KhAoZ ThEoRy vs One M.B.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-01-05 at 06:45 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-05 06:46 PM.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-05 06:47 PM.

Dawg, Why U Wantin ''Dread Extensions''..U Already Got A ''Big Head''*
Ur ''From: Heaven''...So Now U Have Da Rite 2 Disrespct Da Dead?!**
I Saw Wat U Said, U Honestly Believe Peepz Gon Pay 4 Ur Rhymez?
Throwin 2 5 Cents In A Wishin Well Iz Da Only Tyme U ''Drop Dimez''
Addicted 2 RV Money, Askin 4 Billions, But Ur Da ''Realest Around''? [huh]
Wat ''Cat''...Act ''Intellectual''? But Really..u Dont Kno HOW STUPID U SOUND!***
I Saw Yo Tutorialz, Dawg Itz Plain 2 C, G-Dat U Have No Skill
Been Here 4 Years, Elevation Izza Long Process...But We Waitin On U STILL
Keep Walkin, Ya' Lines Aint Str8 Lyke A Drunk Trynna Stumble & Stagger
U Never Even Touched ''Purple Haze''
& If U Met Ya Idol, He'd Only Wanna Stab U Wit ''Dolly Dagger''****
Feel Da Jagger Ov Her Blade, Peirce Ya Skin, U Aint Floatin Round My Way
Lyke A Shark Wit No Fin, In This Part On Da Deep Blue Sea U Gets No PLAY!
Ur Sinkin, Rhymez Iz Stinkin, Frum Da Smell, Only Tyme ''Ur Shit'' Iz Out Ya Mouth
Cut Thiz ''Birds Wings'', But Itz Iight He Already ''Nests Down South''[australia]
Take-a-seat-bee, U Aint ''Sprayin'' Nuthin..Even Get Mad @ Graffitti!*****
Wit'da Rite Buttons I'm Pushion, I'll Hand U A Cushion, & U Still ''Shy On'' Beatin-Me
One ''M.B''..I'll Stick a Knife 2 Ya Shoulder, Soldier Then U Can Be a ''KNIGHT''
Pearly Gatez? Naw, Da Closet Room Bulb Iz Hiz Idea Ov ''Cummin 2 Da Light''



Few Explanations=
*=He Made A Thread About How ''Cool'' Dreads Are+he thinks he somthin special[big head]
**=He Called Aaliyah a Transexual [disrespctin da dead]
***=He Tries 2 Drop Intellectual Comments 2 Make Himself Look Better All Over Da Lyricist Lounge Threads
****=Jimi Hendrix Hazza Song Called [dolly dagger] & Da Next Line Iz Leading On Frum Da Jimi Sig
*****=He Made A Threasd About How Pissed Off Da Graffitti Game On Da PS2 Makes Him lol

Good Luck One M.B, No Hate Cuz I Respect U

Voted For: One M.B.

v/omb

he has like some better stuff and shit
you know

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^fool -_-

get that deleted, unless you thought it was well explained.

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polsssss....................

khaoz be goin for the big fish!!!

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Damn One M.B Nobody Iz Voting. Wat Da Hell Iz Wrong Wid Deez Pplz

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I know man its fucking annoying. You get like a billion people like "y0 y0 ch3kkin da polezzzzzzzzzzzzzz" when theres nothing to fuckin check...

grr -_-

lmao at the newbie lang.

i couldnt vote, we we crew at the time.
get me.

hahahahah True True! Why ''Check Da Polls'' Wen Yall Suckers Can VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[check da pollz>gay as elton johns dirty draws]

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Voted For: One M.B.

MUTHAFUCKIN SICKNEESS, that was hot M.B. that was def hot. Khaoz u were sick wit it there, but M.B. got u on this one.

Khaoz: Youre flow was hot, punches hit hard,m I was feelin, and I didnt really see any flaws apart from it seemed like bits of it were jus added in as fill ins.

One M.B. - This was sick, great drop, kept me laughin the whole way through. Great battle verse IMO got khaoz beat.

No denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
I mean damn ya weak…I seen games’a badminton with more balls than you,

i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, but I didn't think you was leadin the group

Makin ya bleed from ya tooth, down like dawn, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall
Shafted…………………… you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..

Best bits there, RTF WITH MY BATTLE WITH MURDZ

Ok, Thanx 4 Da [honesty?] Upping 4 More Votes Pplz!

Voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Voted For: One M.B.

yes, i definately think OMB took this one.

khaoz: you came out with personals, which is good, but they were weak and poorly worded, so they weren't that good at all. the punches you attempted, were very poor, i've actually read alot better from you. nothing really stood out here at all, just work on creativeness and wordplay, because you had decent concepts, just did not pack anything to back up the punch. keep up though.

OMB: pretty nice verse, yes, not really any personals, but the punches made up for them. creative, witty, and flowed perfect. a little self-glor though, but meh, was not that big of deal, you still owned in this one.

v/OMB, for harder punches. rtf.

Voted For: One M.B.

your rhymes r tight bro.....slik flo is ma name....bout to make KhAoZ ThEoRy go back to his mamma looking upon shame

Voted For: One M.B.

Alright i think One Man Band got this shit here... heres how imma break it down... IM NOT INCLUDING THE VERSES.. JUST THE EXPLANATIONS THAT CORRESPOND TO THE BAR.

OMB
1. Nice line... i would have changed the first part of it though, but the 2nd line of the bar was put together nicely... 7/10
2. Haha.. last line was good... first line has nice multis... 8/10
3. Good line.... if yeh dont get it.. badminton = not played with a ball.... 8/10
4. It's waldo... but i could see the intention. 6/10
5. Not bad line.. a good punch i must say.. hit nice 8/10
6. Played bar man.. phatter & puking... played a lot.. 4/10
7. hahaha nice line.. worded kinda weird.. but works.. 6/10
8. eh... not really feelin it much.. but it works..... 6/10
9. if this is ur closer.. it didnt hit as hard as i expected... but works with ur entire verse.. 7/10

1. Not feelin the line....kinda personal.. but really didnt hit that hard to me.. 7/10
2. Just no... first of all 2 5 cent coins does not make a dime.. it makes 10 cents.. not the actual dime coin.. therefore it just went downhill from there... wording was messed on this line... 5/10
3. Urrm not feelin it 100%... i see the concept but the working just didnt work for me.. like i know what ur doin but it just wasnt thrown together properly 6/10
4. Doesnt work.. punch doesnt hit hard because OMB has elevated.. and his tutorial is good... soo if it was a personal.. its not hittin hard.. 6/10
5. Not bad.. not amazing like WHOA but it works in the verse... overall id give it a 8/10
6. Ummm.... not feelin it.. sharks with no fins... come on man.... 5/10
7. wordplay is ummm okay.. not as good as what i would expect from wordplay... work on that 7/10
8. Not bad.. worked with the multis etc.. overall its only worth a 7/10.. nothin really whoa to it
9. Closer was aight... nothin special.. wasnt feelin it much.. same liek OMB.. not feelin it..

Overall OMB is takin this.. his flow was nicer, he had nice multis and nice punched... Yeah Khaoz had some personals.. they werent hitting hard.. work on that man....

vote - OMB..


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^^^ Don't be gay and hate because i may have voted against you.. i gave you good imput on the battle.. its just my opinions... good luck...

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Alright battle!
Chekin pollZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LoL the reason why i didnt vote didnt wanna waste my time n shyt!(FOO!)just wanted to see if you losin!which i alreafy knew!(LoL)

uppin.....

I'll be returnin all ya favors when i get home tonight...

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Checking the polls, looks like a good battle.......

Ok, I Wuld Get Da ''Slik Flo'' Vote Removed, Homeboys And Asshole, But I Guess In Diz Case Defeat Iz Inevitable

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

both did a god job in this battle a very close battle alot of punches personals flows are both in a tight battle but my vote is gonna have to go to Khaoz though cuz i liked one of his lines the best one ofd the both verse in my opinion
"Addicted 2 RV Money, Askin 4 Billions, But Ur Da ''Realest Around''? [huh]
Wat ''Cat''...Act ''Intellectual''? But Really..u Dont Kno HOW STUPID U SOUND!***"
that line was the best so my vote goes to khaoz though it was a close battle that line just made me laugh so good job to both

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck, im not gonna lie. i was planning on voting against khaoz becausse he gets on my damn nerves, but one man band lol...he beat you.

Better personals, better punchlines....one m.b you used alot of self glory an my guess is...................you thought you could of used anny rhymes an you had him beat, i never would of imagined this ho beating one man band, but his verse was just more of a battle verse with better punchlines an this site claims personals are 60% of what you need in your verse an you had....none, one man band. thats a shame, and i hate to do this, i really do....but vote/khaoz theory, for fuck sake lol

This was feedback posted for One M.B.
 

