can really do that your a fuckin dill weed

hey picture... what is E.F. ???
u said cats in EF know why my name is scratched... ps man... im not 15 ...
i'll go get some votes man....

This was feedback posted for RobKilla
 

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

uppin this
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^^^ e.f () elevated frontlines... and i thought u was born like 88 or sumin, guess my math is bad.

Voted For: RobKilla

pp2:
oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
^^WHUT R U TRYIN DA SAY HERE I REALLY DIDN'T GET IT...VERY WEAK OPENER
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
^^^U CONTRADICITED YA SELF CUZZ U SAID IN MY BATTLE DAT GAY'S LINES R WACK SO Y U R U SAYIN 1?
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
^^^COUNT IT & TALENT DONT RYHME...STEP YA GAME UP
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
^^^LOL...WOW DAT SOUND SO FUKKIN CHILDISH..WHEN R U GONNA SPIT A HOT BAR???
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
^^^WACK ASS CLOSER...SELF GLORFICITAION

SERIOUSLY U A NO HOTT LINE EVERY 5 BAR AVERAGE..U BEEN ON DIS SITE 2 LONG DA BE SPITTIN LIKE DIS FAM

robkilla:
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
^^YA 1ST LINE WAS 2 LONG FAM...SECOND LINE WAS OKAY
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
^^^AGAIN YA SECOND LINE WAS VERY STRETCHED
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
^^DECENT
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
^^^LOL GOOD PUNCH
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
^^I AINT GET IT FAM...

V/ROBKILLA..DIS BATTLE WAS WEAK AS FUKK BUT ROB PULLED IT OUT HE HAD A FEW DECENT LINE DESPITE HIS STRUCTURE..PP2 I DONT KNOW WHUT 2 TELL U FAM JUST STOP RAPPIN CUZZ U REALLY AINT GETTIN NO BETTER

haha, not too suttle of a hate vote... but nice try bitch... well i know the type of person u are... winnin internet battles mean more to you then being a honest person... i know i won this battle so i dont really care.

aye PP2... are u gonna get that vote removeD? i mean, i dont wanna RTF if its just gonna get removed

^^^what?........... uppin anyway.....................

Voted For: RobKilla


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Voted For: pictureperfect2

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
6...LoL!! nice concept and good punch here, nice opener.
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
7...wordplay was nice, at first i thought you was calling him talented, but then i read again, nice punch.
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
5...not feelin this line.....rhymin is off a touch.
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
6...decent punch, a good concept with the 9 to 5 shit.
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
5...not feelin this, talkin about you getting BJ's was kinda gay.

OVERALL: 29/50


u silly boy...
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
5...ok personal....not really feelin the setup to the punch though, it was kinda weak.
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
4...this was gay, that whole pussy concept was really wack and childish.
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
5...too basic to be real hard hitting.
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
5...ok concept, not really used as an affective punch.
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
6...finally a decent punch, i was feelin the 2nd line on this, first was kinda wack.

OVERALL: 25/50


ok drops from both....
picture came more consistent...
had some good concepts for punches and used them well, flowed nicely, personals were on point, some ok wordplay in there but still cud be a little better....
rob was consistent, not hard hittin with the punches though, had that nice closer, but mostly you were either too basic or just no real punch in ya bars.....

V/ - pictureperfect2

RTF!!! on the marv, stanza, or daubs battle.....links in my sig..

Voted For: pictureperfect2

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'

DECENT ENOUGH OPENER

avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up

NICE PERSONAL, WAS FEELIN IT

u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it

NOPE, NICE FLOW IN SET UP, BAD PUNCH.

so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?

HAHAHA NICE ONE...

im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past

YEAH, PLAYED CONCEPT BUT STILL HIT.

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ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does

OK OPENER, NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH.

U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"

NICE WORD/NAME PLAY,M GOOD PUNCH.

but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness

NOPE, BAD CONCEPT AND PUNCH.

God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins

YEAH OK....

girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?

MEH, OK CLOSER I GUESS.

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OVERALL PP2 GETS MAH VOTE FOR STAYING MORE CONSISTANT WITH PUNCHES AND BETTER PERSONALS.
ROB YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT BUT THE ONLY DOPE PERSONAL/PUNCH WAS THE PURFECT LINE.

NO HATE

Voted For: pictureperfect2

RobKilla - nice verse..good personal with the opener..i like the wordplay with the puurfect line..very creative..u had good punches in ur verse..everything flowed well and ur structure was cool.....7/10




pictureperfect - u had a nice verse as well..ur opener was very creative..that line killed him..the next bar was a very good personal..i liked how used that against him..ur closer was a bit weak though..but i think u won, only by a point.....8/10




pictureperfect wins!!!!!

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
^^ok, but i wasnt feeling the person, didnt connect
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
^^seen this in cyphers/tc/wack.....
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
^^weak, stretched bad ..
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
^^decent, didnt connect well thou
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
^^decent, but it didnt connect well.
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overall your verse was consistent but lacked proper wording
n hard hitting punches towards your opponent, a played concept was the purfect line/pussy..blah, it wasnt great anyhow...closer was ok, nothin special in this verse to be honest homie...
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oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
^^decent, feeling the concept
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
^^ok, not feelin it much thou
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
^^forced ryhme scheme...ok, punch
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
^^lol,...this had releventcy to me considering ive seen that line"purfect"b4
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
^^ok, but setup n punch were irrelevant to each other
keep the concept similar for your punches......
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overall i was feeling a couple bars more then robkillas
this battle can honestly go either way cuz you both came
equally as good/bad....some stuff was plain boarderline wack
but some was a good personal...both need wordplay n better nameplays..

ups............................................... .......

Voted For: pictureperfect2

RobKilla

ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
Pictures blowing up doesn't have anything to do with him. When you attempt a personal you have to make it relevant.. 4/10
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
This is just a statement. Why did your set up, not set up your punch? Make the first line set up the punch, yours didn't set up shit. And, then your punch was just a statement. You attempted to make a personal, but it was worded horribly.. 3/10
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
This was another statement, and another set up that had nothing to do with the punch. Saying there's no method to his madness doesn't connect at all. You are just saying shit. You need to re word your shit into punches and not just saying random stuff.. 3/10
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
This concept was decent, but it's like you forced it a little. In your set up you should have worded it a little differently, but the concept was still decent.. 6/10
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
Yeah, your set up still had nothing to do with the punch, but your punch was just a statement. You need to word it differently yo. The concept was average at best, but it could have passed as good if you would have worded it differently.. 4/10

Overall - 20/50

Pictureperfect

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
This was wack. The concept is played. If you're going to talk about shooting him you need to add in a little wittiness.. 3/10
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
Lmao. This is the best punch I've seen in this battle yet. Good concept, good wording.. 8/10
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
This shit is played. Talking about how high he can count? That shit isn't very good yo.. 4/10
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
Uhh.. This concept is a little played.. you worded it differently though, so it's pretty average.. 5/10
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
This was wack as fuck and you know it.. 2/10

Overall - 22/50

Vote - Pictureperfect