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The Revelation vs Anamosity
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 05-28-05 at 08:00 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 08:21 PM.
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Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt, Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account! He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID, Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18! Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it, Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did. 1st bar- He lived with his mom till he was 18+ and he wanted my account on RB cuz it was from July. 2nd bar- ID was one of his names, I taught him how to write topicals. Last punch is easy enough. 3rd Bar- Easy enough If you think something doesn't rhyme say it out loud with accents on the end. Don't understand? Don't vote! Vote honest or not at all. :thumbup: Px |
Anamosity has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 09:13 PM.
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The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification' His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle 60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name Ya Not Hott Like Matches.........Even Though Your Hair Color Match It* This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet Release A Gas Bubble & Light A Match And You Still Can't Spit Flames You Garbage Kid, In All Your Text Battles All I Saw Was You Rip Lames Can't Battle A Real Vet, Kid I've Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins I Hear You Like Soccer........Cuzz You Got Balls To Your Head And Shins Your Text And Sig Making Skill Is Relevant Kid......Cuzz The Both Suck You Should Stop Now For I See Your Work Get Taken By Trash Trucks I Hear You Got Chick Problems & That's Just On Your Net Connection You Got 4000 Post Bin Here Since July......And Still Ned Vet Protection Bitch Learn How To Spell.....Exponent Always Catch An 'L', It's To 'Easy' * His Girl Said It's Over, So He Got On His Knees Begging Don't Leave Me This Prick Juggle Balls Like 'Tha Q' If You Notice His Name Say's & Reps So He Joined Sigfried And Roy In Las Vegas........And Filmed Up Gay Sex* This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy* Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary *He's Got Red Hair *He Lost To A Kid Name Leazy Who's 3-5 Sigfried And Roy In Las Vegas There Gay And There Together *Fairy Is Like A Faggot |
I really need to read the rules on battles.... -_-
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Voted For: Anamosity
The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification' His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation —5, decent opener, could’ve been a little harder in the 2nd though I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle 60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial —7, 1st line was a good persona, the whole punch was pretty decent Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name —3, average.. felt like this one was pretty weak overall – I didn’t want to do your whole verse, since The Rev. only didn’t 6.. which was wack, but overall u had a pretty decent drop… from those 6 lines that I just did.. 15/30 Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt, Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account! —6, good persona on him, punch was pretty decent He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID, Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18! —5, 1st line was weak, but the 2nd was nice Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it, Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did. —3, not feeling this one, even though it’s a persona overall – too bad u didn’t come as long as Wall Street did.. would’ve been a good battle, but u didn’t so u came a little wack in this battle, even though all thru ur verse was all personas.. but the last one, was wack to me, just didn’t seem to come hard enuff for that.. but it was an aight battle.. 14/30 *note the scores doesn’t matter cuz Wall Street would’ve had more than 15 if I did his whole drop.. but W.S. came harder in this battle.. no hate ..1 |
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Voted For: The Revelation
Yo Revelation, Iight Dawg Yo Verse Wuz Short n Sweet Homeboy, Rite 2 Da Point Wid Da Personalz, Real Nice Dawg, Aint A Line I Wuznt Feelin' & Do They Say Itz Quality Not Quanitity, Vote/ The Revelation Wall U Had Some Good Rhymez Dawg, Flow Wuz Flawless, Good Punz 2, Wordplay Culd Ov Been Better, U Had Sum Played Concepts 2, An Cuz U Used So Many Linez, There Wuzza Few Fillers, Maybe U Shuld Ov Stuck 2 Revelations Idea & Juz Go Swort n Sweet Wid It, Good Job Yo, Yall Bought It Raw, Hot Shit Holla@Da Link Below Plz, Drop A Vote, Da Battle Iz Whack, It Wuz Mah First Battle, But All Da Mo Reazon 2 Get It Closed! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943 |
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................How the hell did I get a vote? |
EZ.............Hiz Verse Wuz Alot Ov Played Concepts, Nuthin 2 Personal Frum Him Neither, Juz Bcuz He Haz Alot Ov Rhymez Dosent Make It Better, Read My Explanation & Return Da Vote
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Fag Boy That Was Hate Shit Get Our Of Here...................
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Voted For: Anamosity
I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle ^^liked, but not very hard hitting This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet ^^just decent This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy* Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary ^^be better if u said his career... but decent concept rev- Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it, Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did. ^^dencet wordplay and punch, but a lil self glorification, and i hate that shit. vote-wall for more lines that i felt... return the favor...link... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634 |
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I had more than a closer but whatever. I'm gonna return the favors I owe today. |
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Chea Chea 2005 Nigga Let's Get It Close This Year Though............