....one-sided.....

Voted For: One M.B.


Dawg, Why U Wantin ''Dread Extensions''..U Already Got A ''Big Head''*
Ur ''From: Heaven''...So Now U Have Da Rite 2 Disrespct Da Dead?!**
^^eh, statin facts.punch was weak
I Saw Wat U Said, U Honestly Believe Peepz Gon Pay 4 Ur Rhymez?
Throwin 2 5 Cents In A Wishin Well Iz Da Only Tyme U ''Drop Dimez''
^^eh, played concept n no punch really
Addicted 2 RV Money, Askin 4 Billions, But Ur Da ''Realest Around''? [huh]
Wat ''Cat''...Act ''Intellectual''? But Really..u Dont Kno HOW STUPID U SOUND!***
^^lmfao, thats your opinion bro...not a diss
I Saw Yo Tutorialz, Dawg Itz Plain 2 C, G-Dat U Have No Skill
Been Here 4 Years, Elevation Izza Long Process...But We Waitin On U STILL
^^decent....but basic
Keep Walkin, Ya' Lines Aint Str8 Lyke A Drunk Trynna Stumble & Stagger
U Never Even Touched ''Purple Haze''
& If U Met Ya Idol, He'd Only Wanna Stab U Wit ''Dolly Dagger''****
^^decent...sig play
Feel Da Jagger Ov Her Blade, Peirce Ya Skin, U Aint Floatin Round My Way
Lyke A Shark Wit No Fin, In This Part On Da Deep Blue Sea U Gets No PLAY!
^^not feelin it..srry
Ur Sinkin, Rhymez Iz Stinkin, Frum Da Smell, Only Tyme ''Ur Shit'' Iz Out Ya Mouth
Cut Thiz ''Birds Wings'', But Itz Iight He Already ''Nests Down South''[australia]
^^wheres the punch man..?
Take-a-seat-bee, U Aint ''Sprayin'' Nuthin..Even Get Mad @ Graffitti!*****
Wit'da Rite Buttons I'm Pushion, I'll Hand U A Cushion, & U Still ''Shy On'' Beatin-Me
^^ok,...
One ''M.B''..I'll Stick a Knife 2 Ya Shoulder, Soldier Then U Can Be a ''KNIGHT''
Pearly Gatez? Naw, Da Closet Room Bulb Iz Hiz Idea Ov ''Cummin 2 Da Light''
^^terrible wording, ok concept.
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your biggest problem is your content
you drop bars that dont connect on any level
basically just putting statements about him dont
constitute as a punch.....n stop cappin all the 1st letters
of ya words, its really not good to read, especially cuz you stretch ya lines homie...pz.no hate

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whoa, which faggot i'm dissin? i forget, man you have ta forgive it,
you the so called gangsta stabbin on victims, wait, aint you avidly christian?
^^ok, forgive it..? wasnt feelin the falloff in flow but w/e
You call me a tyrant 'n shit, but I’m the illest with rhymin 'n spits
I don't need the votes when even my opponent is ridin my dick -_-
^^thats like your concept..ok, but stop using it..lol
No denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
I mean damn ya weak…I seen games’a badminton with more balls than you,
^^decent
Took up a callout now this cunts mine, and man, its crunchtime
Fuck Where’s Wally, this guys verses is like wheres the punchline?
^^thats nice...fresh...
this dude is a bore, a fake ass wanna be gruesome 'n raw,
Beat me with flow, wits and skill? Shit…hes never used 'em before!
^^nice, multi tourny exact structure...good shit omb
^^im dice'n a whore,so he cant talk shit, let alone write anymore........i still remember it...lol
my standard with rhymes has got ya bladder in strife,
guess i'm kinda like married women, 'cos i only get phatter with time
^^self glory....not feelin it
i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, but I didn't think you was leadin the group
^^decent, but thats another one of those concepts that are old
leavin ya mute, flows got more holes than whats been seen in a flute,
can think ya dope kid, but there's a difference between dreamin 'n truth..
^^nice
Makin ya bleed from ya tooth, down like dawn, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall
Shafted…………………… you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..
^^nice
I ain’t even take this serious, I got worser broads ta break
Cos in case ya didn’t notice……….. my only personal was fake -_-
^^no idea.........but closer was still decent..lol
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omb-good content for the most part fell off in a couple areas
stayed consistent with punches n ya vocab ect..was koo..
i was feelin ya verse more.......