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Voted For: Anamosity
the revelation: Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt, Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account! ^^^VERY WEAK OPENER...WHO CARES IF U BEEN ON DID SITE FOR LIKE 8 YEARS He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID, Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18! ^^^^^LMAOOO...SINCE WHEN DID ID & 18 RYHME...EVEN WITH A ACCENT DIS SHIT DONT RYHME Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it, Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did. ^^^^WAIT WAIT...HAD IT...HOW YA GIRL DID...LMAOOOOOO DAT SOUND SO FUKKIN NEWBISH...Y DID U EVEN TRY DA BATTLE IF IT AINT A TOPICAL ima make it fair and just vote on 6 of his lines 2 anamosity: The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification' His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation ^^DECNT/PERSONAL I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle 60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial ^^^WEAK Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name ^^^UHH OKAY......IM NOT VOTIN AGAINST REVELATION MORE THA IM VOTIN 4 ANAMOSITY...CUZZ DAT NIGGA VERSE LOOK LIKE HE TYPED IT WEARIN A BLIND FOLD HE DIDN'T HAVE NO PUNCHLINES...JUST 1 WEAK PERSONAL |
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Voted For: Anamosity
The Revelation 'Change His Name' So Much He Lost Is 'Identification' His Punches Don't Exist Like Paraplegics Jumping & That's Revelation ^^wasnt feelin this opener, punch didnt connect I'll Leave This Kid Laying Around..........Like His Sig, Call Him A Circle 60 Seconds Of Fame Is Up.... Left It Short Term Like A Infomercial ^^nah, this was weak Like Ciara's Sex Change, The Doc's Will End Up Patching-His-Frame Golden Dayz Is At An End Man, His Condition Is Matching-His-Name ^^decent Ya Not Hott Like Matches.........Even Though Your Hair Color Match It* This Faggot Couldn't Drop A Tight Verse If You Came With A Ratchet ^^simple, setup was good but punch lacked Release A Gas Bubble & Light A Match And You Still Can't Spit Flames You Garbage Kid, In All Your Text Battles All I Saw Was You Rip Lames ^^??...punch was worded wrong...hurt the bar Can't Battle A Real Vet, Kid I've Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins I Hear You Like Soccer........Cuzz You Got Balls To Your Head And Shins ^^decent, worded a little off but its ok Your Text And Sig Making Skill Is Relevant Kid......Cuzz The Both Suck You Should Stop Now For I See Your Work Get Taken By Trash Trucks ^^simple again I Hear You Got Chick Problems & That's Just On Your Net Connection You Got 4000 Post Bin Here Since July......And Still Ned Vet Protection ^^nah, thats weak, vet protection..?..lol Bitch Learn How To Spell.....Exponent Always Catch An 'L', It's To 'Easy' * His Girl Said It's Over, So He Got On His Knees Begging Don't Leave Me ^^nope,...wack This Prick Juggle Balls Like 'Tha Q' If You Notice His Name Say's & Reps So He Joined Sigfried And Roy In Las Vegas........And Filmed Up Gay Sex* ^^wasnt feelin it This Kid's RapVerse Career Aint Going No Where..........Just Face-It-Fairy* Your Flow Is Like An Parked Car Running...............It Remains Stationary ^^decent punch . overall you had 2 slightly decent bars, you gotta work on your delivery n creativity.concepts were for the most part simple n had very little personal/punches that were effective.. wording fell off in a few areas but verse was consistent other then that...you need wordplay n better personals... Self esteem suffered, sorry Isaiah but even the Bible leaves ya in doubt, Only reason he is an original RB member, is because he wanted my account! ^^decent, but stretched,, ok punch thou He took every account I had to try and hide his true ID, Getting taught topicals and living with his mom till he’s over 18! ^^ok, ryhme scheme was fucked here, dont matter how you say it, it just doesnt work, sorry, punch was personal but not creative. Battling everyone on RV, yet your record is 1-0, guess you almost had it, Left ya broken and pathetic just like how ya girl did. ^^ nah wasnt feelin this, punch was wack.. . overall, shorten ya bars, stay away from dissing your girl through a girlfreind or weak personals such as the 18 thingy thats not a diss fam, its a lame statement that has no real bearing in a text battle..get some wordplay in your verses. work on your concepts n connecting your punches bettter. . overall i gotta go with wall street for the simple fact alot of his verse was better written n had better delivery.. . no hate fam.... |
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Voted For: Anamosity
Yo lol words cant describe how one sided this battle is........but good drops nun the less..... . . . The R.- come on dog 6 lines?? 6 LINES?....any way i think you had a good peice here other than the last bar you were doin great....we dont see you battlin alot anymore and its good to see you on the Lines again......witch is more than what i can say for ma self...and i think i really dont need to dicekt it cause this was pretty one sided.....but any way but anyway good peice.. . . Wall St.-well there isnt much to say other than Holy Crap you over whelmed him........good drop fo real...and again this was pretty one sided.....so i gotta give it to St. . . Both Holla on AIM! |
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